Genshin Impact: My Adventures in Teyvat

The writing is really good, except for the emotional scenes which are a bit bad (daily life is a bit boring) In the exam, everything you write will be exposed? You can become your adoptive father directly

For the time being, this idea is not considered novel. The plot always feels forced, but the character design is still OK. There is no arrogant behavior, but it is quite satisfactory. Reply? What a load of excuses! I'm speechless. If you write it like this, why don't you give him a five-thunder rectification method from the beginning and develop it to the end? It's really jade. It makes me speechless. How can I put it? This ability development is very speechless. You might as well give it to Leifa directly. You don't have to conceive these abilities blindly. The plot is too watery and there are too many daily routines. Adventurers don't take risks. What the hell is Tiantianshui daily? The system is adventurous, but it doesn't write much about adventures. It always feels weird. Although it's your freedom to take risks or not. But it always feels like you are heading towards the south wall

Wow, the writing is quite good. I personally like Shen He very much 🥰

After looking at a few pictures, I feel that it is the Thunder Fruit. It is better to give the protagonist some lightning power, or fragments of lightning authority. The Thunder Fruit has been greatly damaged.

I think the writing is okay.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's pretty, I think

Are you planning to play master-disciple rice bowl?

There's been a book shortage lately, but it's quite interesting to read.

Okay, okay, okay.