Arknights: The One Who Walks Through Fire

This is the first book about Balrogs in Tomato. I also thought about this setting and wanted to write one, but I gave up because I didn't have time. Write it well, I'm optimistic about you.

Very excellent Zhouwen, very story-telling. The narrative writing style is usually gentle, and the description of the battle is usually relatively small. Most of the time it is a gentle narrative. Well, the protagonist's daily life and communication with others are very interesting and worth reading. If not, I might not be able to learn this. This kind of writing technique, maybe I am writing a novel now! This author writes very gently, but unlike other authors, unlike those harem novels, the male protagonist is like a stallion, either picking up girls every day, or on the way to pick up girls, and the battle is only described as crushing with force. Daily life is even more descriptive, the kind of person who blushes at every turn, which is a very unrealistic performance. Written by this author. There are no wrinkles at all. Although the main feature of Terra is not mentioned, and that is combat, this chapter does not describe much, but. The author should focus on daily narration. His narration style is very gentle and detailed. He may be an interesting and gentle girl. In short, such wrinkles are rare, and I can't see many of them on Tomato, because there is basically no money in writing articles on Tomato. And other novel applications are not available at all. Alas, it ends too quickly. If the author opens a new book, I will definitely be the first to support it. ｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

I think it would be better not to put this operator display in Chapter 2. Huh? Finished? Ah?

The writing is very good. Maybe it's because I didn't pay attention to the plot. I feel that many of the settings are original by the author, which is a bit messy. I hope the author can add a chapter to the setting in the future. Come on.

Really good, the author will keep working hard

It's a great Ark fanfic. To be honest, I think this book is the best among recent Ark fanfics. The emotional scene between the male protagonist and Wei Cao is well written [laughing crookedly]. The overall impression is very good. The author must continue to work hard [Sending my heart]. It's too short and not enough to read!

It's very beautiful, but why do you have to write Frost Star to death? 😢

A very excellent porridge article, and it is also a very rare article that uses the first person as the main point of view. It is worth looking forward to 💕

I feel fine so far, no big problems Let's change it to five stars. I think this book is considered gold here (6 to 9.5 Are all gold mining in shit mountains. Six points are either cars or real shit and are not as good as it. Starting from 9.5, It is almost gold.

Okay, okay, the current chapters are good. Please support the author. I hope to see more stories about Kureios, Lafsyni, and this land. —— Xiyang Dusk