[Fighting] [Reasonably many female protagonists] [Not brainless] [Female characters are not vases] [Not given for free without reason] [Villain is not brainless] [Not a cool article] [First time writing, please review.
Eloria faces the threat of a mysterious abyssal energy. This force has invaded and begun to corrode the surface, forcing the gods to summon heroes to fight this threat with their talents. Lin Tian, an ordinary young man from Blue Star, was suddenly summoned to this different world.
The Elf Goddess appeared after Chapter 24, Miss Ogre appeared in Chapter 32, and they were officially together in Chapter 72.
The second hero appears in Chapter 43.
Reader comments
I think it's okay for a new author, but I have to keep some distance from the line about Mollica, which always gives me a sense of crisis when reading (when I take on the role of the protagonist, I subconsciously don't like her), and then it is very important to handle the emotional line well. If there are some special things (such as the protagonist's inner fluctuations), try to let Alia comfort her, because overall she is the heroine, and she feels the most suitable. If you are not sure, try to reduce the space occupied by other women, otherwise it will look like the heroine has been bullied. The next difficult thing to deal with is the new brave line. I feel that this line is easy to collapse. I hope I can control it well.
I just saw it from the recommendation yesterday, and the author is very encouraged.
Already updated. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑
I feel like the author has a bright future. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
After reading more than 30 chapters, I felt it was okay and quite in line with my taste. It's not Long Aotian or anything like that. It probably won't be the case later either. I haven't seen the back yet. Nowadays, there are too many kinds of Long Aotian, and I feel tired.
It's well written, but I wonder if the vampire and the female warrior from before are a harem
I think it's okay for a new author, but I have to keep some distance from the line about Mollica, which always gives me a sense of crisis when reading (when I take on the role of the protagonist, I subconsciously don't like her), and then it is very important to handle the emotional line well. If there are some special things (such as the protagonist's inner fluctuations), try to let Alia comfort her, because overall she is the heroine, and she feels the most suitable. If you are not sure, try to reduce the space occupied by other women, otherwise it will look like the heroine has been bullied. The next difficult thing to deal with is the new brave line. I feel that this line is easy to collapse. I hope I can control it well. I just saw it from the recommendation yesterday, and the author is very encouraged. Already updated. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑ I feel like the author has a bright future. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
After reading more than 30 chapters, I felt it was okay and quite in line with my taste. It's not Long Aotian or anything like that. It probably won't be the case later either. I haven't seen the back yet. Nowadays, there are too many kinds of Long Aotian, and I feel tired.
It's well written, but I wonder if the vampire and the female warrior from before are a harem
The details are written very clearly.