Urban Villain, but I Am a Cultivator

Make some suggestions, 1. The author can open a separate chapter to explain the meaning of Northeastern dialect. Local Northeastern people are fine, but people from other places may not understand it. If you don't understand it, it will be easy to get blinded, and the data will be bad. 2. In terms of plot, a harem is okay, but not too many. It is best to limit it to 3-5. If there are too many, it will be too much to write and it will be uncomfortable to watch. And don't make any mistakes. If there are too many, it will cause trouble. 3. In the follow-up plot, there will be a harem after cultivating immortals. In this case, the family members will be able to cultivate immortals together, and then the spiritual energy will be revived. At this time, you can do some work, and it depends on you. If it fits the plot, I suggest it be funny. After all, it is considered a semi-comedy. It is a bit nondescript when it is heated. Of course, if there is a turning point, it can be more passionate. 4. For subsequent protagonists, it is best to have 1-3 protagonists in the follow-up. If one is longer, write shorter, and if there are more, write shorter, and then revive the spiritual energy and add world fusion or world collision. In this way, you can write a friendly plot without losing the funny style, and it can be appropriately passionate and long (if you don't want to write it long, just treat it as if I didn't say it). That's all for now. It's a very good book. It would be better if it can be maintained or improved in the future. If you see my comment, you can read the content of the book. If you think it is good, support it.

It makes me laugh so hard, Northeastern Railway will never disappoint you

Very exciting, this is also a breath of fresh air in villain writing [face covering] I have read so many villain articles. This is the first time I have seen the Northeastern villain. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you.

I am from the Northeast, but some Northeastern dialects are used in the wrong context. I suggest the author contact a few Northeasterners and read them before posting the chapters. It is not enough to go overboard.

I can watch it. The subject matter is quite novel. The Northeastern dialect is still not authentic.

It's pretty good, but this naughty thing is making you nagging.

What's going on, bro? [What] We don't have an accent? You just talk normally, how can you be like that? Aren't you just slandering us? Be careful, I will report you to Tomato

Very good. I speak Northeastern very well.

Although it's a similar routine, but with the addition of Dong Baiyin's setting, he instantly stood out among the book group [laughing]

As a Northeasterner, I like this book very much

I never thought that the Northeastern dialect version of the novel could be so interesting. I laughed like a maggot in bed [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter]

Okay, it's interesting. My stomach makes me twitch with laughter. Emma, ​​this Northeast dialect is very clear to you. It's a 6. I must give it a 5-star rating.

As a Northeastern person, although I don't usually speak in dialect so deliberately, it seems very friendly. Why is the Northeastern dialect not Mandarin? I think she has an accent. [Sinister smile]

This is my first time reading Dongbei Hua. I think it is well written.

This book is very well written, I laughed at it. I really don't have a level 10 Northeastern dialect and I can't understand it. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

All I can say is that it's awesome. I'm the first person I've seen to write a book like this. The author is awesome.

As a Northeasterner, this is my first time reading a novel with a Northeastern tone. It feels very good. I watched it in one sitting and can only wait for updates.

Although I have only read four chapters now, but—the author, you are such a talent.

I've seen a lot of villains from the Northeast, but not many who speak Northeastern dialects, so I support it with good reviews. Next time, let's talk about Jinzhou!

How to say it? Lu Ming was in vain. Except for the first opponent who knew what was going on, he relied on his mother to solve the whole problem. My mother, Shen Hong, could see through her opponent's character at a glance. You can even tell the types of the heroines. That is to say, she is a woman, and Lu Ming is her son, otherwise she would probably have sex on her own. You can consider writing a prequel to the heroine, The Legend of Shen Hong. The title of this book was changed to "How did Shen Hong give the harem accent to her loser son?"

To be honest, the author may have some knowledge about Northeast China, but not necessarily a lot. There are many dialects, but some places are still a bit lacking, but the taste is still okay.

I'm from Shenyang. I read it in one go and I think it's pretty good. The pace of the story is okay. There are only about 3 heroines. Shen Hong suits my appetite. The writing is also very good. It's very enjoyable to watch. It feels more funny. It will be good if it continues. Personally, I will open other maps next. I can just write a few protagonists and it's easy to finish. In Northeastern dialect, you can use parentheses to annotate the meaning at the end. The last thing is don't stop updating, stick to it, be optimistic about you, and update more

After finishing King of Soldiers, author, what do you want to write?

Northeastern intangible cultural heritage goes to a different world

Quick, quick, quick, quick, quick

The characters are quite likable and the plot arrangement is reasonable and not embarrassing. I look forward to the follow-up development.

Good guy, I like it very much

This Northeastern dialect sounds good to me

It's not enough. Quickly [crazy][crazy][crazy]

It's probably a harem, it's okay to watch