Perfect World: The Azure Dragon

It's so uncomfortable to read, the writing is so messy, and the words spoken by several people don't have the proper punctuation marks in the paragraph.

Just put quotation marks when speaking.

Who is the heroine?

It's really uncomfortable to read. It's so messy and there's no punctuation. I really don't know how you read this book.

This book is mind-numbing to read. The dialogues between the male protagonist and other people are all written together. It's very confusing. Also, the male protagonist didn't even try to develop feelings for any of the female characters he met in the plot, and even the ones the male protagonist met first were given to Shi Hao 🤦

You have too little of this, can you update it a little more? It's not enough to read 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

Pay attention to the paragraphs of the article. This is not a composition. Can you separate the scenes, stories and characters' words with superscripts? The words of the people and the scenes of the story are drawn together. It makes people feel like they are not reading a novel, but like reading an essay.

It's pretty good, full of laughs, I recommend watching it

Who is the heroine?

How about not writing a single female protagonist, but multiple female protagonists. There will be no regrets