Genshin Impact: in Order to Win the Dragon, I Sold Myself

It feels good, and the plot is well handled. However, what I am worried about is the female protagonist Disciple Feng. His emotional line is not handled well and it is easy to collapse. Basically, it can be seen that there is a sense of love. I hope the author will focus on this part of the plot. I have seen too many failed books. I don't want to put pressure on the author. I just hope the author can cheer up. I am writing this kind of review at once. It may be a bit offensive. Wang Haihan, I really look forward to the author's book with more original plots and better writing [Salute][Salute] Congratulations again to the author for becoming bigger and stronger, writing better and better, and his work is successful [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates]

I don't know how to put it, but it's just very comfortable to watch. Zhongli's old friends are all here, and he even found a wife; Mandrill and his brothers and sisters got rid of their karma; and finally he and Aping fished and bickered together. So much love [sending heartfelt] Author, cheers [blowing kisses]

I really like the warmth and healing power of an old married couple, but it's just too short. I finished it in two and three hours.

Although it is said to be like other novels, how can I put it? Get rid of the past fast food articles. This is a truly beautiful fan fiction. Just like myself who used to eat fast food lunch boxes, now I walk into a high-end hotel and slowly taste the delicious food. It was an emotion beyond words.

Among the original self-created characters, I feel it is the best I have ever seen. The writing style is very good, and I feel that the author has a lot of cultural heritage. The name is not from the template of a novel about cultivating immortals, and the plot looks very smooth. After reading the whole story, I still feel unsatisfied. The change of time is a god within a god, and I really like this subtle and strong atmosphere in the emotional description. It is much better than the brainless fool Bai Tian or the ignorant Riddler who fights for the knife... It is not a cliché way to make up for regrets, and every character is quite vivid. Although it has been a long time since I quit the original God, Liyue Port is still the most difficult and memorable place in the plot. The author will give it a big boost [please give me more updates]

There are appreciations and some personal opinions. First of all, I would like to express my appreciation: this is the most worthy of my recognition among the Genshin Impact fanfics. It doesn't have too many chapters to write only the emotional line, and it doesn't add a lot of ink to write irrelevant plots. It goes directly to the key points. If it is not a Genshin Impact fanfic but a stand-alone novel, it is completely qualified! [Top post] Secondly, let me talk about my personal opinion: the length of the chapter is about the appearance of the Traveler after the war in Kyria. When I read it, I felt weird (personal feeling) that the whole connection was far less smooth than before. What needs to be improved is that the previous large-scale description of the appearance of the Star and the Emperor was seen and heard, and suddenly they were forgotten hundreds of years later. Just mentioning a few names was a bit uncomfortable. (Personal opinion, for reference only) The whole book is already superbly written for me, keep up the good work! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's over... I want to say something, but I feel like I can't express what I say. The characters portrayed by the author are very perfect in my mind. Mr. Zhongli has gained happiness instead of wear and tear, and his friends have not passed away and they are all well. Everything is a steady stream, slow but sincere. [The author will update another one soon. I've read it all, I've read it all! ! ]

In my opinion, the heroine is a very perfect and rational immortal. The bond between him and the emperor is really like the love between immortals and gods, because of their companionship. Under the influence of mortals, I have all kinds of emotions. After reading this story, I can really feel that the heroine is really like a butterfly, and she has truly changed Teyvat. Some people may have mentioned those interesting conjectures, like some kind of logistics network, but in the author's book, Teyvat is indeed well integrated. Perhaps some people's tragedies are still difficult to save. After all, the heroine is just an immortal from Liyue. Judging from so many endings, it is already very good. There are indeed some plots and the ending that are a bit too hasty, but this story still gave me a lot of feelings and made me laugh a lot. So I give you five points, and I hope the author can create better works and fantasy worlds that make him intoxicated.

Overall, it's pretty good. The long-lasting and quiet relationship is really easy to relate to. The emotional line is so sweet and there are no knives. Liyue's old friend kicked all the lunch boxes and finally lived (all the novels I read before were sent). The only uncomfortable point is the blade in the early stage. I don't understand the reason why he was brought to the world of Teyvat. I quite like the blade of Iron Breaker, but the blade in this book really makes me feel a little uncomfortable. In the early stage, I had unreasonable thoughts about my master (I really felt that he was a bit annoying in the early stage), he was offline in the middle stage, and suddenly appeared in the later stage. Without this redundant setting, I feel that the score of this book will definitely be more than this. What should I do if I can no longer read other Emperor CP articles after reading this one? Book shortage

This article is actually a short story. It can also be said that it is to make up for Zhongli's personal regrets. The whole story is short and superb, well written, quite sweet, and has no knives. (Really) The protagonist is Zhongli, and his wife is a crystal butterfly born with him. The plot is relatively compact and the foreshadowing is good. Although it is said to be a short story, the number of words is actually a little less, but it is just right for the entire plot. And the ending is quite consistent. Life is about aesthetics. Because I won't have too many regrets, I will just feel that it was so beautifully written and that it really should be finished. It won't make people feel too much of a psychological gap. Because the author didn't dig any holes and filled in everything that needed to be filled. It even makes up for the regrets about another version of the game. Mainly recommend five stars. The age of gold mining in this tomato novel 💩 is quite good.

This novel depicts Morax, which is a little different from the image of Morax in the original game, but this one has feelings, and he understands love. I think he is portrayed very well. Compared with him in the original game, he understands love better. The plot of Liyue depicted in the novel can be considered satisfactory. He is no longer full of knives like before. MiHoYo, MiHoYo, his games are really full of knives!

This is the second book by the author. Although the ending is a bit unprepared and strange, it is also very good. They did not continue to write their endings. Everything develops in a direction we don't know. Rather than having an ending written by others, it is the best blessing to the continent of Teyvat. The author said Very good. The ending of decisively letting go and not interfering with others may be uncomfortable, but I sincerely wish them a fictional female character. She is also great. She did not give up the Liyue she created with the emperor for excessive love. It has almost 150,000 words. It took me a day to read it carefully. It is really good.

The writing is so good that it kills me [Flying Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Ah~ I can't imagine how much fun it would be if Genshin Impact was really like this. I urgently need a character like Sister Bao now (I'm going crazy catching the rock spirit butterfly)

The writing is really good, with logical emotions and slow-burning without any sudden or strange feeling. The writing style is also very good and not vulgar. At least among the few Genshin Impact fanfics I have read, this one is not bad at all, and the ending is also very good. Although it is a bit rushed, it also leaves a lot of room for the reader's imagination. Among them, the character design of the heroine Mang Xing is very good, and the emotional settings are very rich without being spoofed. It is really good-looking.

The plot settings are good, but the world setting is not very sophisticated, and the name Guili Xingji is really awkward, and the sense of CP is not deliberately reflected. Because some parts were not very sophisticated, I read a few chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. I originally felt that four stars was quite appropriate, but my review was on the negative side. I did it on purpose to avoid misunderstanding and to balance it out.

It's good to read. It's good to read. I hope the author can insist on finishing this novel. [Blow kiss]

Highly recommend this book! Different from the usual works, it doesn't make me feel awkward. The key is! After all, the yakshas are all still alive. I really recommend this book, leaving no regrets [blowing kiss]

Although the details of the plot are a bit inconvenient, the writing is very good, especially in the first few chapters, which narrate part of the original history from the perspective of the heroine. There is a sense of historical weight, and a sweet and nostalgic feeling. I don't know if the author will write a side story, but I have some expectations.

465. It is warm, beautiful and healing, and the love with Morax is very peaceful. Envy ~ longing for love. The sword that erased the original work, all the friends are here, Liyue is developing very prosperously~ ⁽⁽ଘ( ˙꒳˙ )ଓ⁾⁾

Very interesting, thank you to the author. The homework is big, so don't be sad about it. Open a brand new book to welcome a new world. Maybe the story of Mang Xing and the others has ended, but the future has opened with new characters. I'm very lucky, and another book I like to read, Villette, was actually written by you. Love

The plot is not draggy at all, it is so enjoyable, and the writing is also good. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into it. This kind of sincere emotion really touched me. This morning I was browsing the post and came across this book. A book friend said that the relationship between an old couple and an old couple is very warm, so I clicked on it and read it. Indeed, this book is not only warm about the sincere feelings between them, but also satisfying without any regrets. In the endless years, old friends have left one by one, and the wear and tear has gradually deepened. It is heavy for everyone. This book seems to make me see Another happy ending is like a finale, with everyone smiling and reunited after a grand drama. They are flesh and blood, not just a character, a regret or a knife issued by MiHoYo, but a beautiful incarnation of the most sincere feelings. Everyone has their own unique side. Sometimes there are some interesting places in the book, a little sloppy or some worldviews that are a little out of touch with the game, but it is harmless. In short, I highly recommend it.

Family members, who knows, this book is actually very suitable for my aesthetics, and some aesthetics are very suitable. He's very good-looking, I really like it. It's finished, but the chapters are a little short [laughing] I can't help but scream when I watch the highlights, and it's super sweet, so sweet that I get cavities. [Sending Hearts]

It's very interesting. If possible, can you write a sequel that allows them to travel to the original world without the star? Or maybe write a side story about the daily life of the world with stars in the original world? I haven't seen enough of the extra episode where Morax swapped bodies with the emperor of the original world. So is it ok? 😖😖😖

It's really beautiful, it's my ideal novel! The main CP is really good, the character is not broken, the content is super sweet, and the content of this book is not complicated, it is relatively simple, and it is very suitable for reading!

Ah, it's so good. Both of the author's books are so good [Adoration] It's the story of the Rock King Emperor and the Rock Crystal Butterfly [shy] The immortals and yakshas are still here, it's great (๑ `▽´๑)۶

This book is great! ‼ ️‼ ️ Is the pure sweet article good? No knife at all! I hope the author can write more books of this type, and the character of Mr. Zhong has not collapsed, and he and the other four yakshas have not died in the end. Can you finish all my worries? ! Really highly recommend this book

It is really well written. Emperor does not have the contradictions of 00c, nor does it write too many concepts beyond this world and powers that do not belong to this world. The protagonist was born from a miracle, and the wings of butterflies fluttered the branch line of fate, giving Liyue in this world a better ending.

Gaga is beautiful, I highly recommend it. This is a novel that is worth adding to your bookshelf. Don't be fooled by the silly name, but in fact it looks like the word "sweet". The whole text is uncensored and highly recommended.

I like it, I like it, everyone has a happy ending, I'm so happy, do you have any fans of Mandrill Bao? Love this happy taste!

Very very very very beautiful. I really like this kind of book with not many chapters but a very compact plot. If there are too many plots, sometimes it becomes boring and I don't want to read it. If there are too few plots, it won't be enjoyable. So the author wrote it just right. Especially the extras written by the author are really good.