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Nowadays, the control is strict. No matter it is in the comment area or in the Q group, you will be banned, so you can see what you want! It would not be good if the book disappeared for such a trivial matter! [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It's good, but there is one drawback. In every world, the male protagonist's sons and daughters reject the male protagonist as his father. There is no world that does not reject and resent the male protagonist. What I want to say is that it is normal for the male protagonist's top rich man to have several women. Besides, his women had bonuses for ordinary people, and they followed the male protagonist because he was rich and handsome. As a result, their children actually resented the male protagonist for having many families. The male protagonist also left them a lot of property to last for several lifetimes. To be honest, there is no such thing as resentment and rejection by children in reality. Yes, unless they are super capable and can earn more than the male protagonist, everyone should please this father and hope to share more of the property, so that they will not be like the situation in this book where every world excludes the male protagonist and ignores him [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Come on, your writing is okay, but sometimes the name of the pig's feet is wrong.

It's much better than most, at least there's no plot to abuse the heroine. Overall, it's pretty good. It's just that there's only one Ode to Joy, which feels a bit monotonous. Waiting to die and traveling to other worlds doesn't allow the system to integrate multiple worlds. It depends on how the author arranges it. Come on, come on, come on!

It's not bad. Although each world has multiple female protagonists, each world is completed separately, and there is no integrated film and television, which makes it less confusing. There are no tasks, just follow the protagonist's will to narrate the story. Single female protagonists are sometimes good, so you can consider them.

It's quite good among Tomatoes. I hope the author will continue to stay in the city and not go to some supernatural place.

It's not bad. Goldfinger is not exciting but it's useful enough. It's good that every world has a perfect ending. You can live together for a lifetime and you don't have to worry about it if you go to another world! But where is the overworld? The skills are still lacking!

It's pretty good. The city will always be the city. It's not as messy as other novels with all kinds of fantasy and immortality.

I skipped chapters and finished reading. How should I put it, the writing is really average 😂 Of course, a new author can understand. In fact, the author is quite suitable for writing that kind of daily writing, but I don't know if the author's writing style can hold up. For example, if you open a restaurant abroad, you may even start working part-time as a chef, and then later open your own restaurant. There is no need to write too much nonsense, just focus on the daily life of the hotel, grocery shopping every day, different customers every day, stories of regular customers, special dishes launched at intervals, going to Chinatown or Chinese supermarkets to ask if domestic specialties have arrived, various girls attracted by the protagonist, or applying for jobs, etc. It can also be the acquisition of a ranch, and various daily stories surrounding the ranch! It can also be an everyday story about running to an island and slowly cultivating immortality. Go fishing, go to the sea, save some money to complete the boat, go fishing in the sea, look for treasures, the girl will be attracted, or the protagonist will save you from drowning! This type does not need to think about the rhythm and ups and downs. The main thing is daily life and relaxation! [You taste it carefully] Okay, that's it. It's not easy to write a book, five stars for encouragement! Many female literary yyds! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The writing is lively. Fine. It looks comfortable. The writing and polish are a little weak. Others are pretty good. I can feel that the outline is very thoughtful. The author writes with care. Don't make it worse

I saw the latest chapter and I think it's okay and I can continue reading.

The writing is good, but many plots are simply cut out. You can change your mind in the later stage. You don't need too many heroines in each world. You can advance from urban, martial arts, martial arts, immortality, and fantasy. You can set a main world and other worlds at a ratio of 100. Do not pause and let her develop slowly. You can return to this world at any time. In the end, you open up a world, or the system rewards a small world for you to take over together.

Tomato already has a lot of unlimited streams, from urban to Chinese martial arts to supernatural, integrated urban, integrated martial arts. Urban dramas like yours written in one world and one world are a new track. I don't know if you can make money. Anyway, there must be something different from others.

The protagonist is the humanoid Teddy.

After reading the first volume, I still can't understand why Qu Xiaoxiao was taken in. The important thing is that she also gave birth to a child! (It is not introduced whether the child is black or white, black and white or colored)

To be honest, I originally thought the writing of this book was average, and the writing and plot were not very good, so I could only make do with it. But. The author's words suddenly made me feel. Why do you need so many requirements to read a novel? Doesn't matter if it's reasonable or not? Just feel good and that's it. Author's original words (This is also the theme of this book in the future. Take all the beauties and change everything you don't like. It's cool. Don't care if it's reasonable or not. Time travel is the most unreasonable.) In fact, the writing was quite good at the beginning, just to suppress the protagonist. I think this plug-in can be integrated into that kind of experience, for example, you can choose your own talents when entering a certain world. You can change your talent to another in the next world, but you will not inherit the abilities from the previous world. The author is afraid that the protagonist has too many abilities, which will affect the experience and make him invincible, leaving him with nothing to write about. Enter the world to select abilities. For example, choose the cooking talent. The author can focus on food in this world, give him a singing talent in the next world, and go directly to the entertainment industry, and give him a driving proficiency in the next world to go straight to drag racing. The plug-ins are different, the experience is different, and the content is also a bit fresh. (If you don't like the above, please don't spray it) No wonder the rating is a bit low, I can only say that this book is well written. It feels good or not, and it doesn't hurt either. It's just about writing about a scumbag, and he's not completely scumbag at all. It feels better than those written about stallions...

The emotional aspect was not handled well, and the author's emotional drama was not very good, which resulted in the overall evaluation of the book being a bit low. However, other aspects are still good. The author's writing is good, and the plot is not too bad. It is not too brainless. Although it is a good "Ode to Joy" novel

The author's writing is very good, with flesh and blood, and he is a practical person. Unfortunately, it is difficult to write social books nowadays. Just like what you wrote in your book, there is a huge gap between ordinary people with and without background, and it's the same in writing and speaking.

What's a little bit toxic is that when chasing a woman, it gives people the feeling of a sinister villain, but fortunately there is a happy ending after chasing a woman. It was exactly the farewell ending that I wrote last, which was very fragmented, but after reading it, I felt it was just right. There's no flimsy plot. I've learned some skills. It should be at 3.8-9 Stars. It's enough to relieve my boredom.

This is the best Ode to Joy short story I have ever read

The writing is very good, but there are too few updates every day. I hope the author will continue to create and it will get better and better.

To be honest, I only like Mr. Nice! The writing is very good, and it all conforms to my concept! The ending is okay too!

So short, so short, so weak

Thank you for writing, I love you.

After the little joy is over, let's have another one during the blizzard. It's best to have a single heroine. Although multiple heroines are also good-looking, so many worlds have passed and it's a bit boring. And isn't there a river crab master now? You can have a sweet love atmosphere. It's difficult to grasp the emotional experience of multiple women. Single love is still easy to express. Let's have some fine grain. Author I'm here to review again. Can you write about Elite Lawyers? I like Li Na in it.

The author greatly appreciates your proficiency in Chinese medicine, martial arts, computer programming and hacking. Useful in any world Can you please not accept them all? Just collect a few of the best from each film and television drama! There is no need to accept all obsessive-compulsive disorder

Good, good, following it

Damn, I really don't have taboos. I can eat everything.

Just look at the windy one, it's a pretty good setting, it depends on whether it's bad or not, if it's not bad it should be good

What's the use of this gold finger? Appeared once