Qilang in the Smoke and Clouds of the Red Mansion

It's very good. Without comparing it with the original work, this book is very good and I give it five stars. It makes people have the urge to follow it. This book is highly readable.

There is a lot of foreshadowing and foreshadowing in the early stages of this article, so it is not suitable for lovers of pure and refreshing writing. The conflicts in the early stage are mostly within the family headed by Jia Mu, which is not suitable for lovers of killing people when others stand in their way, and killing Buddha when they stand in the way of Buddha. Later, as the protagonist grows up and each character with distinctive personality appears one by one, the magnificent plot slowly unfolds like a scroll of mountains and rivers. The early foreshadowings were also revealed one by one. The author noticed that all those who gave negative reviews to this book, without exception, had very little time to read or listen to the book! The good reviews are basically those who have read more than a hundred chapters. It was my first time to publish a work on this platform, and after writing dozens of chapters, I discovered that many readers here like short, quick, and refreshing articles that slap you in the face. They don't pay attention to the story, logic, story structure, writing style, etc. Of the book itself.

The writing style of Red Mansion fans is indeed good, but the author's plot design is unconventional and the characters are three-dimensional and full. Compared with many mindless novels, the pace of this book is a little slower in the early stage. However, if you read it patiently, it will become more and more exciting. Each foreshadowing is gradually revealed like a slowly unfolding picture scroll of mountains and rivers. Five-star reminder, looking forward to the follow-up~

This book takes time travel as its theme and the masterpiece Dream of Red Mansions as its background. It tells the story of the main mission of rescuing the golden hairpins, with ingenious conception, delicate writing, and rich and colorful content.

Personally, I think this book is a rare masterpiece of Red Mansions. I have read many Red Mansions fanfics before, and some of them are really good, such as "Spring in Red Mansions", "The Romance of the Bastards in Red Mansions", "The Red Mansions of the Red Mansions", etc. There are others that I won't list one by one, but I may have read too many of them later. When I read other Red Mansions, I always feel that they are similar. This book is indeed a rare new idea, and the overall story is smooth and natural. The number of words is a little less, and I feel that I have not read enough. However, it is a complete story, and it is not far behind. Thank you to the author for giving me five stars.

There is a red building through the ages, and hundreds of flowers are blooming in dreams. The wonderful things among them can be seen in general. The author of this book can open up new paths from different perspectives and has attracted countless book friends to read it, which shows that his writing style is extraordinary. There are many poems in Red Mansion, and they were narrated by many talented women. This is a combination of beauty and wisdom. The author can also be called a soul ferryman, because you once again presented the soul of an excellent book to the audience. Thank you for your wonderful writing. This book has a soul because of your writing, but it is also more exciting because of my continuation. I will continue to follow it. I hope the author will not finish it and keep writing. Five million words is not too much! The misty rain in the Red Mansion finally stopped, and twelve hairpins appeared again.

The author's writing style is superb, natural and popular, and the setting of the storyline is also wonderful. The concept of the work is wonderful and novel. The male protagonist Jia Cong in the article originally seemed like a shadow, but he glowed with brilliance under the author's pen. Shakespeare said that for a thousand readers there are a thousand Hamlets! Therefore, reading this novel cannot use Cao Xueqin's original work to understand the fate of the characters in the play. Probably in order to make up for the regret left in the heart by "A Dream of Red Mansions", the author gave more vivid life to some disadvantaged groups in the original work, just like the breathing dead living dead also have their own spring in the spring. In short, this novel is very suitable for readers, making those who hate it hate it even more, and those who like it feel more pity. It does not conform to the logic of that era, because it is a work created subjectively by the author, with personal subjective things. Not every novel is a crowd-pleaser, but this one is certainly worth recommending. Very interesting, still reading...

It's so exciting. The author has profound knowledge, the writing is delicate and natural, the plot is unique and novel, the characters in the book have distinctive personalities, and the images are vivid and interesting. It is really a masterpiece among Red Mansions fan fiction and is worth recommending.

There are people who are so obsessed with Dream of Red Mansions, and have expanded the article in a very innovative way. It can really be regarded as a masterpiece among Red Mansions fan fiction [Like][Like][Like] For a person who loves Dream of Red Mansions very much, after watching it from beginning to end, I was truly amazed and ashamed!

It's really good, and the writing is very sophisticated. The details are in place

It's very good. It makes up for a lot. I had some regrets about watching Dream of Red Mansions before, because there were a lot of miserable things in the previous Dream of Red Mansions. It makes up for it. It's not bad, it's good, it's beautiful, and it's well written.

It's pretty good, much better than some messy Red Mansion fans, it's good, I hope it doesn't crash in the future.

The author writes very delicately and handles many details very well. It is a rare good book.

What does the author say? I have definitely read A Dream of Red Mansions, and the character descriptions are very rich, and the writing is also very good. You will be an old bookworm at first glance. It is worth reading. I am not just saying it here. You will know if it is good or not after reading it. Each meal has different analysis. It is really wonderful.

The theme of the novel is cleverly conceived, the writing is good, the characters are described in detail, the plot design is unconventional, the overall feeling is good, and it is highly readable! A red building, a thousand reds and a cave, full of beauty and sadness. Let's see how Jia Cong, who exists like a shadow in the original work, carries martial arts secrets and travels to the Dream of Red Mansions to change the lives of the golden hairpins, and how he relieves the readers' feelings of dissatisfaction when reading! It's so beautiful, keep reading...

The author's writing style is unexpectedly good. He has his own unique style on the subject of Red Mansions. It is really unique and eye-catching. The characters are deeply drawn and fascinating. It is easy to get into the role. It is very praiseworthy. Come on, chase

What can I say? The modification is really good. It's sweeter than the original.

It's so beautiful, the storyline is unique and novel, and the characters are vivid and three-dimensional. It is truly a masterpiece among Red Mansions fan fiction and is worth watching.

The author has a wonderful idea to reinterpret the literary masterpiece Dream of Red Mansions from the perspective of modern martial arts. It is very unique and innovative. It shows that the author has profound literary skills. God admires him and will continue to support this good book. Come on [like][like][like]

The setting story is fascinating, whimsical, and very imaginative. With Jin Yong's martial arts secrets, you can travel through the Red Mansions, haha! ! At the same time, the characters in the author's works are also very vivid and vivid, and the writing style is smooth. I highly recommend it to everyone.

It's a very beautiful and rare piece of high-quality Red Mansions fan fiction, where Jia Cong travels back in time, turns the tide, and saves the Twelve Beauties from being separated. The author has profound cultural background, profound knowledge, and exquisite writing style. I can't stop reading [Like][Like] I love reading it. I have been following the exquisite Red Mansions [like][like]

The writing is smooth, the conception is clever, and the plot is delicate and touching. The characters in Red Mansions are well-represented and the language is humorous and interesting. Just like revisiting the Red Mansion, the jade and jade, striking Qingwen, Daoxiang Village in Daguanyuan, touching the nostalgic nerves. Thank you to the author for your masterpiece. Keep up the good work and strive for greater heights! Five-star review! ! The author is knowledgeable and quotes the classics appropriately. In addition to enjoying reading, you can also review some of the essence of Chinese studies, which can be said to serve multiple purposes.

So far so good! The writing is smooth and mature, and I still have a lot of skills. Keep it up! Come on!

It gives the feeling of a group portrait in the original work, each character has a soul

Each character in the story has his or her own story and personality. Very novel

It's not a loss to invest in this book. The writing is very stylish and the techniques are spot on.

The author has deep knowledge and preparation, and the whole story is a test of narrative ability. It is an excellent time-travel novel.

A very good Red Mansion fanfic that suits my taste

It's a very nice Red Mansion fanfic. It's really well written. I recommend everyone to read it. This book truly deserves five stars!

A very good work about traveling through the Red Mansions! The characters have flesh and blood, showing us a different world of Red Mansions! It's so interesting.