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The contrast between the protagonist's personalities is so fucking huge, plus there are a lot of typos (the "she" used to describe Xiaoxue became "he") and the villain label. The villain doesn't match the protagonist at all, but he is quite decisive in killing and invincible. The enemy, but the label of villain, I personally think it can be removed. This really does not match the protagonist at all. Moreover, the writing of this content can easily make people confused. It is a bit like a behind-the-scenes story but a bit different, so it is very confusing and very uncomfortable when watching it.

Just so-so, the writing is quite messy, and the main character is like a fool. Didn't you see what your theme is and you want to push it sideways? It's not like walking behind the scenes, growth flow? Not to mention, invincible is not completely invincible, and the emotional line is a mess. This kind of plot in the book has long been regarded as a relic. I didn't expect to see it now. Being able to write is a bonus and can promote the development of the plot. People who can't write and read it will be confused and lose points. Moreover, the character creation is not satisfactory. The contrast between the front and back, the characters' personalities are so different that it makes people feel uncomfortable. Well, it's just so-so.

The characters and character ages are not consistent with the original work

Don't you know that giving away soul bones to ordinary people will cause death?

Why do you suddenly lose your memory? Why don't you just kill Douluo and go to the alliance world? You have to have total amnesia. If you have total amnesia, can you really bring out the Dragon King and the Star Spirit? The fighting strength is broken

Real TM sand sculpture

Outrageous, but okay