After Twelve Years as a Village Girl, I Began Cultivating Immortality

A new writer, writing for the first time. There is no outline (I don't know how to write an outline), no manuscripts saved, and I try to update every day 🤦. The published plots are almost forgotten as I write them. If you find that the settings before and after are different, you can tell me in the comments, and I will definitely change it 🧐

I wasn't very hopeful when I saw a score of 7.1, But I didn't expect it to be very well written. The heroine's growth was full of twists and turns, very difficult, and she practiced step by step. At the beginning, she was given a lot of inheritance spiritual stones, but they were stolen again. When she was desperate, she knew that she could sell the talisman to earn some rent money, then raised pigs, practiced, watered the medicinal fields, and worked hard to learn the talismans. She found her comfort zone in Xiaoxian City, but an accident made her truly realize the cruel reality of the world of immortality, and she began to be inspired, changed maps, and went to big cities. This history of struggle is very real. There is no golden finger. It does not mean that one is mentally mature from the beginning and can see a person's vivid growth. Very good. Now that I just saw the map change, I would like to comment first. The author remains!

I really like this kind of down-to-earth story. The heroine works hard to improve step by step, not because of the system, not because she knows the "plot", but because she has a direction to work hard and keeps moving forward. It feels very good.

I think it's okay, but the heroine in the early stage is still a modern person, and she will be a bit useless, but when she has seen more, she won't feel that way. If you like to watch mortals cultivating immortals, you can watch it if you are slow, but the update is no longer available [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] It's not easy to update

It happens to be March 3rd, so I'll use folk songs as a metaphor: Guangxi's folk songs are all about battle, which can be understood as the type of people who fight to the death all day long; Yunnan folk songs are more unremarkable, and can be understood as those who can't live without the relationship between men and women; and Guizhou folk songs are more bitter, and can be understood as the type of people who are abandoned by the whole world and struggle to survive. If it is a folk song from the northwest, it is relatively high-pitched and loud, and the main theme is to be happy to the end. And here, it is more like the folk songs in Huguang and Jiangxi, which are all about daily life and small thoughts. When you see the elder brother carrying water, you will praise a few words, when you see the younger sister picking tea, you will praise a few words, and when you see the little brother herding cows, you will also say a few words. Moreover, I always feel that the author is quite... A little girl. There are some twists and turns in the progress of the story line. She is very cautious and expects the approval of others. She is not as clean and neat as a working woman, but she is not as flexible as the bottom line in the vegetable market. Overall, it's not uncomfortable. Seeing the heroine come all the way, I don't have big expectations, but it still makes people feel that they are neighbors after all...

It's very beautiful, why don't you write it down?

It is rare to see a complete non-CP cultivation heroine on the site. Very nice

It's pretty good-looking, and there's nothing poisonous about it so far.

I like this kind of ordinary yet extraordinary cultivation of immortality. The heroine must insist on practicing casual cultivation. I finally graduated, and I especially don't want to see the school concept of cultivating immortals like Zongmen.

The author's writing style is smooth and you can take a look at the bottom of the world of cultivating immortals.