Dead Date: Red-Eyed Storyteller

It's a rare book about a rigid contract. The only drawback is that the update is a bit slow. Two chapters a day are not enough to read. Author, why don't we discuss this and I'll give you a gift. How about you update it every day?

Very immersive! It's not like other fandoms that just go into the air every second and then add some other bad content just for the sake of word count and break away from the feelings of the contract itself!

How should I put it? [Thinking] I feel very good about this book, and it is very readable! Secondly, the author has not changed much in terms of the plot (except for Ping Ma's part). I think it is okay to choose Ma Xiaoling as the heroine [blowing kiss]. I also hope that the author can keep [learned] and finish the book. In addition, the update is expected to be accelerated!

Don't argue, everyone. In fact, the original drama set that the general was the only Pangu, and there was no Pangu clan at all. Destiny sealed the memory of the general while he was sleeping, and used Pangu's blood to create a group of fake Pangu red-eyed zombies. Destiny is the great elder of the Pangu clan. . . The above is the plot of Zongyue 4 written by Chen Shisan. Because Qi Wen (Ma Xiaoling) was injured during the filming of Jong Yoo 30, so Jong Yoo 4 was not filmed. At that time, many companies and directors wanted to buy the script for Jong Yoo 4, but Chen Shisan did not sell it. . .

This author's writing style is pretty good, and his writing is also very delicate. Come on! But I still have to say that the donkeys in the production team never dare to rest like this, so hurry up! ! ! [Laughing and crying]

Although there are some controversial issues, it is actually not a big deal. To be honest, this book is quite good so far, and it is definitely at the forefront of the novels about deadlocks. I hope the author will update it faster, and the writing will get better and better, and it will not be unfinished.

I'm not an expert on this, but I'd like to express my opinion anyway. After I carefully read your question and thought about it for a long time, I finally decided not to describe my point of view because I don't know how to answer it. Like I said at the beginning, I'm not an expert on this either.

I feel pretty good, the plot is pretty good too, but the main character is a little bit 🐶

I can write it so far. It's a dead date fanfic. It's very immersive. I'll keep working on it later.

To be honest, compared to all the novels in the same series written by Tomato, this one is the one I am most satisfied with so far, both in terms of plot and characterization. It is just too short. I hope it won't end unfinished. Come on, author (っ´ω｀)ﾉ(╥ω╥)

Met a young woman online I met a 30-year-old young woman on the Internet. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good. But she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She lives in my city. Not far away, we made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have a beauty function, but when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She is much prettier than in the photo, and she is my type. She also recognized me. She didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole process They were peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. After dinner, she held my hand when we walked out of the restaurant, and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi back. She insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content.

I haven't read such a good book for a long time. Great support for the author. Don't cut it off. It doesn't matter if you read less every day. Try to complete the trilogy.

To be honest, this Zongyue fanfic is the most detailed one I have ever read. I believe the author has read Zongyue more than once. The writing style is also very good and it is very enjoyable to read. Unlike other fictitious fics, the story line is not clear at all, and it feels very simple. It is like a fan fiction, and it loses its flavor after reading more than ten chapters.

Non-systematic rigid contract writing is very good. You shouldn't split the original male and female protagonists. This would deviate from the storyteller's setting. You can use other characters to join in. Splitting the original protagonists is the biggest failure. The most touching thing about the deadlock is that their stories create miracles.

Well, the book is still interesting, but the metaphors in some descriptions make the two existences of generals and ministers look rubbish. As the god of war in the Pangu clan, it is too much to use it as a metaphor in the dream, which may not be able to do it or can only compete with Domoto Shizu, who breaks through the psychological barrier. There is also the part about repairing internal organs, which consumes one-third or two-thirds of the divine power. I just want to say that Wardfa's brother's book is very good, but don't use metaphors randomly. Come on, the book is good to read.

It would have been more interesting if she didn't have any ambiguous situations with Ma Xiaoling and Huang Zhenzhen. You just need to help them not to get involved, especially as soon as feelings get involved, the flavor will change and they will find it boring.

This is the best book about dead dates that I have seen. I hope I can continue writing it.

It's okay. It's considered a masterpiece. It's been on the bookshelf for a long time and I don't even know it's finished. It would be better if the emotions were written more delicately. The creativity is good and the combat power is up to par. It's very good.

I like this topic. I haven't read it yet. I'll start raising it first.

It's a super good novel. I feel like I've read it again. I feel very immersed in it. I really like the direction of the plot. It makes all the regrets in the TV series come true. I just watched it and I'm looking forward to the story between the protagonist and Ma Xiaoling.

I am not giving five stars because of the good writing. I just hope that I can raise the rating and lure more people to come in. Let's just wash my eyes...

There are not many of the same type, but this one is better looking.

I really like this book. I hope I can stick with it and finish it. Come on, can you please read more? It's not enough. [Pinch][Pinch][Pinch][Make a face]

I have feelings after watching Chapter 300. It is purely a voice-to-text conversion of the plot of the TV series. I can see that Chapter 300 is not about how well written it is, but purely about recalling the TV series.

Okay, it's pretty good-looking, mainly because I'm afraid of eunuchs

A very nice book, I hope the author will update it soon [Hold][Hold]

This is probably the best-looking and most stable mature of all the dead dates I've ever seen.

This is the best dead date fanfic I have ever read, I hope the author can keep it up

It's still good. Although I only watched the first one, I can still imagine the subsequent plot after watching your plot. Come on! Take good care of you!

It seems ok for now. Hope it won't break