That year, the young man came out from the vast snow-capped mountains with a sword on his back.
That year, the peach trees in the village survived the tribulation and soared.
That year, the storyteller turned the fairy world upside down.
Only by cultivating immortals, mortals can fight against heaven, earth, and all living beings in order to gain a chance of survival.
With the wooden sword in the palm of my hand, I ascended to the Immortal in the Sword.
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