HP: Avatar Chain Lightning, Kid

It's super good-looking, and I'm really sad. I really want to read Ewen's story a hundred years ago... If Ewen hadn't experimented with time magic, she would have led her friends to create the best era... The big words really touched my heart, it's really awesome

The characters in it belong to an OOC state that is very pleasing to readers. This is the kind of enjoyment you want when reading fan fiction. The characters described by the author are relatively positive among various hp fandoms. There are conflicts in the academy, and the focus changes with the age of the protagonist. The heroine has strong abilities but is restricted by good order and self-knowledge. She acts cleanly and neatly, which is great!

It's very interesting. The author is good at writing and works hard. It's a new book, Huo Yi 1. The heroine sets up Grindelwald and Slytherin, and talks about how the savior develops to be the destroyer (JPG), which is a bit more of a heartthrob, but all arrows are single, and the heroine does not have a fixed cp (so she loves to be obsessed with it) 2. In the later stage, most of the characters will probably join the fish pond. After all, even Voldemort can't escape. The heroine Ironwood, don't expect the Ironwood to bloom. 3. Whether it is a hundred years ago or today, the heroine raises a lot of fish. The author said that characters from a hundred years ago will not be reborn. If you want to see rebirth, go to Sanchuang. 4. From the current point of view, it seems that there is no villain? The author loves Duanshui, but prefers Sirius. Some Aces teach you not to be impatient. In the end, there should be Shura fields. At least judging from the current plot, there should be them. The fishponds that the author has fixed so far (here refers to what the author said or what was revealed in the chapter) include Barty Crouch Jr., Sirius Black, Professor Snape, and Tom Riddle. Some of the characters from a hundred years ago were created by the author himself, and I can't bear to read the original works myself.

Strong recommendation! It's really super pretty! Ggad is the best! The heroine is calm and wise! She is the fan fiction heroine of my dreams! It's so beautiful! If you don't watch it, I will really be sad (twisted and dark crawling) (Forgive me for my lack of language to describe the heroine, but she is really beautiful)

For Egwene Grindelwald, the one she loves most is always her younger brother. That is the younger brother she wants to see the most when she comes back after traveling around for hundreds of years. That was her brother who would always love her no matter what. No one in the world loved Egwene more than Gellert. No matter what Gale became, Egwene would always recognize him and love him forever. Egwene would always stand by her brother, and similarly, Gale would never hurt his sister. All in all, they are super, super good siblings! ! ! Long live CB! ! ! ! ! ! If I were to be the CP, I prefer those people from a hundred years ago, who were all very good babies——

Suddenly I realized that I had forgotten to rate it! ! ! Big mistake! ! ! So I quickly added it and attached a short long comment. First of all, as a novel author, I have a very good attitude towards updates. I never miss the promised updates. The updates are not only stable, but the quality is guaranteed all the way (๑ゝω╹๑). Secondly, as far as the subject matter is concerned, there are very few people writing about this subject matter in HP fan fiction, and even more so if we exclude those with poor quality. What I feel the most after reading this article is that it can be relaxed when it is time to laugh; it is also very moving when it is time to be sensational; it is written with style when it is describing; and it is deep when it is writing its thoughts. In short, as a reader, I like this article very much and am very satisfied with it. At the same time, I hope that the author can work with this article to make it better and better. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Ahhhhhh, she is so beautiful. My family, I all fell in love with Yiwen's pomegranate skirt (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia. Yiwen is really a very charming person! She is really excellent!

It's great. The author's writing is really good, and the image of the heroine is very successful. She is a calm and wise heroine. Coupled with the content of the legacy, it can be said to be my ideal novel! [Send heart][Send heart]

A HP fan with good writing and pacing. At present, it seems that the heroine is a normal person with ambition and IQ. She has the leadership ability of Grindelwald and a silver tongue that seduces people. She has a younger brother who is an old man in jail (no) The character design is charming and has a fish pond, but because the plot is relatively reasonable and the writing can keep up without being abrupt, it is actually very enjoyable. This point alone is already better than 🍅a lot of strange yandere romance novels. The content cannot be said to be deep and meaningful, but at least it is very good as Su Shuang's fan-favorite novel, and local dogs will love to read it! I also hope that the rhythm can be maintained in the later period and there will be more interesting plots. It is good for health to have moderate sugar content, but not to be overtaken by too much ambiguity. Keep up the good work, author, don't cheat (show your heart) [Love]

Ouch, ouch, beautiful! Super pretty! The third protagonist, who does not belong to the Order of the Phoenix or the Death Eaters, is the biological sister of Gellert Grindelwald and Dumbledore's senior. She is older but younger (16 or 17 years old, I forgot). The relationship between the characters is handled very well. There are some differences in ideals but the direction is roughly the same. There is no direct conflict with Dumbledore. The emotional line is very interesting. The charming character Max is a fish on the one hand and a wood on the other. I really like the relationship between Yiwen (the protagonist) and her former friends. There are some regrets but more of trust. They firmly believe that Yiwen will be there in the future. When Tian came back, he left a lot of things for Yi Wen (I won't spoil it, I will get beaten if I do). I cried when I watched the friendship part. I was really touched [cry] [cry] [cry] Personally, I feel that there is nothing to say in the later stage. As long as you don't cheat or start a harem, there will be no problem.

Two words, awesome. This article is really well-written, has good content, is novel in creation, and the update speed is pretty good, at least about once a day. (Quietly, if possible, I hope to update more every day, the author is great!!!) Secondly, the content inside is also quite consistent with the original work. (Right? It's just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. It's your fault.) All in all, the content is very, very good, it's very good. Then the next thing is, the author will update it soon! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's quite to my taste, and Blake has a lot of roles. I don't like some articles that single out Snape, suppress Black, and insist on bringing him and Lily together. The heroine should be on the order side and have strength And he ignored Draco and Ron. It's so rare to be able to be a close brother to little Harry, and it's the perks of being a decent chef! Other fans will always bully the characters or something.

The work is super good and the author's writing style is great! Every college and every role is respected equally. The character creation is very successful. Very, very, very beautiful. (ฅ>ω<*ฅ) Highly recommended [Like][Like][Like][Like]

A treasure discovered by accident! ! ! I found a lot of hp articles, and the ones with multiple single arrows like this are either guides or Mary Sues. I really like this kind of ones that are moved by the charm of the heroine's personality (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ Reard's closed loop is really good! The author's writing style is very good, and the emotional description is very delicate. The story line of the heroine and her former friend really makes people cry (இωஇ). I beg the author to update it soon! !

Very good. I rarely read books with female protagonists, because I feel that whether they are strong women or heartthrobs, the heroines are accessories to men. But the heroine of this book made me really feel what it means to be a strong woman, but I still hope that I won't turn into a harem writer in the end, which will cause some physical discomfort. The author's writing is delicate, the plot is compact, and the framework is reasonable. It is my favorite among the Potter fanfics. The heroine does not hide her strength, and is very uninhibited and very charming. Moreover, the Lion Court and the Snake Court should be on friendly terms now, and are no longer so tit-for-tat. It feels like my GGAO is about to see the light of day again. I hope the author will continue to produce high-quality articles and don't let us down! [Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy]

It feels so wonderful, and it relieves my many uneasy feelings in Yuan Zhen. It's a cool story. The heroine is super powerful, the heir to ancient magic. She is extremely talented in potions. She is decisive and calm. She directly uses a life-killing curse to reduce the dimension to attack the top student in the world. The chapter where you help Harry cram in his homework is a bonus.

Nice! It's rare to find a HP fanfic that I like on Tomato! I want to ask if Sai Bao and Omi can come through, portrait or direct viewing body (such as a pensieve or the like), qwq, I really like the trio, give Harry and the others some ancient magic and the shock of the Iron Triangle_(•w•∠)_

It's a really great HP fanfic. It's a very new genre for me and it's worth reading. It is also the first book I have read that contains OOC but still does not feel out of place. I can feel that the author has designed it very carefully. The plot is well-organized, sparse and scattered, and has a sense of narration. It feels like appreciating a gentle jade handicraft. I am not only amazed at the splendor of the surface, but also eager to explore the inner transparency and gentleness - the warm atmosphere permeates the plot. The vertical plot also has a certain depth: the potential development of the dark line and the foreshadowing as delicate as glaze are what attracted me. As for the writing style, it can be said that the characterization is detailed and vivid, complementing the plot. The two are harmonious and unified, providing a sense of scene and opening up a gap between the novel and reality: you can't help but be immersed in it. There's not much to say about the character creation. Most of them are completely in line with my imagination of the original characters (except for the pairing of Albus and Little Gally, who made me laugh when I first saw them). I have boasted so much, and the wording is somewhat exaggerated and subjective. To put it bluntly, the writing style is on the higher side, the plot is reasonable, and the characters are not dramatic and three-dimensional. As for why I don't give full marks, it's entirely because I haven't watched it very much. Well, the setting of the fish pond heroine (can I say that, it may be a bit inaccurate, but you know what I mean) is a bit uncomfortable, so I only have four stars. Come on, author, I hope you can write better works!

After reading it, I quit [crying] HP must-eat NO.1! ! ! Whether it's the bonds of family and friendship or the pull of a single arrow, they are all written perfectly! I was not very interested in otome at first, so I jumped into it here. The characters have distinct personalities, and the story develops in a natural way, making them a couple. The intertwined emotions can make people cry, some are funny, some are tearful, some are not poisonous, everything falls into place naturally. The writing is good, and the descriptions of various environments and characters are detailed, not cumbersome, and vivid. There are many picturesque sentences and scenes, the rendering is particularly powerful and the quality is too high.

My current No.1 HP fanfic, this is the first time I have seen a HP heartthrob written in such a natural way. The heroine is not just Su, she has flaws and weak moments, but because of this, the heroine's image becomes more three-dimensional. In the end, the love between the heroine and the people of the ancient secret society a hundred years ago really made me cry😭. I cried every time I read those farewell chapters. Their farewells were full of reluctance and regret, but more of them were relief and blessings. "We have come to an end in the past, but you will shine brightly in the future." The author's writing is really good, the characters are consistent with the original characters' image and personality, and the transition of attitude change and relationship mode are also very natural. I personally think that it is at the peak level among the HP fanfics on the Yangshi APP. (Again I would like to express my gratitude to the author and look forward to the following stories)

Ah! I have reread it several times, it is my favorite novel! Can I watch the movie? ! I am very angry that we are obviously the winning side, but they want to please the losing side and hide everything about the heroes who protect them! Very angry! Damn overthrow them! Definitely taking advantage of Ewen's absence!

Oh my god, this is a masterpiece. Teacher, this is a masterpiece. Regrets, missing parts, making up for the reunion, every scene is a masterpiece A friend from a hundred years ago crossed the timeline to find you, and they went both ways, saving regrets invisibly. She is good at discovering the shining points of everyone's soul. Everyone is equal in her heart. She saved the young Riddle and gave Harry a perfect childhood. She gave little Barty and Sirius a new life. She is the representative of happiness and redemption, and a leader who is born to attract people to surrender. The great geniuses from a hundred years ago were brought together by her, and the thorns in everyone's heart were removed by getting along with her. How could anyone not fall in love with this powerful person who treats his friends without reservation and is always sincere? In the extra story, GGAD has a bright future. The two months of confusion in the original work have turned into the most passionate and pure love that will last a lifetime. Rather than being a leader, she saves everyone and brings new life to everyone, so she is always so attractive and everyone will fall in love with her...

It is one of my most important HP fanfics. I really love it. It is well written and not obtrusive. It makes me fall in love with that world even more. The more I read it, the more I like the writing and the story concept. It has good writing and combines it with some popular words on the modern Internet. It is also humorous. It feels like a long movie. Every scene can be freely imagined in my mind. I love the characters in it. If it is turned into a film and television, it will lose the special features of the novel. "Follow the direction of the heart, towards the place where the sun rises, and his figure gently blends into the sunshine. At the end of the wind, where the flowers will not wither, it is the eternal home." There are always some things that only words can bring that feeling. The effect of shooting is usually greatly reduced, in short, highly recommended! ! ! It's a pity that the author stopped writing. Really, I really like it. Thank you, the author, for bringing fireworks to my straight-line high school life. I hope to see your book again.

It's great. It's the first time I've seen Huo Yi integrated into the original worldview so well and tastefully. Finally, there is a real and reasonable heartthrob in the HP worldview. Many of the heartthrob routines are really like a certain Mary Suha.

This book is highly recommended!! The image of the heroine is particularly three-dimensional, she inherits ancient magic, she is calm and powerful, and she is a heartthrob! The only thing that can't be reconciled is the heroine and her friends who followed her a hundred years ago (Omi even more so (╥_╥) The heroine is so charming!!

This book just feels perfect. The heroine's IQ is online, and there is no doubt that she is powerful. The author knows it very well and has continued the most disturbing story from a hundred years ago into an extra chapter. Before reading this book, I didn't know much about the game Hogwarts Legacy. I don't know Sebastian, nor Ominis. This book became my enlightenment, and I also liked one of Hogwarts very much. I also liked Sebastian and Omenis very much in this game. I fell in love with these characters because of the female lead. It's also because the heroine has a greater understanding of these game characters that I didn't know before. I really like the characters described by the heroine and the group portraits written by the teacher. He made me feel the charm of other characters and the charm of that era. It also made me truly understand and realize the Black family motto, Black is always pure. When I mentioned Sirius Black, I could only think of Sirius from my own generation. And now when I mention Sirius Black, I can also think of another Black, that boy who is gentler than Sirius. I like the group portraits written by the teacher. This is my second repeat. He made me appreciate Hufflepuff's loyalty, gentleness and kindness to another level. Just like Papi, the last time I saw this name was two years ago, when the teacher hadn't closed the pen. But when I mentioned Dance of the Moon-Crazy Beast again, the first person I thought of was Papi. She is a girl who perfectly represents all the qualities of Hufflepuff. I like Pabbie, and I admit that this was the first time I cried while reading a Harry Potter fan fiction. It was because of Pabbie, and also because of other people. And whether it was Pappy, Sirius Black, Ominis, Sebastian, or other members of the original ancient secret society, they were all the geniuses of that era and the glory of that era. At the same time, because they had the ancient secret meeting, that era was the era when the stars shined. Let us finally say that. Make Grindelwald great again! Please ask the teacher to write another HP article similar to this one. . . I hope to see characters as vivid and vivid as Papi, Sebastian, and Ominis again. Longing to see it again. The time before that. In other words, it is witnessing a new journey, witnessing a new group of images that are regarded as eternal. The teacher's image and character descriptions are very good, as if I had witnessed that era in person, as if I had forgotten with my own eyes the careers they created and the eternity of the era they carved. The heroine is the sun, the most eye-catching and dazzling leader in that era of shining stars. She is a wolf and the sun, an existence that will be admired and followed no matter what. He is worthy of being followed, worthy of being admired, and worthy of being regarded as a miracle by people of that era. Rather than saying that the establishment of the Ancient Secret Society is a group of like-minded people, it is better to say that the establishment of the Ancient Secret Society is the following of the protagonist alone. The last sentence is the same. Make Grindelwald great again!

Alas, the group portrait is the most beautiful. The part about the inheritance of ancient secret meetings really made me realize the weight of my predecessors, and I am so good at writing... Such a charming heroine is so cool, she can talk the talk, but in reality, who wouldn't want to be saved in such a hurry! The ceiling with the strongest combat power is so delicious... The plot and characters are also well designed. This little Barty is so wonderful (I shared it with a friend and she described it as being marked, so why not!) And you, Sebas... Everything is delicious. Boss, I want to follow you...

HP fan fiction is a masterpiece, and it ranks at least in the top three in my heart. The writing is really good, the plot is smooth, it's fun where it should be, it's sad where it should be sad, it's sweet where it should be sweet, and there's this delicious ggad, ggss is a complete regret in this book. Ewen's character design is also very good. She is not a simple heartthrob who can win a lot of harems just because of her beauty. She is really charming and is a very gentle and comfortable German wood. The man looked at the succubus who couldn't move away, and the woman looked at the succubus and rushed towards it. The only shortcomings are that it is too short and the author has closed the book. This is a huge blow to a person who reads this book late. He has a feeling of powerlessness when he meets true love but the other person is married and he is a eunuch and cannot climb the wall. Finally, make Grindelwald great again! To our everlasting youth! This is Ewen's era! And, I miss you, Ewene. (Come back author😭😭😭)

I'm done. Viewed by another number. Overall it's very good, the writing style is relaxed and the characters are solid. He is also very friendly to our little Tian, ​​very interesting and very friendly. I haven't watched the extra episode. I think it's good if the heroine is ambiguous with everyone. Of course, if you like watching love stories, just watch it. I'm just expressing my thoughts. The last sentence: Our dogs are sweet!

It's truly a masterpiece! The author's writing style really impressed me! Whether it is friendship, family, teacher-student relationship or love, it is all described very well. The author has made me a fan of Salazar, who only appeared in a few chapters! I couldn't get the charm of Salazar from other fanfics before... It's funny when it's time to be funny, it's epic when it's time to be epic, and the emotionally delicate description makes people want to cry more and more... I read the whole book in two days while crying and laughing all by myself, and my own writing became cooing~ But it didn't work. I really wanted to write a story about bringing Grindelwald and Dumbledore together (painful) You will really fall in love with the badger and snake written by the author, they are both very charming! Badgers are not useless at all. They recognize the reality and are willing to give everything for the things they care about. You must know that this is the academy where the HP author has personally certified that no dark wizard has ever left! The little snakes each have their own craziness, but also have their own charms, including the villain Puppet Queen and the one who hates the world and turns his death into a curse, which I find particularly fascinating. The author really brought everyone to life! I feel sorry for little Harry who has strayed into a strange circle and is still trying to maintain family harmony hahahaha~