I Have Accepted Seven Awesome Disciples, Where Should I Go?

Yes, I am optimistic about the author, but what you are writing now is biased towards daily life. If you take the main line, I am afraid that you will change your style and fail to grasp the description of the disciples, resulting in too fast pace and falling behind. I suggest that the author should focus on creating a clear, definite and three-dimensional character image of the protagonist and his disciples. If necessary, write about the disciples' journey from the perspective of the disciples or the perspective of the protagonist (add some independent scenes). As long as the protagonist is involved in the process, it is not too biased. The main line is only It means that the beacon is a direction. We put the pen and ink on the branch line between the disciple and the protagonist. As for the heroine, my suggestion is not to have too many, after all, she is a role model, but it is unreasonable and the effect will not be good if the mother is not taken. In addition, if the heroine is small, don't engage in too much ambiguity. , After all, being ambiguous will not have any effect but will dissuade some people with mental mysophobia and some studs. However, I don't see the use of the fairy. Even her appearance and the protagonist's attitude towards her made me feel a little unreasonable. However, the author's advice is for listening (you should understand), not necessarily for changing your thinking. Finally, I wish the author a spring of literary inspiration, 30 chapters in one day and 70 chapters in two days. (There are too few authors and the amount of articles is small, so not many people will read it)

I am the author, tell me if you have anything

The book is good, the author's writing style is very good, and the writing is good. It is worth pursuing.

Okay, okay, it's worth reading because the treasure novel is very strong.

Super nice, a treasure novel delayed by the name

I recommend a good book, but the name is too distracting.

It's a very interesting article. The names of several disciples are very... Hard to describe, and it's kind of humorous in a different way. It's just that the protagonist's cultivation is so simple, it makes me want to take on the role [face covering] [face covering]

Give me five stars to encourage you and keep writing.

It is humorous and quite funny. It is worth reading. Support!