Demon Saint of the Yellow Springs

Read five chapters. Let me tell you my humble opinion, from a reader's perspective. The first three chapters can be shortened to a hundred words. Let's just travel through time. The background and reasons will be discussed later. The person wearing the dog attire can just recall and explain in one sentence. It's quite interesting to read from Chapter 4. I'm a newbie at coding, so I have some suggestions that I don't know are right or wrong. Character names can have connotations and meanings, and they must be easy to recognize and read, especially for the protagonist. There is a name called Fifth So-and-so, So-and-so Huang Quan, which is a bit strange. Generally, naming children under the name Huang Quan is a bit strange. It's interesting to see the protagonist travel through time as a dog, come on By the way, in terms of reading sense, it is recommended that each paragraph should be limited to seventy words or less, and try to avoid long and difficult sentences. Although I also like to write this way, readers don't like it. Encouragement with you By the way, the cover can be made for free using AI drawing. Now this is really eye-catching

Well written, the subject matter is novel and I like the character of the protagonist