Double portal + single female protagonist + sweet story + cool story, they will be stable together in the future
Chen Xuan was a street writer who was working on a manuscript until late at night one day. When he woke up, he was transported to another world. In front of him was a beautiful woman who looked like a fairy. She was wearing a gorgeous dress, covering her hands with a quilt, looking at him sadly and angrily.
Chen Xuan: Who are you and why are you on my bed?
Luo Li: Who are you? Why are you in my bedroom?
The Zhou Dynasty respected military power and did not value power and strategy. Luo Li was sidelined and could only be a puppet empress.
Fortunately, Chen Xuan has a double portal, and he can defeat the world from two directions: technology and strategy.
Royal Chef: I have tasted all the delicacies in the world, but I am defeated by the food called instant noodles.
Top General: What gun is Chen Xuan talking about? I heard that a gun is faster from seven steps away, but a gun is faster and more accurate within seven steps.
Minister: Chen Xuan has the best strategies in the world, killing three soldiers with two peaches, releasing military power with a glass of wine, and the "Five Dragon Slaying Techniques" he always talks about. He is over fifty years old, and his life has really been in vain...
Chen Xuan: I have a dream, which is world peace
(The introduction is weak, please read the text)
Reader comments
The characterization is pretty good. After reading Chapter 18, jump to the latest chapters and read it. I feel like the main problem right now is that it makes people jump to watch it, and it's not very solid.
Neither the protagonist nor the empress could possibly keep their trump card after overturning the table. The protagonist has not yet obtained a weapon that can threaten the Grand Master, nor does he say that if there is a real problem, he can bring the empress back to modern times for refuge. It gives people an unsteady feeling. Even if Luo Yan is the big boss at the end of this book, if he is defeated, everything will be fine and everyone will be able to make dumplings together. But the current situation between the protagonist and the empress also gives people a sense of powerlessness. They do not have the power to resist or even protect themselves, their true self.
The heroine is very cute, and the characterization is relatively complete compared to the formulaic heroines in most of Tomato's other novels. Maybe this is also the advantage of having a single heroine. You can focus on describing one heroine, and there are more details in the character's psychological activities and body language. However, in comparison, the current portrayal of the male protagonist is quite average. It feels like he is simply a cheat for the female protagonist. To put it bluntly, this character has not "lived". The author can consider arranging some highlight moments for him. But for the female protagonist, the male protagonist is the one who pulled her up when she was deep in the quagmire and about to drown. She has always called the male protagonist a hero, which shows that in her heart, the male protagonist is like a hero who fell from the sky (although this is almost the case).
Coming from a mixed martial arts background, it seems difficult to make a comeback, and you will have to cheat later on.
I hope the author will not stop updating, let alone stop updating just because there are few people. Come on, author.
Thank you to the author for your attention
Very good, give me some encouragement
I just watched it, and I haven't seen much of a deep strategy yet. There is one bright spot, the heroine is very cute!
Okay, very sweet, but not too much
The heroine is very sweet and beautiful.
Hope to continue writing
It's okay, but I feel like the author will enter the palace soon after writing
Why don't you update it? Does it need to be written so slowly? Eating three meals a day is not enough? Why do you still want to eat four meals?
The characterization is pretty good. After reading Chapter 18, jump to the latest chapters and read it. I feel like the main problem right now is that it makes people jump to watch it, and it's not very solid. Neither the protagonist nor the empress could possibly keep their trump card after overturning the table. The protagonist has not yet obtained a weapon that can threaten the Grand Master, nor does he say that if there is a real problem, he can bring the empress back to modern times for refuge. It gives people an unsteady feeling. Even if Luo Yan is the big boss at the end of this book, if he is defeated, everything will be fine and everyone will be able to make dumplings together. But the current situation between the protagonist and the empress also gives people a sense of powerlessness. They do not have the power to resist or even protect themselves, their true self.
The heroine is very cute, and the characterization is relatively complete compared to the formulaic heroines in most of Tomato's other novels. Maybe this is also the advantage of having a single heroine. You can focus on describing one heroine, and there are more details in the character's psychological activities and body language. However, in comparison, the current portrayal of the male protagonist is quite average. It feels like he is simply a cheat for the female protagonist. To put it bluntly, this character has not "lived". The author can consider arranging some highlight moments for him. But for the female protagonist, the male protagonist is the one who pulled her up when she was deep in the quagmire and about to drown. She has always called the male protagonist a hero, which shows that in her heart, the male protagonist is like a hero who fell from the sky (although this is almost the case).
Coming from a mixed martial arts background, it seems difficult to make a comeback, and you will have to cheat later on.
I hope the author will not stop updating, let alone stop updating just because there are few people. Come on, author. Thank you to the author for your attention
Very good, give me some encouragement
I just watched it, and I haven't seen much of a deep strategy yet. There is one bright spot, the heroine is very cute!
Okay, very sweet, but not too much
The heroine is very sweet and beautiful.
Hope to continue writing
It's okay, but I feel like the author will enter the palace soon after writing
Why don't you update it? Does it need to be written so slowly? Eating three meals a day is not enough? Why do you still want to eat four meals?