Traveling Through the Courtyard Vowing to Change the Ending of Silly Pillar

It's very thoughtful, the rhythm is tight, and the concept is good. If you don't jump in the later stage, it's very possible to become a god!

When I read a lot of Siheyuan articles, they were very violent, and I felt that the world described in the TV series and fan fiction I watched was not the same. I like the world written by the author. Everyone has their own thoughts. The words reveal the plainness of life and the helplessness of life.

Post a few more chapters every day

Well enough. However, this article is considered a daily article, and He Yuyu is not violent. Otherwise, Xu Damao's design of a hero to save the beauty actually harmed Yu Li. It should not be so easy to get over. After all, in those days, the cost of this matter was not small. If word spread, people's lives could be destroyed by rumors, so I am not very satisfied with this point. Of course, Yi Zhonghai had already adopted a son, and he was still discussing at home how to use the house as a lure to let Si Zhu take care of himself in the old age if something changed, and Guang Tian overheard this. It was enough to show that this hypocrite was never sincere, and was either scheming or on the way to scheming. Including the deaf old lady, it's the same, all calculated. There's really no friendship at all. Therefore, if the author of the following article designs that Guangtian has grown up and has selfish motives, I will understand. Regarding Guangtian, in the original text, he is unfortunate. He is not favored as the second child, and he has been beaten since childhood. He hates Fatty Liu, which is normal. He has not retaliated against Fatty Liu in ten years, which shows that he is not dark enough in his heart. In this article, Yuyu helped him. He helped Yuyu several times and was close to Aunt Ma, which shows that he still has a conscience.

Does anyone know that under the Zhengyang Gate, Little Women and the Siheyuan are the same world? I had forgotten about it. Recently, I watched Little Women again. Cai Quanwu said a sentence in the drama, which roughly means that Qin Huairu and Sha Zhu can't walk anymore, and there is no one to take care of them. Han Chunming was also seen pushing Su Meng in a wheelchair. This is probably what it means, that is, these three dramas are the same world, so some people who write fan fiction should stop saying that Cai Quanwu is Sha Zhu's second uncle.

In Chapter 52, Yuyu is kidnapped, and the creativity is new and novel. What is shown is all about intellectual struggle and protection, and there is no physical self-protection and ambush. It cannot be shown after the incident has happened, it will be too sudden. It is more reasonable to throw a few chess pieces into Yuyu's growth.

First of all, give yourself a thumbs up. It really took a lot of energy to write so many words in a book. As I was writing, I realized that it is really not easy to persist in writing a book. So, come on! The future will definitely be better!

The storyline is exciting and the writing is smooth and delicate.

I think it's wonderful

This is the first time I see Yuyu, which encourages innovation, five stars.

The writing is great, especially the description of the conflict between modern thinking and the thinking of the 1960s and 1970s. And the protagonist's decisive character in killing is simply awesome.

It's very interesting, please give it a thumbs up to the author

The writing is good, the structure is clear, and the characters fit the TV plot. The key is the female author. Encourage

I thought it was a hydrology, but it turned out that I got it. It was well written and the casting angle was good. Yi Guangtian's thunderstorm in the later stage was the end of the story.

I like the character of the protagonist

Not bad, very innovative

Not bad. I can't write it.

The content is quite good. Other Siheyuan articles are often very vulgar, but this one is quite good.

It's good-looking. I like this sober sister. Five-star praise.

The writing is better than many high-scoring reviews.

This book is okay, the logic is smooth and the plot is reasonable

Very good angle.

OK OK! I like to listen to it to relieve my anger! ! ! !

Goldfinger is a bit bad, but he is very smart

Good, good, good, good, good

Is the baby finished? I'll update as soon as I have the baby, I think it's very well written! Come on

I hope that the golden finger will be bigger and the rainwater ability will be stronger. After all, in those days when fighting was not a big deal, you need to be able to protect yourself.

A different courtyard house, a wonderful performance

This is my first time watching the heroine Siheyuan. It is unexpectedly good. It is much better than some brainless and illogical ones.

The rhythm is very good [like] hurry up and write [laughing]