The Immortal Path: The Dao Ancestor Reincarnates, and You Want Me to Do Chores?

If you give me some encouragement, the beginning of writing is fine, but opportunities come too quickly and too frequently, which will not give people pleasure, but will make them a little tired. After all, it is better to use opportunities to promote the plot than to use delicate ideas to promote the plot, which is more stable and lasting! It's not very good, it relies too much on breakthroughs before the battle or insights before the battle, as if you don't know how to write the battle process without a trump card! And then the protagonist falls behind every time. This combination of one strong and one weak will be very bad if you play too much! In addition, the defeated opponent is like a useless tool, discarded as useless in the next scene, the author is very cold!

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Really engraved, super beautiful.