Help Me, Lord Shenjun!

Dear readers, if you have any suggestions or questions, please leave a positive comment. The pace of this book may be a bit slow, I hope you can accept it.

I've read Chapter 19 and it's pretty good, five stars. They are also written about daily plots, but some novels are too long-winded and have no effect at all. The first dozen chapters of this book are written step by step. As the protagonist grows up, he gradually becomes independent and has the ability to survive. The background crisis is also explained through daily observations and discoveries. It is the author's skill to emphasize the description of new things and characters without repeating them. Nice. Again, bad.

Come on, the protagonist is Erlang, a growing up kid. He has a reliable uncle in armor and a family of plush and adorable pets. He is growing up in a very warm way.

For now, it's high-quality food. Now the main thing is to see how the period when the protagonist grows up is described. Crossing over is a good choice, although I would also like to see the middle part. There is also subsequent processing. By the way, author, you fed us knives. How do you say that after filling this knife, do you think the requirements are not high? After the protagonist's cultivation reaches a certain level, he can ferry the sheep back. Just like when the protagonist was young. Yang'erdu is the same as him [crying] I've eaten a lot with knives in recent days.

It's very beautiful, with a touch of warmth. The relationship between the protagonist and the general is like a teacher or a father. I really like it. Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

The book is a good book and has a lot of flavor (the word "taste" is a word I prefer to use when I usually read a book. As for the taste of this book, a cup of tea is quite bland, but the aftertaste of the tea is long), but there is a big problem, which is the story on the mountain in the early stage. The length is very long, because in the eyes of most people, this is equivalent to the preparation stage before the game starts. If it is too long, it will erase people's temperament. I think there is basically no discussion at the end. Most people are brushed off by the previous story because it is really boring.

It's very interesting, the story sequence, the thinking logic is clear, the supernatural stories and traditional fantasy cultivation are very attractive.

If it doesn't collapse later, there is potential for a masterpiece

It's a super good-looking novel about cultivating immortality. I haven't seen such a simple novel about cultivating immortality in a long time. The lambs are cute too. It feels like watching my own child grow up little by little [sends heart] The child really suffered at the beginning [covers face]

I have finished reading it so far, and I got a knife in the middle. I didn't want to continue reading it, but when I thought about the writing style and plot of this book, I continued reading it. After reading it, I felt that it was really good. It's a pity that the sheep died. I don't know if the protagonist's eyes can grow back.