Pokemon: My Adventure Diary

The writing is very good, why are there so few people? The plot is very compact, there is nothing procrastinating, and I don't see any big poisonous points. If I have to say it, the relationship with Daigo develops very quickly. Then there are two more serious problems. One is that there are many typos, and the second is that some places are not explained very clearly, such as the system. What does the system do? After reading it, I only saw one appraisal. If it only had this function, I would mention it at the beginning. Another example is qualifications. How they are divided, I find it strange. Also, I said from the beginning that I wanted to form a rainy day team, but when I saw the rare elves, I wanted them. Although I didn't catch them in the end, it was a bit awkward, so I just left it at once. Mainly because I wrote too much. Finally, I am looking forward to how I will clear my name in the future. I hope I won't cut it [sending my heart] Can the author also add an Aplysia? It has a human shield and a support hand, and its attributes are also very good. The Galarian Serpentine Bear has a Sea Haremon, so it won't be a problem to drift across the sea to Hoenn.

It's pretty good, but there are a few typos. The protagonist is pretty good, and the plot is pretty good, especially the one where he fights lava with Daigo. The protagonist is an undercover agent from Team Rocket. Currently there are Ghost Stone, Big Mouth Gull, Alola Rush Bear and Cammy Turtle. Except for the first one, they are basically not particularly popular elves. At least I rarely see them with the protagonist, and Big Mouth Gull is also rare. Well, come on! Too little! Not enough!!!

It's quite average, nothing bad, but not many bright spots.

The only thing I want to ask is what happened to the Pokémon the protagonist had before he went undercover? Just don't care? I used to think that he was just emerging among Team Rocket recruits and was very talented, so his trainer level was not high. He might only have one ghost stone, and the level was not particularly high. But now it seems that he is an elite trainer, and the ghost stone level is also very high, so he can't only have ghost stone. What about his original pokemon? How to arrange it? Should I find a way to get it back? And author, I hope you can continue to work hard and improve your writing skills. The theme and content of your article are very good. The only shortcoming is that your writing style is not very good after you write it. If your writing skills improve, this article will definitely become popular.

I feel like the plot and setting are okay. It's just the author's typos and some minor bugs that can be understood. For example, the problem of incompatible attributes and the problem of the area where the Pokémon belongs. The most puzzling thing is the age of the protagonist. Earlier, in the first few chapters, it was said that the protagonist is only 15 years old and a minor. The Aiyu Conference is held by a genius, but in the subsequent plot, the protagonist is 19 years old, and Daigo, Sirona, and Watana also participate. They should still be in the age group of 15 or 6 years old, right? Later, both Xiaozhi and Xiaomao went on a trip. According to the animation timeline, Daigo was about twenty years old. Author, can this big BUG be fixed?

Encourage me to write solidly but there are too many typos at the end. Keep your original intention.

This book has a relatively detailed description of elf battles and strategies. It is also quite good to explore secret realms and seek resources to expand the team. I don't know if the author is taking the elite route or the collecting route. I hope it is the elite route. Otherwise, if there are too many Pokemon, there will be a lack of descriptions of interactions with Pokemon. Finally, I hope the author will try not to describe emotional lines.

The content is quite interesting, and there's nothing poisonous about it. It's quite interesting.

It's okay. It's not bad. The pace is slow in the early stage and slow in the later stage. But in the end, I don't know what happened to the Rockets. Except for fighting a monster with Orange at the end, it ended inexplicably. My boss Sakaki didn't have any scenes at all.

It's okay, that's it, um, um