The Heroine Said, Who Can Become an Immortal and Engage in House Fighting?

The plot is smooth, but the ages of the protagonists are not consistent. I stayed in Shenzhuang for 7 years, then 4 years, and then half a year. When I arrived at the sect, I was almost 12 years old, and then I was 9 years old.

Because I really like traditional immortality writing, I like this kind of treasured writing very much. The writing style is smooth and natural, and some minor flaws will not affect it. I hope the author will continue to write better works. [Like][Like][Like]

This book is well written and deserves high marks! The rating is too low! The author is a bit weak and the ending is a bit rushed! From beginning to end, it was very good. Looking forward to the new article!

It's nice to be able to see the ending description~ Five stars for encouragement. I hope your next book will have CP. I rarely read books without CP, let alone read to the end [laughing] Come on, big time.

Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡! You can write a sequel to ascend to the spiritual world, find the second half of the technique, and ascend to the fairy world. You can also write about why Yujue asked the powerful to terminate the contract with him and ask him to find the heroine. In the end, it is possible to let her ascend to the divine realm [laughing]

The writing is quite good, clean, clear and delicate, and it didn't make me want to abandon the article when I saw the beginning! In fact, although the ending is concise, the author still tried his best to explain the heroine's follow-up. It's not bad👍It's not like some endings suddenly. It's quality [like] Keep up the good work💪

It's good to watch, the plot is good, it's not a routine story, and the female supporting characters are not tools, they each have their own personalities.

It's good-looking, the heroine is neat and tidy, she's also very diligent in cultivating immortals, and the space is used well, but the ending is a bit hasty and simple

Not bad [smile] The timeline is a bit confusing except for age and so on. Just change it.

The heroine has never apprenticed to a teacher from beginning to end. It feels like she is mainly self-taught. She is cautious when things happen. She is caring but not a holy mother. The article is not verbose and quite attractive. It is worth reading. I hope the author will continue his efforts

The plot is very interesting and rich in content. Although not colorful, it is still worth seeing

The logic is rigorous, there is no female rivalry, there are many women in the protagonist group, and the plot is complete. Even if it is about to break the bank, the author still tries his best to justify himself. Some details are well described. The heroine is tenacious, brave and kind, cautious and bold, and has no CP. Looking forward to the author's next article, cheers author!

Very beautiful, worth recommending

A very nice book

It's good, the heroine is gritty.

After watching it, my opinion is that the ending is too fast.

It was so good, but the ending was too fast and I didn't get enough of it.

Meow~ My personal sense is still good, so please give it a try, author!

It was well written, but it ended a little too quickly. I haven't seen enough. [Like] [Like] Keep going, keep going, keep going.

It's actually quite good, there's nothing to argue about, and there aren't many reviews. Because of the low ratings, the author was a little discouraged and ended it in a hurry, which is a pity!

It's pretty good, come on, the story is simple and unpretentious, and the heroine's slow-burning is also good.

Come on! The writing is very good. Among all the novels I have heard, this novel is the first time I have given such a high evaluation.

It has a beautiful direction, warm and refreshing. In the popular trend of fast food and refreshing articles, this kind of writing style seems to be unlucky, but it is commendable, and the rhythm is not loose. The whole is simple, and it is told slowly and slowly. It is not slow to talk about. It has a daily direction and some parts that focus on the plot. It is particularly good that there is no cp and no ambiguity. It shows the warm comradeship, mentorship and mutual help. As for the heroine, although she has a certain golden finger and is gifted, her portrayal is reasonable and she has the common characteristics of ordinary people. She will be fearful and hesitant, regretful and shy. Sometimes she is timid, sometimes obsessed with money, and sometimes cute, but this does not affect her pure heart, hard work and bravery, no hesitation in giving, and the ability to correct her mistakes. Of course, out of my own subjective selfishness, it would be great if the heroine could extend her compassion to the spiritual beasts, haha. The protagonist group and the sect to which they belong are generally optimistic, bright and magnanimous, and there is nothing to be conceited. Naturally, the work has shortcomings, some characters are superficial, the story is not comprehensive, and the ending is emotional, which is a bit regretful, but understandable. I personally think the author is great, full of emotion and talent. I hope he will not forget his original intention and continue to output positive writing energy. By the way, the author made a lot of typos. Although it's not harmful, it would be better to be more careful.

Come on, to encourage you

Well written, but a bit short

Encourage five-star reviews

It's great, but the ending is too rushed.

It's beautiful, thank you to the author!

Good looking ~ worth recommending

It was okay, but the ending was a little too quick.