From the Start, I Beat Yin Zhiping to a Pulp

The five points are for the first few mission worlds. They are indeed pretty good. Except for the water panel and a lot of bad sentences, they are still good. I deducted two points because the writing of One Piece World is too special. Everyone in the martial arts world knows that they will fight quickly and run away after completing the task. The One Piece World has changed directly. The more I write, the more chapters are written. It is not finished yet, so I might as well start a new book with the One Piece World. The most annoying thing is like this, what's the matter? There are so many historical stories of five thousand years in China. Are there not enough myths and stories to write about? Oh, you have no patience at all when writing stories about your own country, and it ends in a few strokes. How about writing stories about other countries that make you write like a god? The more you write, the more fascinated you become? Don't say that I am discriminating. The real situation is like this. If you treat me the same way in the whole world, you have nothing to say, but you don't. Moreover, I see that the more you write, the more excited you are and you look like you don't want it to end.

For now, the writing is pretty good and it's very enjoyable to watch. I hope I can maintain the standard in the future and don't practice the Sunflower Book.

The protagonist is decisive in killing, and the bricks are used in an awkward manner, but it is not very friendly to the elderly! Brother Qiang's way of doing things is so to my liking! [Face covering][Face covering]🤭🤭💕💕💕

The author should change the number of internal force to realm, or add realm after it

Let's see if an ancient martial arts association comes out. Will Pig's Feet have to cooperate with the state or work part-time?

It looks okay, but the author is too short [face covering]

The front is very good. Ancient martial artist, I can only say goodbye. The main world cannot be more stable.

It's okay, the plot is normal, there are still interesting things to watch, there should be some after Pirates has passed the Hokage, վ'ᴗ' ի and then Qin Shi Mingyue, Legend of White Snake, Journey to the West, Cover the Sky, Perfect, Great Desolate World, these worlds are probably too small to finish the book after writing,,, but if the combat power and plot can match it, it will be perfect! ! ! Come on, come on, come on! ! !

The front is okay, but I don't like the back very much, maybe it's a personal preference

What about women? When will there be women? How can one sleep alone at night in the village without women? I can't stand it anymore, it's a mess at the back, the title of the book is just a lie. Let's go.