One Piece: Awakening the Flame-Flame Fruit

This is the first time I've seen a One Piece fanfic. There's almost no Luffy plot at all. It's great, it's simply great! Ace's death can be said to be difficult for many people to accept, and your version really fills the gap in many people's hearts. I personally have a wishful thinking. It would be better if the white-bearded father could survive. The plot is very well written, and the characterization is quite good and nuanced. The only drawback is that it is really short. It would be perfect if it could be longer. Also, the plot is a little rushed. It's really good to read, but I was just happy to read it, and it suddenly ended. If it can be expanded and the content enriched, it can really be said to be a good novel that I want to recommend to everyone I meet!

This rating is for my nephew, I hope he can see it (Kevin's motto for saving the world) Please @him and say a nice word to me, saying that his uncle misses him

Are you Ace or someone else's soul? Ace's sense of inclusion is too strong. Or should Ace simply be resurrected?

For the character portrayal of the characters in One Piece, it is very good. It doesn't look much different from the original characters. It makes Ace really live.

It's okay, but I didn't expect Ace and Yamato to be CPs, and Luffy's plot is a bit lacking. Hahaha, I want to see more interactive plots between the three brothers.

Just think of it as Ace who has awakened his past life memories.

The plot is reasonable, and the awakening of the natural system is eye-catching.

The overall plot is good. Momonosuke died, so it must be full marks.

A very good novel, Ace and Yamato finally come together, a happy ending.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking