(Not many words but not bad + Momonosuke must die)
"Don't attack the Whitebeard Pirates!"
This is the unwritten iron law of the Grand Line. When this iron law is broken, where will the Whitebeard Pirates go?
"Fire Fist" Ace, who was supposed to die, wakes up in the tomb with the pirate mentor system, and he wants to defend this iron law.
"My birth has meaning."
"I will live a life without regrets."
Ace said so.
Reader comments
This is the first time I've seen a One Piece fanfic. There's almost no Luffy plot at all. It's great, it's simply great! Ace's death can be said to be difficult for many people to accept, and your version really fills the gap in many people's hearts. I personally have a wishful thinking. It would be better if the white-bearded father could survive. The plot is very well written, and the characterization is quite good and nuanced. The only drawback is that it is really short. It would be perfect if it could be longer. Also, the plot is a little rushed. It's really good to read, but I was just happy to read it, and it suddenly ended. If it can be expanded and the content enriched, it can really be said to be a good novel that I want to recommend to everyone I meet!
This rating is for my nephew, I hope he can see it (Kevin's motto for saving the world) Please @him and say a nice word to me, saying that his uncle misses him
Are you Ace or someone else's soul? Ace's sense of inclusion is too strong. Or should Ace simply be resurrected?
For the character portrayal of the characters in One Piece, it is very good. It doesn't look much different from the original characters. It makes Ace really live.
Just think of it as Ace who has awakened his past life memories.
It's okay, but I didn't expect Ace and Yamato to be CPs, and Luffy's plot is a bit lacking. Hahaha, I want to see more interactive plots between the three brothers.
The overall plot is good. Momonosuke died, so it must be full marks.
The plot is reasonable, and the awakening of the natural system is eye-catching.
Thank you for your hard work in writing.
A masterpiece like no other
Interesting extra chapter
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Like like like
Good-looking, love to watch, watch more
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's okay. Either we're fighting or we're on the way to fight.
Very good, not too OOC, reasonable personality
It feels okay! The thing I want to complain about most is that the Devil Fruit disappears after a while after the owner dies. Is it because of the system? And Momonosuke died later... This revenge story is okay
A very good novel, Ace and Yamato finally come together, a happy ending.
Not bad, not bad, quite exciting, but a little short
It's so enjoyable to watch. It's not too long, but it's full of essence. You won't find it boring after watching half of it🤩🤩🤩
This is the first time I've seen a One Piece fanfic. There's almost no Luffy plot at all. It's great, it's simply great! Ace's death can be said to be difficult for many people to accept, and your version really fills the gap in many people's hearts. I personally have a wishful thinking. It would be better if the white-bearded father could survive. The plot is very well written, and the characterization is quite good and nuanced. The only drawback is that it is really short. It would be perfect if it could be longer. Also, the plot is a little rushed. It's really good to read, but I was just happy to read it, and it suddenly ended. If it can be expanded and the content enriched, it can really be said to be a good novel that I want to recommend to everyone I meet!
This rating is for my nephew, I hope he can see it (Kevin's motto for saving the world) Please @him and say a nice word to me, saying that his uncle misses him
Are you Ace or someone else's soul? Ace's sense of inclusion is too strong. Or should Ace simply be resurrected?
For the character portrayal of the characters in One Piece, it is very good. It doesn't look much different from the original characters. It makes Ace really live.
Just think of it as Ace who has awakened his past life memories.
It's okay, but I didn't expect Ace and Yamato to be CPs, and Luffy's plot is a bit lacking. Hahaha, I want to see more interactive plots between the three brothers.
The overall plot is good. Momonosuke died, so it must be full marks.
The plot is reasonable, and the awakening of the natural system is eye-catching.
Thank you for your hard work in writing.
A masterpiece like no other
Interesting extra chapter
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Like like like
Good-looking, love to watch, watch more
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's okay. Either we're fighting or we're on the way to fight.
Very good, not too OOC, reasonable personality
It feels okay! The thing I want to complain about most is that the Devil Fruit disappears after a while after the owner dies. Is it because of the system? And Momonosuke died later... This revenge story is okay
A very good novel, Ace and Yamato finally come together, a happy ending.
Not bad, not bad, quite exciting, but a little short
It's so enjoyable to watch. It's not too long, but it's full of essence. You won't find it boring after watching half of it🤩🤩🤩
This book is awesome, the details are so perfect