Harry Potter: Avada Kedavra Lightning Chain, Kid

It's super good-looking, and I'm really sad. I really want to read Ewen's story a hundred years ago... If Ewen hadn't experimented with time magic, she would have led her friends to create the best era... The big words really touched my heart, it's really awesome

The characters in it belong to an OOC state that is very pleasing to readers. This is the kind of enjoyment you want when reading fan fiction. The characters described by the author are relatively positive among various hp fandoms. There are conflicts in the academy, and the focus changes with the age of the protagonist. The heroine has strong abilities but is restricted by good order and self-knowledge. She acts cleanly and neatly, which is great!

It's very interesting. The author is good at writing and works hard. It's a new book, Huo Yi 1. The heroine sets up Grindelwald and Slytherin, and talks about how the savior develops to be the destroyer (JPG), which is a bit more of a heartthrob, but all arrows are single, and the heroine does not have a fixed cp (so she loves to be obsessed with it) 2. In the later stage, most of the characters will probably join the fish pond. After all, even Voldemort can't escape. The heroine Ironwood, don't expect the Ironwood to bloom. 3. Whether it is a hundred years ago or today, the heroine raises a lot of fish. The author said that characters from a hundred years ago will not be reborn. If you want to see rebirth, go to Sanchuang. 4. From the current point of view, it seems that there is no villain? The author loves Duanshui, but prefers Sirius. Some Aces teach you not to be impatient. In the end, there should be Shura fields. At least judging from the current plot, there should be them. The fishponds that the author has fixed so far (here refers to what the author said or what was revealed in the chapter) include Barty Crouch Jr., Sirius Black, Professor Snape, and Tom Riddle. Some of the characters from a hundred years ago were created by the author himself, and I can't bear to read the original works myself.

Strong recommendation! It's really super pretty! Ggad is the best! The heroine is calm and wise! She is the fan fiction heroine of my dreams! It's so beautiful! If you don't watch it, I will really be sad (twisted and dark crawling) (Forgive me for my lack of language to describe the heroine, but she is really beautiful)

For Egwene Grindelwald, the one she loves most is always her younger brother. That is the younger brother she wants to see the most when she comes back after traveling around for hundreds of years. That was her brother who would always love her no matter what. No one in the world loved Egwene more than Gellert. No matter what Gale became, Egwene would always recognize him and love him forever. Egwene would always stand by her brother, and similarly, Gale would never hurt his sister. All in all, they are super, super good siblings! ! ! Long live CB! ! ! ! ! ! If I were to be the CP, I prefer those people from a hundred years ago, who were all very good babies——

Suddenly I realized that I had forgotten to rate it! ! ! Big mistake! ! ! So I quickly added it and attached a short long comment. First of all, as a novel author, I have a very good attitude towards updates. I never miss the promised updates. The updates are not only stable, but the quality is guaranteed all the way (๑ゝω╹๑). Secondly, as far as the subject matter is concerned, there are very few people writing about this subject matter in HP fan fiction, and even more so if we exclude those with poor quality. What I feel the most after reading this article is that it can be relaxed when it is time to laugh; it is also very moving when it is time to be sensational; it is written with style when it is describing; and it is deep when it is writing its thoughts. In short, as a reader, I like this article very much and am very satisfied with it. At the same time, I hope that the author can work with this article to make it better and better. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Ahhhhhh, she is so beautiful. My family, I all fell in love with Yiwen's pomegranate skirt (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia. Yiwen is really a very charming person! She is really excellent!

It's great. The author's writing is really good, and the image of the heroine is very successful. She is a calm and wise heroine. Coupled with the content of the legacy, it can be said to be my ideal novel! [Send heart][Send heart]

A HP fan with good writing and pacing. At present, it seems that the heroine is a normal person with ambition and IQ. She has the leadership ability of Grindelwald and a silver tongue that seduces people. She has a younger brother who is an old man in jail (no) The character design is charming and has a fish pond, but because the plot is relatively reasonable and the writing can keep up without being abrupt, it is actually very enjoyable. This point alone is already better than 🍅a lot of strange yandere romance novels. The content cannot be said to be deep and meaningful, but at least it is very good as Su Shuang's fan-favorite novel, and local dogs will love to read it! I also hope that the rhythm can be maintained in the later period and there will be more interesting plots. It is good for health to have moderate sugar content, but not to be overtaken by too much ambiguity. Keep up the good work, author, don't cheat (show your heart) [Love]

Ouch, ouch, beautiful! Super pretty! The third protagonist, who does not belong to the Order of the Phoenix or the Death Eaters, is the biological sister of Gellert Grindelwald and Dumbledore's senior. She is older but younger (16 or 17 years old, I forgot). The relationship between the characters is handled very well. There are some differences in ideals but the direction is roughly the same. There is no direct conflict with Dumbledore. The emotional line is very interesting. The charming character Max is a fish on the one hand and a wood on the other. I really like the relationship between Yiwen (the protagonist) and her former friends. There are some regrets but more of trust. They firmly believe that Yiwen will be there in the future. When Tian came back, he left a lot of things for Yi Wen (I won't spoil it, I will get beaten if I do). I cried when I watched the friendship part. I was really touched [cry] [cry] [cry] Personally, I feel that there is nothing to say in the later stage. As long as you don't cheat or start a harem, there will be no problem.