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If I don't read pornography for a day, I feel uncomfortable all over
Looking for Fine Chaff, Haven't Seen It for a Long Time
I came to Tomato just to watch God of Death. After watching it, I didn't encounter any problems. My desire to read has been very weak recently.
These Should Be the Ceiling of Fan Fiction.
Book Recommend Human Eternity: Conquest of the Starry Sky
Please Keep the Protagonist Smiling and Hiding His True Face
The Old Bookworm Has Such a Bad Taste, I Beg for Good Books😭
I Am Certified as a Writer, How Can I Withdraw? Waiting
Which Fanfic Is the Most Surprising to People Today? It Still Looks Like a Second Drama After Watching It
The Patient Is Weak but Can Be Beaten, Coughs up Blood but Has Strong Skin. the Sick State Will Never Be Cured.
I want to read a book like "How do I live around Conan when I vomit blood from time to time".
I Just Deleted All the Bookshelf😱😭😭
Does anyone have any high-scoring books to save the poor children😭😭
9.4 or Above, No CP, It's Confusing to Watch
The books I read are very miscellaneous, so feel free to recommend them. Anyway, don't blindly recommend books around 8:00, as long as they have CP. Apart from these two points, I really read everything, including plots, time travel, fantasy, thrillers, modern times, ancient times, comedy, and all kinds of nonsense.
There Are No More Masterpieces in Fan Fiction. If You Don't Accept It, Let's Fight.
A Book That Ends with the Main Character Dead
I only know that one book is so cool.
Animation Fans Can Do Anything, They Have to Be Smart
Don't write nonsense
A Group Portrait Novel That Makes the World Invincible If Divided, but a Puddle of Mud If United, Please.
I want to read a book similar to "The Little Junior Sister Is Clearly Super Strong, But Is Overly Dumb (Yijian Xinghedu)". A group portrait novel that makes the world invincible if divided, but a puddle of mud if united, please.
Why Did Chinese Comics Lose to Japanese Comics? Japanese Comics Have so Many Fanfics.
#Aesthetic Fatigue, Please Ask for Something Different, Okay?
Concave-Convex World, Contestants, Little Transparent, but Extremely Awesome, Hiding Their Strength
Are All the Bumps That Can Be Made Now Gone?
I want to read a book similar to "[Bump] It's Too Late to Apologize to Lei Shi". The concave and convex competition in my mind is cruel. If a lot of otome appear, will I need my life? I understand the emergence of friendship and love, but there is no reason to like some books. To be honest, I agree.
I Want a Novel with Gentle Writing and Frequent Golden Sentences.
Don't ask, I'm just asking because I have no material for writing quq
The Cos War-Damaged Version of the Character Traveled into This Character's World and Was Crazy and Distressed
It would be even better if there are all-oriented ones.
I Want a Book That Will Make Me Feel Helpless and Hopeless.
Please, everyone















































































































Gaga looks good [Like] [Like] I'm looking forward to Shishi's reaction after the purple pupil and lightning elemental power are exposed.
When I first saw this title, I almost thought it was another otome CP or something (it was my fault, I have seen this book recommended several times before, because I thought it was a boring love story and I never wanted to read it). I clicked in to read it because I was bored. I didn't expect it to be so good [crying] [crying] There is really no OOC, the protagonist is a boy, and the plot is reasonable and smooth. I love the author so much [love] [love] [like]
One of the few novels that made me feel healthy 1. The content is a bit abusive, but I can accept it. The abuse is not that unreasonable. The most important thing is that the protagonist is very strong, and if he wants to fight, he will fight directly. He is not timid just because he is acquainted with or likes this character, and he only talks about it. If something happens, he will really fight! 2. The control of the few characters in the fanfic seems to be very restored. There is no image of Garderos claiming to be the king in other novels... And the image of Thunder Lion dragging the cool tyrants (the description made me think he is just a street kid, without any education). The description in this book is more accurate, with his own pride and self-responsibility, and the overall impression is very good! The character control is really good! ! ! 3. Regarding the characters created by the author, the characters are relatively full-bodied. You can feel that the character of Clark is very affectionate and righteous. The part where he died was really cruel to me. 4. In fact, I don't really like system books, because many of the things the protagonist has to do are forced by the system, otherwise they will be punished, but this book is different. There are no mandatory tasks, no severe punishments, and a lot of freedom. I like it very much, and this identity (the son of the previous Thunder Emperor and the Holy Son of Delman Star) really pokes me 5. His noble identity, powerful power, system cheats, and a little sadistic plot, combined together, he deserves a score of 9.4, Or even higher. To sum up: I love it! Show them all to me!
Good news, another book written by the author is also good. I really want to know what happened next? The author is great,. (Hint to remind you to update more) [Crying] Come on, Da Da! ! ! It's really beautiful\(//∇//)\You are really a treasure! ! Dear author, if you tell me who reported you, I will take a pot and beat him to death in the middle of the night, and then bury him in the ground!
Save Min, this is the first time I've seen a book that suits my taste! This is the first book I have read! No heroine! The protagonist's personality is also very silly! The plot is also very good! Not a single important plot point in the original work was broken! The protagonist also has a good teammate Clark! The mystery of life experience is also slowly being solved! Sure enough, sand sculptures are more attractive to me! Recommend!
As long as the author doesn't kill Clark off, five-star reviews will always exist. This book is really incredible and wonderful. What can I say? It's the kind of thing that gets more and more addictive after reading it. You can come and take a look. I lied to you. You beat me ( ´͈ ⌵ `͈ )σண♡ Clark, will he be resurrected? For the sake of the excitement and integrity of the ending, Clark must die, right? Will he be resurrected after that? Must be resurrected! You must be resurrected, otherwise I will cry to death. I finally found such a beautiful embossed novel, but you tortured me to death. Don't do it (´△`)
I like it. I read it two years ago. I still remember the plot of the first volume deeply. It must be the fourth volume, right? Both the grasp of the characters and the editing of the plot are very appropriate. What surprised me during the reading process is that unlike other concave and convex novels, due to the setting of the second part of the concave and convex world, the reading process will be more or less awkward₍•Д•) But This book is very comfortable to read. The self-created character Volt is super charming. I like it very much. I happen to be able to write a little bit of literature and draw a little bit. I will upload a brain if I wrote later, and then I can draw a picture of Volt in my mind! . I won't post what cp said here ("▔□▔)
When the three painters arrive, show them all to me. They look good~ Beautiful, really, this book is really great. For me, there are no surprises at all, and this character has no OOC. The whole story is more light-hearted and funny. The sword in the later stage is super invincible. The foreshadowing in the article is very clever and very good. I was stunned when I saw this foreshadowing later. "The wind is free,..." Oh my god, no, how could this be? And my Clark, ahhhhhh (இωஇ ) I originally thought Pascal's book was very sharp, but when I switched to this one, I thought it was more relaxed and funny, but then I was hit again, haha, is it fun? Author Completed four brushes on April 6th It's really beautiful. I remember the year when I was most pure in love. I hand-copied a copy for my classmates. At that time, the whole class was waiting for me to update *:ஐ٩(๑´ᵕ`)۶ஐ:* December 21 I can't do it anymore, I have no more books to read, here I go again
As long as you don't cut it∠(´д`), it will always be a five-star review! The child has been numbed by the knife, don't use the knife anymore ꒦ິ^꒦ິ don't use the knife (꒪⌓꒪) It looks good, it looks good, don't block it, don't block it. Don't block it ahhhhhhhh ꒦ິ^꒦ິ🙏
An old fan who has been a comic book fan for 17 years but quit after being too chaotic for 22 years. . . To be honest, I was almost persuaded by the name to quit, but I stayed up late at 0:00 to watch 3:00. This book is really good to read. There is no Mary Sue and the plot is not forced to change. The protagonist is not stupid and strong, and the background setting is also interesting. I have been out of the game for more than a year. This is the first book I can read on Tomato.
Hahahahaha, it's really good to watch. I liked it from the beginning, and the plot is really funny. At least until now, the parts I watched are not cruel and I am very happy. 🤓✌🏻 Hahaha, this world is just a huge knife🤓🙏🏻
So far, the character is consistent with the original work as always, but the protagonist is too frustrated and is completely ignored on some occasions. Although it is not a cool article, it is really uncomfortable to watch [face covering]. I hope it is foreshadowing. If not, how about we try to make him less inconsistent next time? Compared with the previous one, the progress and rhythm have improved. The writing style is distinct, and the protagonist's name is still so interesting [face-palming], but there is still room for improvement. It is not as deep as I think you can reach, but the old-fashioned identity is paired with a distinctive and interesting character. The jokes are not too deliberate, and there are no bad jokes. It is highly recommended. It is enough to stand out in the embossed article, and it will occupy the position of a long review first, and then give five stars after the completion. Looking forward to your performance
Watching it from beginning to end is really good, each character has their own characteristics, (spoiler alert) in the early stage, he broke with the pirate group and had to enter the concave and convex competition, in the middle stage, it was humorous and funny, and he had daily life with Clark, but in the later stage, it was a bit too brutal! When I saw Goodbye, friend, I already felt that something was wrong and set a flag. Volt was accused, and Clark died to save Volt. I actually didn't feel much after seeing this, but when I saw the scene later when Volt recovered his memory and blamed himself for collapse, I couldn't hold back and couldn't stop crying. The wind is free, and I burst into tears. (Don't ask me why my tears are so weird, because they are weird) "My mother said that the wind is free." "I'm free too." "None of you can catch the wind, just as none of you can catch me."
The writing written by Teacher Meizi is really great! It's a high-quality, high-quality book that suits my taste very well! Looking forward to the next plot. The original characters and Volt's past are also well designed. The characters are very vivid. It doesn't feel very OOC. Some of the plots are also super interesting. Funny. What I'm more worried about is the ending. How will the teacher design it? If the ending is be. Eventually Volt died. I will definitely be in tears. If there are some sadistic scenes later. The teacher must describe it carefully. Of course it would be nice if there weren't too many knives. Then the teacher's body must recover well! Don't rush anything when updating the article!
Help, I haven't seen such a good fanfic in a long time. It's not embarrassing and I'm looking forward to the next plot. To be honest, I wasn't very optimistic about it because it was only 7.2 When I opened it. I opened it with the mentality of giving it a try and it really hit me. The character design didn't go off. In my opinion, the current rating is completely abnormally low. I love it so much. I believe the rating will go up in the future.
I personally like it very much. The protagonist is neither stupid nor brainless. He has his own wisdom. He opens in a different world, grows in his unforgettable heart, and ends in dedication. He is the wind, the free wind. The mountains, rivers, fish and birds will be with him, and the wind will choose its own path.
Give me a critical review This book felt good to me, after all, I also read the previous book. This book should be a sequel to the previous one (in my personal opinion) and can be linked together, which I think is fine. For example, the shell linkage and the 5,000-word comment are written with a sense of story. But it is a sequel, and the audience for reading is only the people who have read the previous book. Those who have not read the previous book will rarely read it (after all, some comment sections say there is a linkage, but they don't understand). This is an advantage and a disadvantage I've always wanted to say it, this book gave me a very similar feeling to the previous one. In some places, the protagonist's personality is too similar, which gave me the feeling that he was not completely separated from the previous book. I was still reading the protagonist of the previous book, and there was nothing new. I think it can be changed a little bit. Okay, here are the advantages. The author's writing style is pretty good, and there aren't too many OOC aspects, so when you read it, it feels much better than other embossed writing. There is some groundwork, but not much, such as the side of the ship (do you have any special obsession with the white spaceship) and the food you like to eat. The plot is also compact, with one small climax followed by another small climax, but there aren't many particularly outstanding points. You can have a big climax, but it doesn't necessarily have to be at the end when the protagonist dies. And can it not be be! Don't be be! Don't be be! The ending must be be. After all, many places have been foreshadowed, but can you give me a good ending? Don't want to face reality (இωஇ )🌹🌹🌹 The whole book started to drag a bit, and the pace was a bit slow. The plot is not particularly exciting enough. So I saw that I understood it and couldn't stand it anymore. There's no such passion anymore.
Looking at it now, it looks pretty good. The characters of Clark and Volt are quite interesting and quite deep. The previous character designs were not very OOC. Everyone has their own preferences. I like them very much. I look forward to the update.
One Night, One Miracle. I couldn't sleep after watching it. Now I can't sleep even more after watching it [crying] I always feel stuffy in my heart [crying] But my wife wrote it so well [Adoration], so I said why the writing style looked so familiar. It turns out that I have also read Pascal [Adoration] by my wife. I really love it. It was so well written [Sending Hearts]
It's really the first time I've seen a book that suits my taste. It's not a mindless novel, there's no OOC, and it's completely different from the books I usually read. The characters of Volt and Clark are very full, and the language in the text really makes the readers immerse themselves in it easily. I'm really touched. There is candy and a knife in the article. Sometimes when I look at the knife, I see a little bit of candy and I am so happy that a knife pops into my mouth. This is really desperate [crying], and there are also knives from the previous book mixed in. I really cried to death [almost cried]. Finally, I am also looking forward to Meizi's next book, but I may not be able to read it because of school. Please forgive me.
It is a very good article. The author vividly describes characters such as Volt and Clark that did not exist in the original work. Each of them has his own story and his own reasons for participating in this game. It is just a pity that Clark is not resurrected in this book. However, the author is already preparing the next book, which will tell the story of Volt traveling to various worlds and resurrecting Clark. During the serialization, the author always updated the article intermittently, and now it is finally finished! There is an inexplicable sense of satisfaction and regret. I would like to humblely ask the author, please, can you use Clark as Volt's CP? It's not possible without CP! Big cheers for the author! [Admiration][Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]
I loved it so much that I finished reading it in one day. . Clark was really upset. . . It's really full of regrets, Clark's parents, Cleos sitting at the table where the reunion was supposed to be and saying that he was the only one left, Delman's destruction and so on. There are also a lot of knives that have been mentioned in one stroke, the death of the uncle, the sacrifices of the Delman people, etc., And it is all foreshadowing. Really, the feeling of enlightenment at the end is so exciting! ! ! Delman's glory.
Great book! Like! Especially the interaction between Clark and Volt, I knew Clark could do it! [Understood] I just read the teacher's last book. Hey, guess what? Give me the knife and it will make you stupid [cool] Come over here quickly (but should I say it or not, I am still looking forward to the teacher's book! In addition, I will stand still [shy]) Every time I am immersed in DaDaDa's articles, I can't extricate myself, but when I see that shit yellow button, I want to die [crying] So when will DaDaDa have more chapters~[Shy]
A very, very perfect book... A gift from God The original protagonists Volt and Clark are very vivid... The writing is also very good and smooth. It is not an otome novel, there is no cp direction, and there is no love direction for the original characters. The original plot is very consistent with the world background. The ending should be considered he. This depends on personal understanding. The plot is a bit sad🥺🥺🥺 It's been a long time since I've given a fan fiction such a high rating. You must read this aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah I'll regret it if I don't read it. Finally, please support Kefu CP! ! ! The competition will be high next year! ! ! ! (Only personal chat, normal interaction in the book)
It's so beautiful. I like the author Da Da's fanfics the most. I think I like this kind of style the best. The plot is also very exciting. But what I want to ask most is whether Pascal can make another guest appearance. All I can say is hurry up! Even! New! ! ! [Shout] (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎) (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)
The author's writing is super good, the protagonist's image is vivid and full, and the character design is also well controlled, and it is not OOC at all. Palos was saved, but Clark was gone. Clark, and his brother, are absolutely upset! T^T Alas. After reading this book, I felt very calm, and there was sadness in my calmness. Whether it was my heartache about the characters and stories in this book, or the inexplicable apology and self-blame I felt when I learned that the author had temporarily withdrawn from the circle because the circle was too chaotic, too many imps, or the inaction of the seventh father, etc., They all turned into sadness and lingered in my chest.
A masterpiece. I still feel emotional watching it after 6 months. Volta He is a gust of wind. It ends under the author's pen, but his story will not end. The author's foreshadowing is good. If you want to have a better reading experience. Try not to read the comments section.
Nice! ! ! ! , Volt and Clark, so sweet, I don't know if it's Xipi🙀😽 After reading it, there is no cp article, but I am convinced about this cp (wiping away tears) Really, it tortured me to death, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much. The final ending should be considered an open ending)? , Not sure but in my eyes, wish everything goes well Woo hoo hoo, I'm crying to death
It was only after I checked it a second time that I realized I didn't post a book review. Super pretty! ! ! The characterization is really great and the storyline is also ups and downs. (Self-feeling) It's very comedic, but there's a hidden danger behind the smile [crying]
You will definitely not regret it after watching it! ! ! The protagonist has a relatively distinct personality from the original character. Basically, the original plot has not been changed, and the original plot has a coherent development, and sometimes there are some jokes that are quite funny. I feel that the characters in the original drama written by the author are quite good, and there are no bad characters or OOC.