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The stupid bird's cultivation of immortality is still unsatisfactory. To be honest, the structure of Benniao is very good, the storyline is getting better and better, and the later stories are addictive. Although there is still room for improvement in the details, the flaws are not concealed and it just looks better and better. Stupid Bird should be ranked higher. I have read some books that are read by hundreds of thousands of people. In my eyes, who have read many excellent books, they are just mediocre. After finishing the story of the stupid bird, I hope this one will have better results and be read by more people. After the first few dozen chapters, I feel that the story is obviously more detailed and eloquent. The author's control of words has become more mature. Moreover, the development and turns of the story are sometimes different from expectations, which is unconventional. Bring surprises. I hope you will give me a lot of support so that the author's efforts will be rewarded accordingly, so that fine novels can have their due status.

I like your writing style. I am a big fan of Benniao Xiuxian. The author is talented and has social experience. His words are meaningful. I feel happy when I read your works and are full of positive energy. I am optimistic about the author [like][like][like][like][like]

The real feeling of doing whatever you want, it feels good and cannot be experienced in ordinary life

It is much better than those books that follow the crowd. At least it is true, the style of writing is also good, and the details are handled very well. However, the only thing that cannot be forgiven is [7 chapters a day], which seems a little short, hahahahaha. I was very happy while reading this book, thank you to the author.

Produced by Fifth Brother, it must have five stars. Good books should be rewarded. Come on, come on [laughs]

The writing style is fluent without excessive rhetoric, the humor is concise and witty, and it is a book about the civilization of the prosperous times, but it contains everything. A strong one, worth watching. Of course, the outlook on life is different for each age group. Maybe the God of Creation is still relatively young, or maybe he is afraid that his wife will read his books, which always makes Pig's Feet a little humble. Anyway, I have been criticizing the real wife from the first book to now [face covering]

It's getting better and better. I'll give you a five-star first. If you write poorly later, I'll take it back.

I really like Stupid Bird Cultivating Immortality. The whole book does not make people feel sleepy from beginning to end. I like the author's style.

It is very interesting that the author can project his life experience and insights into the novel, and at the same time use the theme of fairy tales to express some desires that cannot be realized in reality.

Turned around in Benniao! Support the flowers in the mirror and the moon in the water! I particularly like the author's discussion of actual facts! Definition! And unexpected and natural ideas! I like the author's judgment on the storyline the most! Super awesome!

Although it is more everyday, it is very beautiful.

This book can be regarded as a breath of fresh air for cultivating immortals. If you can persist in writing it, you will have the appearance of a mortal. The author's vision and pattern are both extraordinary and comparable to those of the Tomato author who is eager for quick success and quick success. Although his writing power is not powerful, he has the wind of creating nature. Reading the words in his pen is like a breeze blowing against your face. The author should be quite old, with rich social experience and deep thoughts. Only such a book is worthy of being savored. I give the author a thumbs up. It is Jin Chiguang. I hope you will continue to work hard and create glory.

The author's description of the little characters is very good. It can be described as quite old-school. However, the writing style is so good that it makes it impossible to read other novels. It is very uncomfortable!

The author writes about small characters and ordinary people with such great writing skills. He obviously put a lot of thought into the details and has his own style. It is really good. It is not like other books that follow the same routine over and over again. After reading too much, it feels like nothing. The beginning of this book really attracted me. I hope the author can develop better.,, The combat power system of this book is really a bit broken. The author's settings for the previous two major levels can be used without taking it too seriously. However, when I saw Jin Dan holding a high-grade yellow-level loudspeaker, he shocked the Hedao realm killer to death just because he was very close... Alas, the author is really a bit wanton. After reading three hundred chapters, I still don't understand the protagonist at all. Why is he able to combine the heaven-level skills and the yellow-level skills like a fool? Why can he casually learn from a blacksmith for two or three days, and then he can easily try out how to refine magic weapons? Even other weapon refiners have to work hard to make one, but you can easily get dozens of them in a day? What's the reason for such an exaggerated gap? Too enlightened? There is no exact description, so I just compared the learning speed of water mist technique with a few people who can't enter any sect without spiritual roots. Besides, what have you learned? There is a book called "Magic Forging and Refining Techniques" and a book called "Nine Hammers and Eighteen Bends". I don't know what magic and secret techniques these two books are. Just broke it! The reason for the solidification of thinking is that the order of the formations has been broken. The inheritance of large sects has been recorded for ten thousand years. After so many years, just changing the order has imprisoned everyone's thoughts. This is really outrageous. This book should be changed to Muddleheaded Cultivation of Immortality, which is more appropriate and also more attractive than the current title.

The story is still enjoyable to listen to, and the more you listen to it, the more interesting it becomes, until you can't stop! Come on! Urgent update!

It describes the grievances of the world and the helplessness of the people at the bottom. The protagonist's gradually improving strength brings back the lost dignity. It feels like this is a fairy tale with a martial arts flavor.

If you are about to read this book, there are a few points that you may need to pay attention to. It is not like the traditional fairy tales about various adventures and upgrading to fight monsters. It is also not like the darkness in some of the dark fairy tales now, nor is it like the plainness of some farming novels. The overall storyline is humorous and interesting, but it also feels very bland. Many of the languages ​​were not familiar at the first reading. After reading it again, I found it to be particularly interesting and profound, and not like the kind of mystique. It is more relevant to life, and the author's writing skills are still there. The protagonist in the author's novel is an ordinary person. If his only adventure is that he took a lot of pills, he did not explode and died, and he did not have a good teacher. In the early stage, I had to explore many things by myself. I was not smart enough, but I was not stupid either. Just like an ordinary person, he started something by chance, stumbled, and entered in confusion...

This book is good and very good. In novels about cultivating immortals and slaying immortals, it would be boring to write about a person who is separated from society and practicing alone. It would also be boring to write about a person who always goes up and down and blows up the planet with one punch. The breath of life must be present, and the smoke of fireworks is indispensable! Novels about cultivating immortals without fireworks have no humanity, and of course they shouldn't be novels that people should read. ——Comments made when I read about Chapter 100.

The plot is delicate and compact, the connection is silky and smooth, the ups and downs are ups and downs, and it's natural.

I read a dozen chapters in one go. Compared with the beginning of Stupid Bird, the progress is obvious, the language control is better, and it is fascinating. Once you take a look, you won't be able to stop. The author updates very quickly and is worth following. It's not like those authors who update once or twice a day. When the plot is critical, they can't make it through several days of catching up.

This book is very well written. The words are simple and not showy, and the story is not complicated. It talks about martial arts and cultivating immortals, but there are many people and things similar to modern society, making it down to earth. The language expression and thinking have a bit of a cologne flavor in some places. Seemingly simple yet evocative. It can be said to be different.

It's a great fairy-cultivation novel that is close to the ordinary life of ordinary people. The fights are not too fantasy. You will be kicked down from high altitude when flying a flying sword. The spells are not exaggeratedly powerful. You can beat people to death in close combat with the spells. Daily life is quite happy.

Not bad, the plot is quite exciting, the characters are vivid and individual, and there are no ethical and moral constraints. They laugh and curse, and play life. If you don't accept it, you won't give up. But you also stick to the bottom line of being a human being, do what you do and don't do, and never give in. But the traces of "Stupid Bird Cultivating Immortality" are too heavy! I just like this way, acting spontaneously, not following the rules, and sticking to the bottom line of the human race. Although it is a bit nonsensical, it is very exciting, memorable and enjoyable! It's a pity that the ending is too hasty!

After reading eight chapters, overall it is still very good. The male protagonist has a very good mentality and noble moral character. He can maintain an optimistic attitude even if he is bullied all the time. When he meets someone he does not know, he can generously give away the precious spiritual rice described earlier. Even if the male protagonist eats chaffy vegetables, he is absolutely brilliant [like][like][like][like][like][like]

The author came from Benniao Cultivation. The quality of the author's books is very good, and this one is equally attractive! It looks even better than the previous version, which was too compact and kept chasing me while I was sleeping. This book is relaxed and leisurely, allowing readers to relax!

Perhaps Tomato's best novel about mortals cultivating immortality. The world of cultivating immortals here has the coldness and indifference between relatives and friends, the harshness of the world within the sect, and the dirty world of immortals. The protagonist is also a "real person" with various shortcomings. All authority is stained with dirt under the banner of pan-morality. From this perspective, it is the most realistic and fantasy realistic critical novel. But Mr. Zhou's loyalty and righteousness are the last stars that support progress. Thanks to the author, looking forward to the great work!

All the laughter, anger and curses are turned into articles, pulling gourds here and there, hiding the truth! Cursing the heavens and the earth and criticizing others, I can't laugh or cry. The first part is wonderfully written, but the second part is very messy and you can skip reading it.

I have read about 50 chapters, and overall the book "Tomato" seems to be okay, but the author could consider the transition in the text. It seems a bit stiff now, but for the time being, it is still readable and enjoyable. I would like to give you a recommendation.

The humorous text vividly tells a story that is not quite complete. It gets bigger and bigger until I can't hold it in the end. It is divided into several large paragraphs. Each paragraph is well written, with foreshadowing and ending, but the connection between paragraphs is not perfect. Overall, it is a good book. Don't think too much about it, just enjoy the text.

Advantages: 1. Funny, 2. It points out the advantages and disadvantages of many social systems. Just based on these two advantages, it is a very good literary work. Small shortcomings: Some points in "Build a City on the Ground" were not explained clearly. I will add "Build a City in the Sky" to supplement it. I skipped the later parts and ignored them.