[Sea Circle Calendar year 1473: You took part in and witnessed the conflict between “BIG MOM” and the Kuja Pirates in the Totto Land Kingdom. Reward: Super-Advanced Destruction Magic: Pulverize]
[Sea Circle Calendar year 1473: You changed the course of history and prevented Charlotte Perospero from being born. Reward: Genin chakra, D-rank ninjutsu]
In a pirate world where ships race for glory and heroes rise in droves, Luo Chuan, a “traveler” from Blue Star, declares: “The bigger the waves, the more delicious the ‘fish’!”
Because he has a powerful backer, and that backer is “rich and generous”!
Can we please stop writing anime fanfics with such half-baked dialogue? If your novel is an urban ancient martial arts novel with a resurgent spirit, or a time-travelling, fairy tale, or fantasy novel, that's it. Writing this kind of Japanese anime fan seems very awkward. Replacing knowing with knowing, wouldn't it be better to just speak plainly? The last time I had this feeling of separation was in a Marvel fanfiction book. Nick Fury always talked to the protagonist: How about the second son, what if, he will go to the Three Treasures Palace for nothing, there is no three hundred taels of silver here, really don't make trouble. Give it four stars!
It's well written and beautified a lot. Oda knows how to draw a comic book like Gouba Pirates 😠
There are not many beauties in this timeline, so I hope the author's timeline goes by faster. After all, you can probably tell from the plot of the first chapter that she should be able to have a harem. Also, this is the first time I have seen Charlotte Lingling as the main character. Charlotte Lingling has a very bad temper. I just don't know what will happen to Charlotte Lingling after the protagonist has another woman. There are too many other anime elements. I personally feel that it doesn't fit the style of One Piece. It's not that it can't be done. It's just that in One Piece, when you create a chakra, it always feels like the style isn't quite right. Like other authors, you can change the chakra consumption when using ninjutsu or something like that to elements in line with this world. For example, changing the consumption of chakra to consumption of physical strength or something like that, it feels better. 🤔
It's a good YY novel. In terms of driving speed and the speed of taking down female characters, I approve of it. But the male protagonist is too young, so how many more chapters will it take to finish? It's too short
Okay, okay, this is how it is written. Not a single one of the more than 40 chapters has been confiscated. I kept pestering and refused to accept it. It made me want to curse and complain. As long as I accept the girl decisively, I will give it a five-star rating.
The writing is good. Auntie, Xia Qi, Stussy, Tianyue Shi will probably all accept it, and the future empress, Nami, Robin, Bai Xing and other beauties will also accept it [sneaky smile]
Didn't I see someone say before that the rewards the protagonist receives from the system cannot be cultivated on his own? Relying on the system to get to the next stage, I have the same idea, forget about chakra, I just think that the world is different and you can't practice it, but don't do it later, the armed color and even the overlord color all depend on the system. Then there is ability... How should I put it, everyone has his or her own merits, but I think ability is too much!!! It still looks uncomfortable if mixed (personal opinion). I personally think that the world of One Piece is better developed around Devil Fruit/Haki/Swordsmanship and Taijutsu (again, personal opinion). And if the Big Mom Pirates don't rely on having babies, then should the protagonist follow Uncle Snake's example and find some talented children to train (again, this is a personal opinion).
It's fun to have fun like this, right? It's so cute and I love watching it🤤
Well written. .
It's still okay, harem story, but I can't eat pig's feet for the time being, and I don't know how long it will be before we can eat. The only thing that makes me feel uncomfortable and speechless is that the people who speak Wen Zou and Zou Zou give me a way to read ancient Chinese and speak like a sour Confucian.