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It's very beautiful, and the story and background are very exciting and interesting. In addition, the protagonist's setting charm is off the charts, making her look like a queen of all women. However, because her physique and strength can only reach eight, the protagonist is destined to be a weak subject. What will she do when she looks at a group of female supporting characters around her who are ready to make a move? Very much looking forward to the development of the story

It has a rich worldview, an attractive enough setting, and the logic is clear enough. It is a novel with great potential. Come on What's going on? The little black room should be out now, right?

I finished reading it in a few hours, okay, the author will update it quickly. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

If you keep writing at this pace, as long as the author doesn't backstab you, I will definitely give it a high rating.

After reading it, the plot line is very long but the world view is good [laughing] The similar background of the Middle Ages and the additional warlock system are very attractive to me (I am not here to see the Yandere Maker). From the current point of view, the protagonist is simply ridiculous (born one). Starting from escaping from the prison of the Yandere sister, the current little witch is a very cowardly existence, but she can be considered to have a bottom line, and nothing particularly outrageous has happened. The pace of the story is very slow but quite acceptable. The protagonist is very similar to Gou Daoliu. This system is suspected to be the intention of the failed witch from the parallel world line (I am curious about the experience of the system). How the protagonist established a sect that combines mechanical warlocks and how to deal with the witches of the holy cult. How to fight against fate and the sister who is currently only a candidate for a saint, after all, it has only started not long ago. It is more about me personally looking at the worldview of the different world through the perspective of the protagonist, from the small one between the witch and the church to the large one between various countries. Since ancient times, revolutions have been accompanied by bloodshed and sacrifice. As a time traveler with a system on the wall, I can tell what kind of wonderful story it will be in this context. I am waiting to see. I want to see the witch being treated like the one in the basement of RBQ [eating melon]

Hmm! The plot is okay, but the book shouldn't be so bleak, even if the audience for this book won't be very wide. Come on, author! It will get better once the word count comes up ٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶

So far, the writing is very good and very interesting. Come on, author, I have already paid attention to it [blowing kiss]

It's quite interesting. Compared with other transformation novels, this book is good because it doesn't just stick to the element of transformation. On the contrary, the author's Western fantasy is still very good, the plot is remarkable, and the characters are quite attractive, without being overshadowed by the element of "transformation". Although I was initially attracted by the yandere element, now I don't really want to see my sister or other overly yandere people appear. Because the protagonist's character is not silly or cute, but he maintains a good male character, is calm and cautious in doing things, and is more comfortable to watch. I still hope that the follow-up will be written according to the logic of male videos. Personally, I think it is much better to watch the protagonist become stronger than to watch him being trained. It may also attract more people. (Only represents personal thoughts)

The setting is quite hardcore. It is one of the few books in Tomato that can cover the setting. There is no copying homework. There are a lot of foreshadowings and suspense, and the logic is completely reasonable. According to this progress, it should be another 9.5 Million-word novel. It is a pity that the subject matter of writing transformation stories is inherently limited. I understand everything. The author's writing is profound. In fact, it is not inferior to other first-class novels. I kind of wish that it was transferred from other platforms, or is it the trumpet of some big boss? All in all, I rate this book very highly, it's a good read and I love reading it👀

I have read hundreds of novels about yandere and depression, but this one is the only true god. It's a pity that it's gone [crying][crying][crying]

OK ~ Spartan West! The natural combination of main plot and emotion~ah~↑ It's been a long time since I've seen someone who can make me so hi↗ This yandere is real. Ah↗↘ Needless to say, just with this level of knowledge, I worship the boss"

To be honest, this kind of world view is quite rare, and I particularly like this style. The end of sword and sorcery, plus the early days of industrial development. A combination of magic and technology. I think the protagonist's character design is acceptable to me. I don't have any feelings about the other female protagonists. I actually like the protagonist. The book is gone? ? ?

I enjoyed reading it, but the author's introduction of the background is a bit cumbersome. In fact, it can be introduced in paragraphs. In fact, the author has no interest in understanding the whole paragraph and only focuses on the plot. But overall, it is very good. It can be ranked in the t2 echelon of my bookshelf [Chigua] [Chigua]

It's beautiful, there's delicious food, and most importantly, who doesn't like a carnivorous succubus teacher who is fragile and easily pushed down?

The shortest author of Whole Tomato ⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ ○ ○ ) .( Y ＼ | /

The content is relatively novel and the plot is pretty good. It's just that the author never updates

I really like this kind of protagonist who is obviously a hunter but pretends to be a pitiful prey to toy with others. The appearance of the main character is often described which is really intoxicating.

The subject matter is relatively rare in Tomato, and even if it is a yandere theme, it can be considered an entry point that few people write about (of course, it may be that I have read few books, so I have this idea). The plot is quite good, with ups and downs and thousands of twists and turns. What interests me the most is the description of the heroine's "inhumanity" and the expression of the bond between the heroine and the people around her. The feeling it gave me was quite good. It's just a pity that such a work finally chose to end such a good story with a break. Unfortunately, after all, I couldn't see the land kingdoms fighting for hegemony, or the sisters confronting each other, and it was hard to understand what the protagonist's witch's feast was. It's a pity I won the Easter match, let's pop the champagne!

Great to watch, but the dark room is closed again, no updates woooooooooooo. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

The plot and setting are both very nice. It's a good work. I'm quite picky when it comes to reading. To be honest, I don't like many of the books recommended by Tomato, but this one is really good.

It's too short! Four stars, four stars. From now on, I can guarantee two updates a day and then one more star. The plot is quite interesting, and the most important thing is that it's the kind of real yandere novel that I like to read! And my favorite "Mother's Smile 🙂", hahaha

This is one of the few novels with a medieval setting that I find very interesting. Personally, I hate novels with a medieval setting. Even the famous "Lord of the Weird" made me feel uncomfortable reading it. This is the only book that I found fascinating.

Author-chan, please update quickly. Everyone in the comment area will do anything [cry][cry][cry]

Well, the basement is very exciting at the beginning, and even more incredible later on. I recommend it. Prison book, we miss you, come back, I've read it three times

Okay, okay, very nice. When will the protagonist return to the basement?

There is a world view similar to that of Lord of Mysteries. I like it very much. However, although the author mentioned that the protagonist is a bit dark in the early stage, is this a bit too dark? The character creation is also quite good and the personality is relatively distinct. I look forward to the portrayal of the protagonist in the later stage.

The text of this novel is beautiful and delicate, making readers feel as if they are in the world of the story and feel the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of the protagonist. Not only is the plot twisty and bizarre, the author also skillfully reveals the characters' innermost emotions. I couldn't put it down and read the entire book in one sitting. Highly recommended to friends who like reading!

I personally feel that this book is a good book. So far, I can feel that the author's layout of the world view is very careful, and the performance of the characters is not too deliberate, such as the performance of the protagonist, the little heartthrob. Most of the explanations are reasonable, and the narrative is smooth. There are some shortcomings that need to be improved. The logic of some details is indeed not very clear, and the performance of the yandere character is also a bit immature.

Some flaws, but overall pretty good. It's just that the character's personality is quite abrupt and a bit inconsistent. I hope the author becomes popular There was no update yesterday [pucker][prow][prow][prow]

Very good twist makes my cerebellum spin What kind of text is this? Well, it's probably a good article. What kind of story was told? Ah, that's a good story. So can it be described positively? Not because of twisted love.