Pirate*******

There are very few pirate fanfics that I can keep reading, really. I really love the heroine's character, and the other characters' personalities are also well portrayed. The outcome and process of the heroine's resistance to fate and development for Penglai are really well described, and the fighting scenes are also very well written. This kind of article is really rare (in One Piece fan fiction, at least I think). When I described the heroine's unwarm heart, I really felt deeply. There are also many characters in the guide (?). Unlike other articles that only have specific characters, there are even many supporting characters who have written about their love for the heroine. They are really detailed, and the last sentence (Come on, author!!! I love you, will you get married!!!)

The plot is a little slow and a little edgy? In the early stage, it felt like it was talking about the relationship with various organizations, and it was only in the later stage that it started to work hard. Only after the battle at the top can you get a glimpse of the main storyline. But the interactions between the characters are handled very well. The mutual growth and mutual redemption between him and Ace. The unique tacit understanding and stabbing between Lao Sha. Akainu and Kizaru accompany each other in their youth. The surrender after the battle on top of Marco really killed me! The temptation of the villain and the self-control of Joy in Dover are also very touching, but there is too little description. The red-haired man has the unique trap of a mature man, giving people the feeling that even though he is not exerting any force, he has everything under control. Mihawk feels a bit pity. I always supported him in the early stage, but in the later stage, I was unable to exert his strength. There should be more plots after Sabo reaches the main line. After all, the Revolutionary Army line is difficult to build. … By the way, can you add a Yizang [Adoration] Maybe because there are too many characters, some plots are a bit rushed. The heroine's character is nonsensical yet reliable, and those meaningless approaches in the early stages become usable chess pieces in her hands in the later stages. The important thing is that the supporting characters are also very vivid and worth watching.

All smells so good. You can see the author's literary background. There are many classical Chinese essays and poems. But sometimes I still get upset when I see the title "Xiao Le'er" (it's not derogatory). It seems that the transformation of the protagonist is also there, and the supporting characters are also vivid.

This article is so good that I am completely immersed in it. Why is there no such thing as a fairy tale? I admit that I have a tricky taste, but my wife's writing is so good! I read it in one go, only to find that the update was discontinued. When will you be back, Mrs. Wuwuwu?

The characters in it are not OOC at all, and the encounters between each character are very appropriate. The heroine is not the kind of super powerful and invincible being, but she is still very strong. She can fight anyone twice, and she has excellent escape skills. In the early days of Yule, there were some little "Buddhas" who had a cowardly aesthetic that they didn't want to offend, and they were dealing with all the forces. Then I was really frustrated! ! ! After being beaten, he finally started to fight back! Take a gamble and end up with Marco! Brother Ma, come on! You are the only foreign aid certified by Le except Penglai! But I feel like it might be Ace...

I didn't expect that Shanks would be the first one to win. Can you tell me if the ending is all-inclusive? Can people from the original world still be brought back? [I'm about to cry]

This is the first time I have seen a book that combines a lot of Western sailing elements and a dangerous and romantic adventurous gambler-style fandom in the context of One Piece with Eastern poetry and immortality culture. The drama is full of tear-jerking family love, and the interaction with the pirate characters is also well grasped. There is a sense of ambiguity with the male protagonists. The various original characters have distinct personalities and do not feel disconnected at all. The whole text is often interspersed with laughter, which is often touching at one moment and full of joy the next second. This is also very One Piece style. Although there are poems popping up all the time, they are all a stroke of genius, the icing on the cake, making people feel like "this poem applies here". The character and emotion of each character are well grasped. I really like this book! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] But the heroine gave it to Shanks for the first time. I always thought it was Mihawk who said it [thoughts]

It's so beautiful, and it also has Saab, which I love so much [KISS]

Super pretty! Every pairing has a CP feel, the heroine's character really pokes me, and the plot is not meaninglessly dragged out. After tying it up in one breath, there are only a lot of things I want to watch. I look forward to the follow-up Shura Field!

It's really, really beautiful, it's like the feeling of your heart beating faster inadvertently, and I really like my little sister, so cute, so powerful, so gentle, so great! Among pirate fanfics, I think it's very good, and the characters are well drawn. Trojan, Trojan, love you, big! !

The author's writing style is very good and his words are fluent. I especially like the world environment described by the author. It is really like the "painted fruit", with beauty and vitality drawn. Moreover, the character of the heroine is very interesting. I really feel that life with the heroine will not be boring!

The writing is really great, everyone's character is well grasped, and Yu Le is very lovable.

It's good to watch, hehe. I like the plot. It's my favorite type. Oh, the author, please hurry up and write. I have already finished listening to it.

This article is finished, thank you all for your likes and support. Because this is my first time writing, I don't have an outline, so I'm still very immature. Thank you again for your likes. By the way, I would like to recommend the new book "One Piece: Game Life" [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Yes, the heroine's character is very interesting, and the characters are relatively close to the original.

You can finish reading it smoothly. The disadvantage is that there is no all in! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] If there is a kind person who is willing to recommend All to fellow pirates, I would be very grateful~ [Sending heartfelt wishes]

What my wife wrote is a masterpiece! ! ! Everyone's character is captured so perfectly It took me an afternoon to read them all [shy]

It's beautiful. The author's writing is very good and the writing style is also very delicate. Suddenly I saw something different. It turns out that people can be so desperate when it's dark. It's beautiful. It's beautiful. I feel sorry for the heroine.

Ah ah ah, I like it😍😍Lao Mi

So interesting! ! Super pretty 👍

Awesome, super beautiful

It turns out that wc really has shares in Saab. I forgive you, five stars.

Does everyone have a side story of harmony and joy (Chi v Chi) Can the author please update it soon😘😘😘

I really love her, she and Ace are so good

It's just that the other male protagonists' love is too heavy and paranoid. Is it possible to have a spin-off for each of them or for all the members?

It's really nice, but the waiting is too hard

The writing is very good, but it looks a bit broken in some places. I don't know if it's a problem with the chapters or if it's not written. It's just that I was still doing this in the previous chapter, and then I went to do other things in the next chapter. But overall it's still good-looking. I like this type of heroine very much! !

The writing is so good, okay, this is my second love

It's so good to watch and it perfectly makes up for my thoughts on each character. The author is really great. She really writes the extras. Hahahahahahaha. Highly recommended.

It's been a while since I've seen a well-written fanfic, and I really like the plot.