Siheyuan: I Become He Xiao

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I read the comments in the comment area, and in general I don't think the problem is big, and the writing is good. This is objective, after all, it needs to be fair and just. Indeed, I think it makes sense. You place too much emphasis on the protagonist's adoptive father's family. Knowing your family's educational background, there is no need to elaborate too much. Also, the protagonist's name is Liu, I always feel that there is something wrong about it. I personally think that even if you recognize your stepfather, it is not good to forget your ancestors. If the protagonist is too close to his adoptive father, will he be easily sacrificed? Coming from the previous book, I always felt that the protagonist took everything too naturally, in a word, too naive. Maybe you think so yourself, but you feel that you are not decisive enough. As a person over thirty, there are some things that some people still can't understand? Don't blame others for making bad comments, it's your content that is really hard to watch. I hope you will make changes and have no desire to continue reading like this. If you can take it in one step, you can take it in one step. Don't look at some things too simply. Some things are not simple. The protagonist doesn't need to be too stupid.

There is no golden finger... It's okay😊

It would be great if I could really finish this book

Can the author write more novels about 🈶️ Bay Island stories from different eras?

Very very beautiful

Very good. Just a little less

Good, good, good, good, good