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Does the author want to bend the reader?

Although there are few chapters, it looks a little uncomfortable, and some details are not described carefully enough, but the plot is okay, and the male protagonist is very good, has a good personality, behaves like a gentleman, and with the space golden finger, every life is wonderful. The male protagonist never cares about other people's opinions and is not affected by it. He sticks to his original intention, is emotionally stable, and lives freely. I can't do this myself, and I like people like this very much.

Hahahaha, the content is not bad, but the paragraphs are too long, one paragraph of content is one page.

Although I haven't read it for a long time, I still want to post it. I think the setting of the author Goldfinger and the story of each small unit are very good, and the plot is also very good. However, in terms of description, it feels like writing a detailed outline and recording the process. It lacks descriptions of scenes and actions. But after all, there are not many chapters in each unit. The writing is detailed and concise, which is acceptable. Another thing is to divide it into paragraphs. Don't be afraid of dividing it too much, just be afraid of not dividing it. In the second unit, "The Moon on Ice," I remember that the longest paragraph was five pages long. If it's convenient, I really hope the author can try to change it. I hope the author will write better and better in the future.

Just discovered it today. It's a good book, I like the character of the protagonist, but there are too few chapters, not enough to read👀Update soon [laughter]

There is no more after Chapter 78. What happened?

With such a time travel, no wonder the previous space owner got tired of giving up [laughing and crying] I feel tired just watching it

It's really beautiful, but the paragraphs shouldn't be too long. Some paragraphs can't even fit on a mobile phone.

The Ultimate Classes 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5, The Ultimate Family, The Ultimate Three Kingdoms, The Ultimate Villain, The Ultimate Dormitory, The Temptation of Going Home, The Three Daughters of the Xia Family, Peach Blossom Girl, Smiling Pasta, Happy Multiple Choice, Love of Roses, Boys and Girls Over Flowers, Destined to Love You, The Prince Turns into a Frog, The Gorgeous Adventures of Splendid Yuan, Sakurano San Plus One, The Return of the Daughter, The Hundred Percent Daughter, The Thousand Gold Thief, Three Lives Three Worlds Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms, Three Lives Three Worlds Pillow Book, The Diaoman Princess, The Diaoman Qiao Royal Doctor, The Legend of Zhen Huan, Ruyi's Royal Love in the Palace, Balabala Little Demon Fairy, Little Flower Fairy, Ye Luoli Fairy Dream, Douluo Continent, Beautiful Melody, Wonderful Paradise, Philippine Dream Girl, Idol Activities, Clearance,

It looks more like an outline than a novel. In fact, each world can be written in detail, but it is too short. I really like the protagonist's outlook on life. I gave it five points mainly because of this. There are also some plots that the author has set up that are good, but there are really too few. In the early stage, the problem of not dividing it into paragraphs and having paragraphs that were too long was a serious problem, but it gradually got better later on. Some worlds feel like they are unfinished and come to an abrupt end without any sequel. I look forward to the author's great progress and more exciting subsequent articles!

I like articles like this. It's very relaxing. Do you have any similar recommendations?

I beg you, I kneel down and beg you, can you break it up a little bit?

I like the character of the male protagonist very much. He is sincere, persistent, self-disciplined, active in life, the plot is not abusive, and he is free and unrestrained.

I like one world and one skill, and slowly enrich myself. I won't force feelings, and I won't deliberately stay single. Everything goes with the flow, and it's very comfortable to watch.

The idea is clear, next time you can try to write a chapter or a short chapter of fast travel, so that you can finish it directly after passing the interesting part, and then move on to the next world. The layout is really too dense. You don't need to write so many paragraphs. You can simplify the content or divide it into more paragraphs.

Tang Yanchu unexpectedly obtained the Chiba Space and traveled through different worlds after his death. He kept learning and progressing, lived seriously, and understood different lives. He had a stable mood, a clear mind, a noble character, and a gentleman's style. He traveled thousands of times and returned to his original intention. He was both male and female. His emotional lines were all male regardless of gender. The chapters were messed up, and many of them disappeared after only a few chapters.

It has been found that the author has only been married once to a woman, and the rest were all to men.

Come on, it's very well written [blowing kiss]

I saw that many ancient costume worlds mentioned Li Xiangyi's Xiangyi Taijian and the swordsmanship in Yun Zhiyu. Why haven't I seen these two worlds?

The plot is okay, and it doesn't offend me too much. It's just the segmentation of it (Crazy) that gives me a headache. However, it can be used as an audiobook, but it's not convenient to write a segment review (Grievance). Come on 👏, it's very well written [love]

It's pretty good to watch. I like the character of the protagonist, but there's just too little of it. It's not interesting enough.

It's super, super nice [blowing kiss][blowing kiss], ah ah ah ah, I hope the author will make more updates

Looks good but too short

It's okay, but there are a few that have no follow-up, what's going on?

It looks good, the content is good, but the later chapters are so confusing that I changed the article while reading this.

I like the author's well-written writing in large letters and hope to continue writing. I still hope that the author can adjust some chapters because I listen to the book, so it sounds strange to me. Mainly I listen to the book so that I don't have to adjust too much, so it's hard for me, but I still like the text very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard! (˘ ³˘)❤

Every world is well written.

Why not 79?

This book is very good, author, keep it up [like][like][like]

The author's writing style is very good. I read the whole article very smoothly. I like it. But the worlds that follow are all half and half, and I hope they can be completed. The author is then welcome to continue writing this book and will support watching it.