The Third Young Master's Lazy Persona Falls Apart

1. The description of the scenery shows that the writing skills are good. The development of the previous plot is still a bit slow. I was almost persuaded to quit. After reading the comments, I decided to continue reading. It looks really good when you look at it again. 2. The plot setting is also pretty good. The heroine is like a spy, doing monitoring work. It would be nice if she could use her mind-reading skills for other purposes. Maybe the setting of mind-reading is part of the current thinking. 3. Please update it faster. Let's increase the volume first. The mechanism is different. There is no need to put so many words of background knowledge in what the author has to say. It would be nice to put it directly in the main text with the number of words!

Overall. The writing is delicate and eloquent. Plot. The suspense is designed very cleverly, the story develops naturally, and it gives a sense of immersion. Poke my spot. The description, action description and rhythm of the basketball part are very good, and the basketball skills are described with ups and downs. It makes people want to watch the women's basketball game. In addition. The author puts the basic knowledge of basketball into what the author has to say, which is a very thoughtful move. Worth a thumbs up. Five-star praise.

Friendly reminder, sisters who come in, read the first ten chapters before deciding whether to leave. I personally like the competitive part. After reading it today, I was still a little excited. Most of the competitive articles in female videos are e-sports or fan fiction, which is a bit boring. I finally found a sports article about team competition, and this book was written on my heart. Of course girls don't just have love and love, the heroine's independent career line is so cool. Vitality, sunshine, health, and vitality are the things I can think of. The beautiful girl blossomed under the big pen. [Praise]

Character setting, five stars. Starting from pretense and trough, getting closer to each other and developing naturally. Storyline, five stars. I finally found a story where the male and female protagonists have their own career lines. They need and help each other. From low to high or gradually reveal the truth, it has a strong story. Writing, five stars. Don't talk nonsense, you can feel it after reading a few chapters, it's good. Super pretty! It's funny and suspenseful. The supporting characters are also very cute, and the plot has ups and downs. The pace of the first few chapters was a bit slow, but by the time we got to chapters 6 and 7, I couldn't stop reading. I like the competitive sports part, energetic girls, very tense.

The characters are quite distinct, and it's very interesting to read. The character characteristics of the protagonist are gradually fleshed out, and the supporting characters are created with diverse and interesting images. Some of the group portrait descriptions are very enjoyable to read. Now it has developed into the stage of unrequited love for the male protagonist, which is so interesting, funny and interesting. Moreover, the atmosphere is silky and the love is miserable [love] There are some descriptions of small daily details, which are particularly picturesque. The description of scenery is also a very unique style of writing. The writing is very good and really worth reading.

Update guide: Double updates every day. Updated regularly at 12 o'clock and 18 o'clock. If this novel is lucky enough to occupy a place in a reader's bookshelf, it would be a destination for it to be left in the dust. Maybe it would be great if it could be read. Or maybe, if readers like it, it would be even better if it becomes a warm glow.

Love it, love it! ! ! Tomato is a little different now. The quality of the writing is indeed good. At least this one is very attractive to me. . I spent one night and read more than half of it. Starting from Chapter 56, I was completely hooked. This novel seems to add warm and sunny scenes to the ups and downs. Especially some small details, if you pay attention, you will find many small ingenuities. The picture is warm and the effect presented is of the soft category. +I like the business war part.

Good-looking and the heroine is a bit funny

The family feud is so exciting. I am very curious about the subsequent development of the Jiao family and the death of the male protagonist's mother. If you like reading, keep writing.

The male protagonist's infighting within the wealthy family and the female protagonist's basketball game scenes are both exciting. The author will give more updates.