[Mortal Flow] [No System] [Traditional Immortal Cultivation] Kunlun Taoist ancestor failed to cross the tribulation, and the Tao body fragments were scattered in the world.
Qin Mian, a young man from a mountain village, accidentally found a ray of immortality and accidentally embarked on the long road to immortality.
A legend in the world of immortality begins...
Kill evil dragons, slay gods and demons, and let your grudges be free and easy.
Cut off the mortal world, step on the path of immortality, and wholeheartedly seek growth towards the Tao.
Reader comments
If you give me some encouragement, the beginning of writing is fine, but opportunities come too quickly and too frequently, which will not give people pleasure, but will make them a little tired. After all, it is better to use opportunities to promote the plot than to use delicate ideas to promote the plot, which is more stable and lasting!
It's not very good, it relies too much on breakthroughs before the battle or insights before the battle, as if you don't know how to write the battle process without a trump card! And then the protagonist falls behind every time. This combination of one strong and one weak will be very bad if you play too much!
In addition, the defeated opponent is like a useless tool, discarded as useless in the next scene, the author is very cold!
If you give me some encouragement, the beginning of writing is fine, but opportunities come too quickly and too frequently, which will not give people pleasure, but will make them a little tired. After all, it is better to use opportunities to promote the plot than to use delicate ideas to promote the plot, which is more stable and lasting! It's not very good, it relies too much on breakthroughs before the battle or insights before the battle, as if you don't know how to write the battle process without a trump card! And then the protagonist falls behind every time. This combination of one strong and one weak will be very bad if you play too much! In addition, the defeated opponent is like a useless tool, discarded as useless in the next scene, the author is very cold!
Suitable for passing time
Really engraved, super beautiful.