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I saw the latest chapter, Chapter 82. The author's writing style is very good and the description is spot on. But I don't know exactly what he is talking about. You might say that the author is talking about Lin Meng's daily life, which is a bit too plain and uneventful. At this time, too much description seems a bit boring and redundant. But if you want to talk about Xiaoxiao's story, she feels like a lucky little girl, and other characteristics are not highlighted. Of these three adventures in another world, the first time there was no drama, the second time she seemed a little smart at the beginning of her reasoning, then she was a little decisive when she saw "Greed", and the third time she seemed a bit powerful with some tool kits and conspicuous bags. But the overall feeling is that it feels a bit boring and I don't know why. It can be seen that the author has conceived a grand world view, but after digging a lot of holes, there is no sign of filling them. Maybe it's because it's still in the laying-out stage? The author probably wanted to create a double thread. I originally thought Lin Meng would be the main plot, but his life is too ordinary. He seems to have a strange ability to transform what he feels is right into reality, and he has not yet realized this. This makes the story "in line with common sense", but this is a novel, and it is not true that life is about ordinary life. Another thread can only say that it is okay, and it does not surprise me very much. The connection between the two threads is a bit weak, and the difference in strength between the two is too big, making it difficult to get together. Five-star praise makes more people feel the same.

Seeing how I say it now, it should be two protagonists, and there is probably a female protagonist, but I don't know what the connection is between the first protagonist (Lin) and the second protagonist (Ye). Now I personally speculate that the twisted literature (?) Has something to do with the identity of the first protagonist (Lin) as a writer. The first protagonist (Lin) is an idealist, which is the so-called cogito. In other words, there is no direct relationship between the first protagonist (Lin) and the second protagonist. I don't understand what the author has to say about the second protagonist. If it was just about fighting against a strange world, it could be brushed off. Can't understand

It's a good start, hope to continue It belongs to the late stage type [cool]

I couldn't get used to the dual perspective, so I left early, but the impression was pretty good. I gave it 5 stars to encourage the author. Dual perspective is still too difficult. It would be much better if it was a single perspective. After all, I haven't seen many dual perspective novels. This is even the first one I've read, even though I can't finish it.

Uh... A CP romance book covered in the skin of Invincible and Qunxiang, When I saw 4 pairs of cps appeared in Chapter 200, I realized that the previous content was either about cp or the foreshadowing of cp... Eh

It is rare and can be controlled, which is quite good. The male protagonist is a bit lacking

It looks good so far, I hope to keep up the good work

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

The multiple perspectives are good, and the reading rhythm is relatively comfortable. This kind of subject has a strong sense of substitution from the main perspective, so there are many problems. It is easy to get visual fatigue and the combat power is easy to collapse if you keep C all the time. Then you have to upgrade the dungeon. The dungeon is too difficult to control, and there are many logic loopholes. Generally speaking, it prefers daily writing.

It's very beautiful. It's really very beautiful. I have a special sense of the picture when I watch it. It's the author, have you come ashore? I seem to have seen this writing style somewhere.

Very high quality among tomatoes

I watched it for a long time and didn't even know whether I was watching a male channel or a female channel. It was like two books one by one and one by one [Chigua]

Please update it as soon as possible. I have exhausted all the opportunities to generate electricity for my love. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's very interesting to read, and I don't see any bad points. The setting of the article is very interesting, but I wish there were more roles for the protagonist. It always feels like a group portrait article.

It looks great, why is the score so low?

It looks good, but I still want to ask when the two lines will meet [crying] The protagonist evil god has not been discovered, which feels not exciting enough [laughs evilly]

This book is not bad. Although it is not very coherent, each chapter still has a certain connection. The protagonist's character is also likeable. The whole book gives people a relatively leisurely feeling.

It's quite comfortable to watch [eating melon]

Good reviews need no words

The author speeds up and continues writing

It's uncomfortable. I wanted to watch Lin Meng's side of the story, but it turned out that most of it was Ye's side of the story. Who is the protagonist? There is no intersection between these two.

Updates are too slow. It's rare for a book to be included in my bookshelf. Please keep updating! Good job, come on

It's beautiful. I should update it soon. I almost forgot that there is such a book on my bookshelf.

I feel that it would be more in line with the public's appetite if I only wrote about Lin Meng's line (of course this method is also possible, but there is always a strange feeling that cannot be explained)

When does the author give five stars for ten chapters a day?

Alias, XX on the tip of the tongue ̗̀(๑ᵔ⌔ᵔ๑) Come on, come on!

The author hopes to write more about the male protagonist's line, which is more beautiful. Like it very much.

This is the first time I've seen dual perspective novels. It's as rare as writing in the first person. Of course it's very interesting.

Why are the book reviews not high?

Come on! Come on! Come on!