At the Beginning of One Piece, You Get the Phantom Beast Devil Fruit

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It's very nice, but is it written in the first person? Most of the time, "I" is used. In some places, it is better to use the protagonist's name.

The plot is good and the characters are well established. The pace of the plot is too fast, which is different from other pirate novels. The first four or five chapters are one chapter. For someone like me who is used to other slow-burning pirate novels, it will be very uncomfortable. There are too few emotional lines and it is not complete enough. I was stunned for a while, but overall it is still very good. The only shortcoming of this book is that it is too fast-paced. I read the other books for two hours before I got out of Novice Village. This book has already become the Four Emperors. This may also be the characteristic of this book. I personally don't like the fast pace. Pirates are basically slow-paced. This book is still a bit uncomfortable, but it can be read in another style. This also determines that the score of this book cannot reach 9.0. After reading this book, overall it is good. There are many areas for improvement. I am looking forward to the author's next book.

To be honest, overall it's pretty good. The plot seems very relaxing and not so depressing. The protagonist is also very measured and doesn't look for trouble everywhere. Overall it's pretty good. It's just that the protagonist always stops practicing after a few months. Unlike before, he would practice for several years.

I sighed deeply. It is really difficult to read a book in which the protagonist is not invincible at the beginning and is also interesting. This book is worth recommending! To be honest, I have seen a lot of One Piece fanfics, but not many that are truly good and sincere, and this one is one of them! Speaking of the cat fruit, the phantom beast form of the beast, I am attracted by this. Even if I imagine myself going to the world of One Piece, the fruit I choose will definitely be yours! The characterization is very good and detailed, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and the growth of strength is traceable. This is all very good! At the end, Momonosuke also died, without any regrets, satisfied!

Very nice, but there are a few

I met a 30-year-old young woman online. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good. But she said it was fine and we were just friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She is not far from my city. We made an appointment. Fortunately, we met at a milk tea shop, and we didn't choose to meet someone we knew somewhere else. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have beauty functions. After all, there are many car rollovers online. But when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She looked much prettier in the photo, and she was my type. She also recognized me. I didn't know what to say. In order to break the embarrassment, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped up and down. After sitting in the milk tea shop for a while, we went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole process She was peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. After dinner, she held my hand when we walked out of the restaurant, and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi back. She insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update the next book to unlock the subsequent content.

Looks like a newbie, but not bad

Momonosuke died in the last chapter. There are three heroines. To be honest, the heroine configuration is very perfect. There is no need for emotional lines. [Laughing]

Okay, it's still good, although there are a few times and plots that don't match the original work, but minor flaws don't affect it. This kind of half-child plot is quite interesting, and the two time travelers are quite fresh. They meet old friends in a foreign land and have a phobia of lack of firepower. This is very Chinese. After all, it has been verified by history. This is the reaction to traveling to a dangerous world. The buffs are constantly stacked. The female protagonist is very real and more like a time traveler than the male protagonist.

OK, OK, OK! Say important things three times! This book is so good, why is it not rated 9? The protagonist is single-minded (to three girls), and the force value is also good! The important thing is that this is a world of pirates conquered by technology! I have seen many fruits, absolutely crushing overlords, and invincible systems! There are also... New directions that run through another world!

Super super super super beautiful

Come on, write faster, write more about fighting, don't be either business or business all day, okay? It's okay at first but not so good later, but I still give you a small five-star for the sake of being good in the early stage.

Although the length is not too long, it is well written and worth recommending. One thing I really like is Killing Im, killing him right away. I don't want other books to jump three or four times before being destroyed. It's really disgusting. Momonosuke's pit has also been filled. Five stars, it must be five stars [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, okay! ! ! ! !

So far, it looks pretty good

Overall, the writing is okay.

Well written, give it five stars

Very good, hope the author sticks to it.

Um! I can only give you 82 points for this book, and the rest will be given to you in the form of 666 [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Not bad. I finished watching it. I don't know if there are any extras.

The writing is good, but the main point is that the little life is dead. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Looks good and feels good

Good-looking but a little lacking

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Not bad, there are less battles and more daily life, you can check it out if you like it

Very good novel

Momonosuke must die, feel good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

No poking or poking, it's pretty good