I, the Time Traveler, Will Succeed the Water God at the Beginning

New book is coming! Today is my birthday, give yourself a five-star to celebrate [shy]

I prefer to be more female [get it]

To be honest, the whole story is very attractive, and it is understandable to say that the protagonist is frustrated. After all, the enemy is fighting and retreating on the protagonist's side, and is gradually advancing the plan. On the other hand, all the protagonists are Riddlers (including the protagonist) in order to maintain suspense. There has been almost no progress in the investigation (even if there is progress, it feels like the information is deliberately released by the enemy). In addition, the system is very strong, the transformation is also very strong, the experience card is a big trump card, and this ability looks very cool, but the original God food is a bug. It does not mean that this ability is not good, but the author did not handle it well. After seeing Yu Xi for the second time in the novel, the original God food seems to have been hidden by the author. Finally, I want to say that I have written so many words here, and some readers have also written many comments and short comments. These are not here to argue, but I just hope that the author can write better. These words are just my personal opinions. Maybe what I said is wrong, but I hope the author can listen. Finally, I sincerely hope that the author's novel will get better and better.

The novel is very good, although the transformation plot is a bit short, but it is only the beginning of 100,000 words and the author also said that there will be more transformation plots in the future, so it is not a big problem. By the way, this book has many plots of time travellers, and even has characters who are in the same world as the protagonist (although not in the same timeline), so if you don't like this aspect, it is best not to come in. Also, don't come in if you don't like the protagonist giving things to your own people. Finally, I want to ask the author, is this a single heroine or multiple heroines?

Good coconut! Happy birthday🎂🎂🎁🎁

Today is my birthday, so I just took a look at the author's profile to support the new book. Cheers, author!

There are so many good books like this. The background introduction is a bit long (for old bookworms), but it only lasts for one or two chapters. The following is just right, elaborating what should be detailed and omitting what should be omitted. It is extremely friendly to old bookworms. 95% Of Tomato's articles are written in a boring way. It would be great to have more articles like this. The plot is also well written and not repetitive.

The writing is pretty good compared to the writing of the same question. It is recommended that the plot be written to the point, and it will be more reasonable in terms of plot and logic. The villains he writes are not as brainless and stupid as most novels. If you want to find faults. The plot progresses a bit quickly. Updates are a bit slow

I think the poisonous point is that some characters are purely used to play high-end games. They basically use their main body at ordinary times. The transformation time is very small, and it feels like there is a time limit. To master an ability, you should not only use his skills, but also the specific skills in the Genshin game, which elements should be used flexibly, and the protagonist considers the woman as his future girlfriend. The emotional line is a little bit (I don't know how to put it), and the body is okay.

A good book, very interesting The details are a bit lacking, but overall it's good. The logic and the character of the protagonist are both good. There are just a lot of trolls and idiots who just troll without even reading the plot.

It's really beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! I like this golden finger so much!

Good luck, author. Generally speaking, the ideas are clear and the writing is good. It looks very smooth and is worth a taste.

The writing is good, ten times better than me anyway, and the content is a bit niche, but overall it's OK. The author didn't make a mistake. I'm really happy, but I feel like the author really wants to be a eunuch. What should I do? [Cover face][cover face]

Come on, but you must also pay attention to your body and take good care of yourself. The temperature has cooled down recently. Wear more clothes and drink more hot water (hot water is omnipotent [making faces], just kidding). It is also the peak season for influenza (should it be?). I hope you can be happy every day and don't be in a bad mood just because some people are barking. (PS: I am a vocational college student. I wish you a good night!)

The capitalization is very good, hugging each other for warmth in a different world, having a sweet love, the rise of the African chiefs, I am actually very rich when I am very poor, all in all, let go of the past, accept the present, welcome the future, life will continue...

Let me give you a five-star review first. It is quite good so far. There are no particularly big problems. The single chapter written by the author answers the questions accurately. I am from Qi City in Northeast China. If I can help my friends, I will definitely help. I understand everything I understand. First support the author! If the writing is not good in the future, I will change the rating. . .

It looks good. The author should write more about the characters of Genshin Impact. I want to see what people in this world think of their handsome, beautiful appearance and powerful strength^-^

It's a pity. It already had a lot of flaws, and now there's a time traveler from the same hometown (who's played Genshin Impact, and he told me about the ability to draw characters when they first met)

Gray is very beautiful, all I can say is

Novelty, support it

Come on author, it's great

Looks good ^_^♪ Come on author(ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on, author!

Wait a minute, Chensong Pot can bring people in. You can also enter in Teyvat. So can you do it and bring people to Teyvat? [Cool]

I read it several times but I didn't see when the protagonist opened the experience card, so maybe the author missed a chapter?

It seems pretty good so far, I hope the author will work hard to update [crazy][crazy]

It's finally a book about urban original gods. To be honest, it's pretty well written and interesting.

I finished reading it in one go and it was another wonderful night.

Nice novel that made my Navelle spin

It's still very interesting, I hope the author can keep it up!