Global Organ Evolution, I Start Eternal Kaleidoscope

I feel that the author wants to write well, and he also wants to write in a burning and cool way, as well as the setting at the beginning. . It's quite a classic, but I personally feel that the author is a bit eager for success, and the speed of the plot seems a bit inexplicable, and it just feels a bit watery. In fact, the ability to depict emotional lines, battles, and the overall view of the world is not very strong, but I can see that you wanted to write it first, but failed to do so. I was initially attracted by the subject matter, the breakup of the engagement at the beginning, and the superpower setting. . It's a classic, but this engagement, it's so sloppy, it feels like a joke. In fact, if you draw it well, you can exit a good story line. Moreover, I feel that the inner setting of the characters, the monologue, everything is a bit childish, and the gap in levels is a bit too outrageous. I think it can be changed to maintain the pre-development ability or something, oops. There are so many things that I don't know what to say. I suggest that the author should not rush for success and write too many chapters at once. I suggest that you sharpen your writing skills and make an outline. When writing the book, you should clarify step by step how you want to write, what the world view is, what kind of routine you want to follow, the character's personality, portrayal, emotions, etc., And then write a good book and speed up. Give me some encouragement in friendship and keep up the good work.

Time travel, rebirth, waste material, broken engagement, City, system, harem, Dragon King. Seconds to the sky, seconds to the earth, seconds to the air, you care about the three yellows and the five emperors. Enemies like calabash dolls, women with the same amount of hair on their legs. What a word *cool*! ! ! ! ! [Thinking] (It feels like everything is right, but nowhere is right) ☞[Shocked] (Squad leader, the assembly line is too fast [covers face] and can't react)

When did the left eye turn into six magatama reincarnations?

It's good to read. This book is more like a plot flow. I quite like the characters. The protagonist feels a bit like Hisato Hisahi in Spell Return, which means he is more like a person. Many settings are also novel enough and not like the traditional universal type. But I am more curious about what the spiritual contract and the ancestral statue are used for. Are they related to Ganoderma lucidum? Can the author give some spoilers in advance? I really can't think of anything.

This book is okay, but the author is too short [laughs evilly] not long enough, not long enough at all

Very nice looking [like], although Itachi is quite handsome, I prefer Obito's twin divine powers, and I hope to improve them.

It's pretty, I don't know what to say, anyway, I think it's pretty

How can I put it this way? I finished reading it in one day. The plot is relatively complete, but the characterization of the characters is still lacking. The author should still be growing up. There are relatively few emotional lines and the human nature is not shown enough. But overall, it is still worth watching. Just sit back and keep going.

The author is great. I can't read it enough. Please keep updating, updating, and moving forward. Your writing is great. This is my favorite type of book.

Four stars first, cheers for the author

Will Akatsuki's red cloud cloak appear in the later stage [laughing evilly]

It's good, but I feel like the ending was a bit rushed, but overall it's still very enjoyable to watch. I recommend it!

The author's imagination is very strong and the content is very attractive Author, come on, take good care of you

When does the protagonist become reincarnated?

Like this book very much

Apart from anything else, wouldn't it be nice if our ancestors had the Heavenly Eye?

They're all pretty good, but my brother suddenly showed up.

I feel like this novel is quite good, because how should I put it? Well, the feeling in front of him is very nice.

It's very interesting and the plot is smooth without jumping around suddenly [Like] [Like]

Okay, okay, let's play like this, right? End it suddenly for me [smile]

Big cheers for the author

Not bad, keep up the good work

Sounds good, sounds good, sounds good

Good looking, good luck to the author

I really encourage the author

The author could add Ten Fist Sword

Better, okay

The ending is a bit rushed, but the rest is okay

It's good to watch, and the plot has ups and downs.

It sounds great. It looks good.