Weird************

The subject matter is very attractive to me. The weird and the fourth natural disaster. Come on, the author. Don't be a eunuch. I will keep pursuing it.

... Um... Sigh... This... Well, the writing is fine, but the logic is a bit big. [Parallel world! That's okay]

It's good-looking, not particularly scary. I almost backed away when I first saw my cousin and schoolmate appear. Fortunately, my cousin didn't show up again. The schoolgirl is just a pure tool. She doesn't have any ambiguous tendencies at the moment. Huh~ Fortunately (◦˙▽˙◦)

It's nice to look at, and the setting is very novel. I hope the black mist behind it can be a little more creepy. It's better to be longer. I've read a lot of thrillers and it's hard to be scared.

The writing is okay, nothing too bad, but the attribute setting is not very good, and the book is not very popular. I hope the author can keep writing it.

It's good so far, but the protagonist feels that the gap between him and others is not big. I instantly feel that this golden finger system is awesome. It's too abrasive, the back is watery, and it slips away

In fact, the normal people who were injured or killed can choose whether to engage in logistics. Otherwise, they will be sent away and given only some supplies. Those who are missing arms and legs will not be able to survive without their relatives. They will become a burden on their relatives, which will also increase the casualty rate of their relatives. When they go back and cry and complain, and the opponents will publicize it, no one dares to go, because in addition to death, it will also affect their relatives, which will lead to a bad reputation for the protagonist and the overall officialdom in the future. If the player does it for goodwill and the public, it will be over immediately, and the size of the backpack is a bit too big. How about counting the quantity directly based on body size? For example, a flashlight can fit as much as 0.5 Cubic meters into one grid. And I don't really recommend that the protagonist be so aggressive. It's better to be more steady. You won't have anywhere to cry if you die later.

The fourth natural disaster is very strange. The protagonist needs to participate in the game all the time.

It is a very good book. The conception and embedding points are both excellent. It shows that the author has put a lot of thought into this and deserves praise. I hope that the author can withstand other bad comments, stick to his heart, continue to create, and write the good articles in his heart. As an ordinary reader, I will always support the author to keep writing and look forward to more exciting plots from the author. Thank you.

It looks good and interesting, but I feel that there are too few players. Add more, add more,ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧[Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Learned][Learned][Learned]

Yes, it's pretty nice [shy] I like this kind of social setting very much. Beautiful ~ Hahaha

Not bad, just too short

Not bad, + the bookshelf is here to catch up

It's a good-looking, novel theme of the fourth natural disaster, and the players have created it very interestingly. The group scenes only look good if they are multifaceted. Come on! (ง˙O˙)ว

I clicked on this book when I first saw it and then quit it. But today I read it in detail and found that the writing is okay and it is really good (๑ŏ ŏ๑ ) The author, please give me a thumbs up, the writing is very good (ฅ´ω`ฅ) It's just that the early stage is a bit too delayed. It takes several chapters to summon the players, which is a bit discouraging.

So pretty! Continue to focus more on the protagonist, continue to write the love story between the protagonist and his cousin and schoolmate, and continue to explain all kinds of knowledge that the public knows. This book will be a hit~ I slipped away first [laughing evilly]

There are indeed some parts at the front that are a little bit toxic, but when you look at the words at the back, the writing is actually pretty good. The bigger problem is the selection of the protagonist. It's completely random, it doesn't matter who you choose. It can be considered the biggest poisonous point here. The plot is quite novel. At least that's how it seems to me. For a little while, if you insist on ignoring some of the more poisonous parts, it will be quite nice. What's more, there aren't many poison points.

As the author himself said, the main test of this kind of writing is the quality of the copy. As a fourth natural disaster article, there are currently relatively few interesting points, so it depends on the author polishing the copy. The current few dungeons are all about foreshadowing worldview > atmosphere creation. The advantage is that the dungeons are related to each other. It would be great if the foreshadowing can be properly recycled in the end. I hope the author can calm down and sort out the outline and not waste the worldview that has been foreshadowed. If it is more fun, you can mention it further.

Great! Bang bang, bang, stick, stick, stick, stick, stick, stick, stick, stick, stick, stick, stick, stick, stick, stick, stick! ! ! !

It's quite interesting, and the protagonist doesn't have a low sense of presence as some reviews said. The so-called cousins ​​and schoolmates are just identities, a normal relationship, not the kind of ambiguous relationship. The plot of "The Strange Situation" is interesting. The reality is that I haven't written about meeting my cousin yet, but from the current point of view, the characters created by the author are normal. Even if I meet my cousin, it should not become an obstacle to the development of the plot like some novels.

An occasional attempt made me want to read on... Except for a few dissuasion at the beginning. After the rest of the plot unfolded... It was very good... Organized and organized... The outline was clear and easy to understand... I thought the appearance of world fragments was the end. But after watching the follow-up, I realized that it was beginning to enter a big plot line... I hope I won't be a eunuch, but there aren't many people watching... I'm sighing... It's almost fifteenth in the new year... In advance Wish everyone a happy Lantern Festival... Great efforts to update [making faces]

Personally, I feel that if the player himself does not claim to be a player, he should not be restricted from joining other teams. This is more real.

Give it five stars. There are very few novels that are not poisonous. I will read more and hope that I can write what I want. The fourth natural disaster is under strange circumstances. It would be a pity not to save a wave of human beings. Don't worry and write slowly.

Not bad, you can add a bookshelf to see

At present, there is nothing sinister about it. I just want to forget about the cousin who followed me and don't cause trouble [face covering]

Oh, I just realized this book belongs to Schrödinger's Cat.

It's pretty good in Tomato. You can read it when you're short of books.

It's a very good book. I don't know why the rating is so low. I was almost fooled by the rating.

Give me four stars to encourage you. The preliminary preparation is very long. This slow pace is a bit unacceptable. A whole 11 chapters are laid out. Fortunately, the later chapters have good content. Completely conceived. There are not many pitfalls and the logic is reasonable.

Looking at the comment section, this author doesn't seem to buy comments, and there are a lot of scolds. Personally, I think the content of the book is okay, and the copy is good-looking. Anyway, I like it, love reading the copy, and add water to my daily life.