Help! Mr. Shenjun!

Dear readers, if you have any suggestions or questions, please leave a positive comment. The pace of this book may be a bit slow, I hope you can accept it.

I've read Chapter 19 and it's pretty good, five stars. They are also written about daily plots, but some novels are too long-winded and have no effect at all. The first dozen chapters of this book are written step by step. As the protagonist grows up, he gradually becomes independent and has the ability to survive. The background crisis is also explained through daily observations and discoveries. It is the author's skill to emphasize the description of new things and characters without repeating them. Nice. Again, bad.

Come on, the protagonist is Erlang, a growing up kid. He has a reliable uncle in armor and a family of plush and adorable pets. He is growing up in a very warm way.

For now, it's high-quality food. Now the main thing is to see how the period when the protagonist grows up is described. Crossing over is a good choice, although I would also like to see the middle part. There is also subsequent processing. By the way, author, you fed us knives. How do you say that after filling this knife, do you think the requirements are not high? After the protagonist's cultivation reaches a certain level, he can ferry the sheep back. Just like when the protagonist was young. Yang'erdu is the same as him [crying] I've eaten a lot with knives in recent days.

It's very beautiful, with a touch of warmth. The relationship between the protagonist and the general is like a teacher or a father. I really like it. Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

The book is a good book and has a lot of flavor (the word "taste" is a word I prefer to use when I usually read a book. As for the taste of this book, a cup of tea is quite bland, but the aftertaste of the tea is long), but there is a big problem, which is the story on the mountain in the early stage. The length is very long, because in the eyes of most people, this is equivalent to the preparation stage before the game starts. If it is too long, it will erase people's temperament. I think there is basically no discussion at the end. Most people are brushed off by the previous story because it is really boring.

It's very interesting, the story sequence, the thinking logic is clear, the supernatural stories and traditional fantasy cultivation are very attractive.

If it doesn't collapse later, there is potential for a masterpiece

It's a super good-looking novel about cultivating immortality. I haven't seen such a simple novel about cultivating immortality in a long time. The lambs are cute too. It feels like watching my own child grow up little by little [sends heart] The child really suffered at the beginning [covers face]

I have finished reading it so far, and I got a knife in the middle. I didn't want to continue reading it, but when I thought about the writing style and plot of this book, I continued reading it. After reading it, I felt that it was really good. It's a pity that the sheep died. I don't know if the protagonist's eyes can grow back.

Yes, I like the book of going from humble beginnings to becoming powerful on my own [smile] [almost crying]

When I read the introduction, I thought it was some kind of Chinese Cthulhu immortal novel. I always came across this book but never read it. Now when I read it, it turned out to be the heartwarming daily life of an abandoned child and a mountain god.

It's a good read. I just read Chapter 80 and I really like the protagonist and the general. The interaction between the protagonist and the general in the later plot is a bit less. After reading so many chapters, the protagonist still doesn't know what the general looks like under the mask, and the protagonist has not reshaped his body and grown up after the Nascent Soul. I also want to see the protagonist transform into a handsome young man to impress the general! If you are not good enough as an author, you should follow your own ideas. The current plot is also very interesting! ! !

Seeing that there are more than 200 chapters now, the content is relatively dull without many ups and downs. But also interesting. According to the current protagonists, the general is more like a father. The protagonist is a son. He thinks that this father is omnipotent. In fact, this general is indeed the case. Yang'er is like a brother who has great martial arts skills but low IQ. Divine dog, this is a guard

I have read almost 400 chapters, and the image of the sheep mother in the beginning is amazing. The moment I was knifed, I wanted to send the blade.

A baby is reborn in another world and his physical condition is different from that of ordinary people and then abandoned. The story begins with a young soul with memories that is unable to face survival and encounters daily adventures on the road to immortality. The plot development and story line are very interesting to be followed!

The writing is really good. Whether it is the magic weapon used by the protagonist or the relatively soothing plot, it really touched my point. I hope the author will continue to work hard to create, come on [send heart][send heart][send heart] Why is such a good book rated so low [crying][crying][crying]

I have been following it for a long time but forgot to comment. I have used 4-5 mobile phones to read it. I am a loyal reader of the author. I have read several books, including the apocalypse, and the Pokemon article that is only updated every few months. I really like the author's writing style. I haven't read the Genshin Impact one yet, but I like the rest.

It is a particularly good-looking book that needs to be read step by step. It is recommended for people who have time to read it. The protagonist is a very interesting process that makes people like to read it again. It feels very leisurely. The author is also very beautiful. The map is bigger as you go to the back and the writing is more beautiful. It is particularly exciting. But I think the update is too slow. I hope the author of Tian Geng Bai Zhang writes well. I think this score is too low. I think it should be at least 9 points or above.

It's quite good to read. It's mainly a slow-paced novel. It has a depressing point in the early stages, but I don't think everything can be perfect.

The daily life of the protagonist and the general is really sweet, but the death of the sheep in the middle is so uncomfortable😣

Okay, okay, the writing is more delicate and slow-burning, but now I am a bit farming, Erlang Xiansheng Zhenjun, grow up quickly [sneaky laugh] Save the world and save the disaster

The writing is great! The mighty and legendary general acts as a nanny and raises the protagonist, and he also has a lamb as his companion to travel around the world. I really want to know how the great battle will develop in the future. Please keep updating the author!

Very interesting novel, why is no one reading it?

This is my personal favorite type. The biggest shortcoming is that it is too scattered and does not have much practical information. If you refine the content of one chapter, it can only be a few sentences, or the plot that can be solved in one paragraph has become one or even several chapters. The updates are not strong enough, and I feel lonely after chasing the article.

Wow wow wow! A unique daily novel about cultivating immortals!

It's very beautiful, the water flows slowly and slowly, but I still feel good watching it. It won't make people feel boring. And I really like the characters in it. I just hope it doesn't stop updating.

Great writing! ! ! I really like it! ! ! Big and awesome! ! ! Hey, it's been a long time since we've updated. Do you still remember us? 😭😭😭

The early stage is simply so well written, it's a masterpiece.

Can this be linked to the spiritual energy recovery in the previous book? Didn't the last book end with a trip to another world? Then this book can be linked with the previous one @ Want to Be a High Priest