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A newcomer wrote a book, and there were some nasty points in the early part that I didn't understand. I corrected them after they were pointed out, and everyone just skipped them without affecting the overall plot.
The most exciting parts of the first volume are in the last thirty chapters, but without foreshadowing, the excitement of the following chapters will be greatly reduced.
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Please give your review after reading the first volume. Thank you for your understanding and support!
In addition, the third volume is related to the first volume, and the new author has learned from experience, making the whole process exciting!
The ending is even more energetic!
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Reader comments
1 To 116, thoughts after viewing
I don't know why, but the ratings of this novel are always at two extremes. On one side, Balabala says the novel is great, and on the other side, Balabala praises it vigorously.
Let me tell you my personal opinion here.
The author's level of writing novels is still online. Considering that he is a new author, maybe there are some plot points that were not written well?
(Here are some merciless clips of criticism)
But generally speaking, the rhythm is good, but I always feel that the plot is a bit too compact, with battles happening one after another. If you think about it carefully, it will feel very unreasonable, but in such a compact plot, there is not much time to think.
Among the novels of the same category, Tomato is considered top-notch, at least a little better than that set of narrative novels, and at least it has some new tricks.
I can't say how good this article is. After all, the author is a newbie and not an experienced writer. There is still room for improvement in terms of emotions and details.
I can't say how bad this article is. I can only say that it depends on personal preference. If you like mindless and cool articles, you will give this article a very low rating.
Ratings with a little bit of wisdom would probably be 4 to 5 stars.
I have been bookworms for several years, and have read hundreds if not thousands of books. This kind of poisonous feeling is not as good as Mohei.
The author made the characters lively, but not much, and seemed a little stiff in some aspects. But overall, it was better than the zombie supporting characters in the studio. In the Marine Corps in the front and the Stot section in the back, I felt that the characters were quite well written. The characters were indeed written to be lively, but it was a pity that they did not last long.
This is the general review first, and I will make additional comments after the subsequent plot.
The first article: High score in biochemistry (the time and space paradox is great👍)
Part 2: A pile of stuff (it's overly used to pile up equipment and skills, so you can just skip the whole thing)
Article 3: See if the author has any new points or features
It is recommended to develop more unique features. There is a weird book next door that has skills and unique rules and characteristics every time you enter. You can learn from it. Don't rush to write a book. If you craft a book with high scores and quality, more people will read it and more money will be made. For the first book, you don't have to worry too much about writing the rest.
Let me start by saying that the first and third missions are really amazing, especially the first one. The bad thing is that the second part is too easy. It looks strange and unlike Mugen-ryu. The personal aspect of Mugen-ryu that I understand is to survive in the face of death, to use one's own strength, will and intelligence to seize a chance of survival in the face of various difficulties. There are only three missions left, and they end too quickly, not enough to watch. Although the heroine was brought back in the end, I felt bad about this part. When the protagonist kills herself to change the future, the heroine should not have those memories and experiences, unless in a parallel space, but in this way the protagonist only saves one world. How many worlds have been destroyed, the first protagonist's salvation is not perfect. Personally, I think it's more complicated. The protagonist has the opportunity to return to that world to do other tasks, because he understands the heroine and has experienced certain things together and is together. To make it simpler, he returns to that world, confesses to the heroine, and informs the heroine of the past through the ability of the third part. The heroine agrees and takes the heroine away.
The writing process and the jokes are easy to pick up. Being able to tell ordinary stories wonderfully is an ability. Looking forward to updates.
Personally, this book is very well written to my taste, especially the logic part. The connection is very smooth. It burns my brain, but not completely. It activates the brain cells that I haven't thought about for a long time. I am very grateful to the author for bringing such a wonderful novel. The closed loop in the first chapter really shocked me. I didn't expect that there was a wave of foreshadowing recycling at the end. Author, you are really good at what you say. I hope the author will keep up the good work. Come on! (No one can read the entire article in one day [thinking])
It's really good. I haven't seen a book with such a deep story line in Tomato for a long time.
It's a good read. I was fascinated by the novel from the first read. I thought it was very well written. Then I didn't read much of it. After a few days, I realized it was finished. I quickly came to read it. The author's writing is very good, especially when the first act ends. It feels so cool to say that I am your wall-breaker. [Blowing kiss]
Just two words, awesome. Author, you have successfully made me feel eager to watch blockbusters. I don't know why the rating is so low. Keep up the good work and support. I hope that the description of the characters and fighting actions will be more detailed, and the plot will be ok if it is reasonable.
The first volume has been completed.
The author created it according to the movie viewing experience, and it has indeed reached the plot level of a blockbuster movie. The plot of the first volume can be directly made into a movie.
And they all have original plots and characters, so there are no copyright barriers.
As far as the first volume is concerned, it can be considered a masterpiece.
It's understandable that the score is low. How can I put it, the overall view is really good, but there is a little problem with the rhythm of some small scenes. Unfortunately, the climax is in the last chapter. I guess many people were blown away by the small rhythm in the previous part and did not stick to the end. Of course, I won't admit that brain-burning is the biggest problem rather than rhythm (laughs)
It's really good. Please support me.
Praise yourself, [laughing]
There are no obvious logical loopholes, but the later part feels a bit vague, and I'm still a bit confused after reading it.
Overall good, high energy throughout.
Very good looking very good looking
It's very beautiful and exciting, but it's a little sad. And don't you mean speedrunning? How many chapters does it take to clear the first world now?
The author's ideas are clear, and the protagonist's plug-in is very novel. It must have been written by a science guy who has nothing to do! The plot of the whole book is handled very reasonably, and even the time and space cycle ♻️ is explained clearly and logically.
This author is really kind and has slowly filled in all the previous pitfalls.
The only thing I missed was that I haven't finished it after 15 days, especially the last 3 days. Maybe I skipped watching and missed some details.
This book is so enjoyable to read! Enjoyable!
This Dragon King approved it!
Very good, good novel
The rhythm is tight. Brain-burning. New ideas come out of life and reincarnate endlessly. It's time to make a movie.
You can watch it as a movie or an American TV series, the outline is perfect!
Very good, why is the score so low?
Resident Evil is still very good to watch
It's not bad, but there are too few words at the moment, and I haven't finished the first copy in so long. There are many game influences in the plot.
It's okay, but I feel like the plot is too talky in some places, so it's not bad to watch.
It's beautiful, but it's so cold and I feel like no one is watching.
The author's writing style is so good and the various jokes are refreshing. Highly praised! ! !
The plot is smooth and there are no major problems overall except that I feel it is lacking [laughter]
Well, it was a refreshing read and the pace was good. I saw that the score was low due to the lack of comments. I would like to comment on it.
1 To 116, thoughts after viewing I don't know why, but the ratings of this novel are always at two extremes. On one side, Balabala says the novel is great, and on the other side, Balabala praises it vigorously. Let me tell you my personal opinion here. The author's level of writing novels is still online. Considering that he is a new author, maybe there are some plot points that were not written well? (Here are some merciless clips of criticism) But generally speaking, the rhythm is good, but I always feel that the plot is a bit too compact, with battles happening one after another. If you think about it carefully, it will feel very unreasonable, but in such a compact plot, there is not much time to think. Among the novels of the same category, Tomato is considered top-notch, at least a little better than that set of narrative novels, and at least it has some new tricks. I can't say how good this article is. After all, the author is a newbie and not an experienced writer. There is still room for improvement in terms of emotions and details. I can't say how bad this article is. I can only say that it depends on personal preference. If you like mindless and cool articles, you will give this article a very low rating. Ratings with a little bit of wisdom would probably be 4 to 5 stars. I have been bookworms for several years, and have read hundreds if not thousands of books. This kind of poisonous feeling is not as good as Mohei. The author made the characters lively, but not much, and seemed a little stiff in some aspects. But overall, it was better than the zombie supporting characters in the studio. In the Marine Corps in the front and the Stot section in the back, I felt that the characters were quite well written. The characters were indeed written to be lively, but it was a pity that they did not last long. This is the general review first, and I will make additional comments after the subsequent plot.
The first article: High score in biochemistry (the time and space paradox is great👍) Part 2: A pile of stuff (it's overly used to pile up equipment and skills, so you can just skip the whole thing) Article 3: See if the author has any new points or features It is recommended to develop more unique features. There is a weird book next door that has skills and unique rules and characteristics every time you enter. You can learn from it. Don't rush to write a book. If you craft a book with high scores and quality, more people will read it and more money will be made. For the first book, you don't have to worry too much about writing the rest.
Let me start by saying that the first and third missions are really amazing, especially the first one. The bad thing is that the second part is too easy. It looks strange and unlike Mugen-ryu. The personal aspect of Mugen-ryu that I understand is to survive in the face of death, to use one's own strength, will and intelligence to seize a chance of survival in the face of various difficulties. There are only three missions left, and they end too quickly, not enough to watch. Although the heroine was brought back in the end, I felt bad about this part. When the protagonist kills herself to change the future, the heroine should not have those memories and experiences, unless in a parallel space, but in this way the protagonist only saves one world. How many worlds have been destroyed, the first protagonist's salvation is not perfect. Personally, I think it's more complicated. The protagonist has the opportunity to return to that world to do other tasks, because he understands the heroine and has experienced certain things together and is together. To make it simpler, he returns to that world, confesses to the heroine, and informs the heroine of the past through the ability of the third part. The heroine agrees and takes the heroine away.
The writing process and the jokes are easy to pick up. Being able to tell ordinary stories wonderfully is an ability. Looking forward to updates.
Personally, this book is very well written to my taste, especially the logic part. The connection is very smooth. It burns my brain, but not completely. It activates the brain cells that I haven't thought about for a long time. I am very grateful to the author for bringing such a wonderful novel. The closed loop in the first chapter really shocked me. I didn't expect that there was a wave of foreshadowing recycling at the end. Author, you are really good at what you say. I hope the author will keep up the good work. Come on! (No one can read the entire article in one day [thinking])
It's really good. I haven't seen a book with such a deep story line in Tomato for a long time.
It's a good read. I was fascinated by the novel from the first read. I thought it was very well written. Then I didn't read much of it. After a few days, I realized it was finished. I quickly came to read it. The author's writing is very good, especially when the first act ends. It feels so cool to say that I am your wall-breaker. [Blowing kiss]
Just two words, awesome. Author, you have successfully made me feel eager to watch blockbusters. I don't know why the rating is so low. Keep up the good work and support. I hope that the description of the characters and fighting actions will be more detailed, and the plot will be ok if it is reasonable.
The first volume has been completed. The author created it according to the movie viewing experience, and it has indeed reached the plot level of a blockbuster movie. The plot of the first volume can be directly made into a movie. And they all have original plots and characters, so there are no copyright barriers. As far as the first volume is concerned, it can be considered a masterpiece.
It's understandable that the score is low. How can I put it, the overall view is really good, but there is a little problem with the rhythm of some small scenes. Unfortunately, the climax is in the last chapter. I guess many people were blown away by the small rhythm in the previous part and did not stick to the end. Of course, I won't admit that brain-burning is the biggest problem rather than rhythm (laughs)
It's really good. Please support me.
Praise yourself, [laughing]
There are no obvious logical loopholes, but the later part feels a bit vague, and I'm still a bit confused after reading it. Overall good, high energy throughout.
Very good looking very good looking
It's very beautiful and exciting, but it's a little sad. And don't you mean speedrunning? How many chapters does it take to clear the first world now?
The author's ideas are clear, and the protagonist's plug-in is very novel. It must have been written by a science guy who has nothing to do! The plot of the whole book is handled very reasonably, and even the time and space cycle ♻️ is explained clearly and logically. This author is really kind and has slowly filled in all the previous pitfalls.
The only thing I missed was that I haven't finished it after 15 days, especially the last 3 days. Maybe I skipped watching and missed some details.
This book is so enjoyable to read! Enjoyable!
This Dragon King approved it!
Very good, good novel
The rhythm is tight. Brain-burning. New ideas come out of life and reincarnate endlessly. It's time to make a movie.
You can watch it as a movie or an American TV series, the outline is perfect!
Very good, why is the score so low?
Resident Evil is still very good to watch
It's not bad, but there are too few words at the moment, and I haven't finished the first copy in so long. There are many game influences in the plot.
It's okay, but I feel like the plot is too talky in some places, so it's not bad to watch.
It's beautiful, but it's so cold and I feel like no one is watching.
The author's writing style is so good and the various jokes are refreshing. Highly praised! ! !
The plot is smooth and there are no major problems overall except that I feel it is lacking [laughter]
Well, it was a refreshing read and the pace was good. I saw that the score was low due to the lack of comments. I would like to comment on it.