Family: the No. 1 Corpse Keeper in Eternity

I want to write a family novel with a novel theme and perfect and refine the corpse refining system! Fellow Taoists are welcome to comment. [Love][Please pay attention]

I wanted to give it 3 stars, but after thinking about it, I finally gave it 4 stars. Although it is unsystematic, except for the appearance of a light group with perseverance and resilience in the first chapter, which later became a natal corpse (this attracted me, I thought it was to strengthen myself through the light group), I did not see any light group in the following dozens of chapters, and I did not see anything special about the protagonist in the following chapters. The novel about cultivating immortals seems to have a bland protagonist if he is not special. If he is not special, does he only rely on the author's luck to pick up treasures and grow up? Moreover, I agree with the previous comment - the lyrical style of writing talks about cultivating immortals.

The writing is quite good, as long as it doesn't end badly, come on! ! !

It looks so good and feels so silky smooth.

The writing is very good and I love to read it (⑉°з°)-♡ Come on author

Let me recommend some books to you: A refreshing historical article "Two Thousand Years of Pauper" Modern urban cool article "My 26-year-old female tenant" Oriental fantasy novel "Dragon" There is also a family story "There is a Canteen by the Clouds" Modern urban sweet love text "I'll wait for you until I'm 35" The ultimate refreshing article "Yang Jian grows up and hates water flowing eastward" The light novel "My Girlfriend is from the Future!"

I hope you can update it with more words. I hope this book will write one or two million. I hope it's a masterpiece, not a piece of junk later on. What you wrote earlier is good, I feel Qingqing, I think the emotional drama is well written. I hope to write more words,

This novel is ok. In the battle stage, the protagonist's decision-making is ok. He dares to do it and is ruthless enough. It meets the requirements of the current stage of demon cultivation. The human sea tactics are ok. This is really a good review. There will be times when manpower is limited, but millions of mortals can still play a big role. I hope the author will update it soon.

Overall, it's well written, although it has some flaws. It was a pleasure to read. It is much better than most of the mindless and cool articles in Tomato. I hope the author will stick to it. Come on, come on!

Very good. Clan leader, hurry up and form the elixir.

A love song is a dilemma. When love reaches its depth, it will naturally leave. It's hard to calm down in people's hearts! Author. Is Qiu Xi dead or alive?

This is the first book I have read all night long this year. Although it is not long, I actually calmed down and read it slowly. I have been catching up on updates as soon as I get off work these days, haha. I also like the character of this protagonist very much. He is decisive, witty and calm, and calm in situations. I hope the author will continue to maintain this style. Come on author.

The description of human nature is too real

Good book, but practicing corpse training with a living person is a bit uncomfortable.

Not bad, not bad, pretty good-looking

After reading the novel for more than 10 years and reviewing it once, I hope the author will become a great person in the future.

The writing behind it is pretty good.

It feels pretty good-looking

The waves are scouring the sand, and a good book is found, which is worth reading!

The book is okay, but there is no sense of immersion. Most of the books are written in the third person, and the characters have no distinctive characteristics and are somewhat indistinguishable. The battle also feels like one stroke, giving the overall feeling of the story.

After reading Chapter 172, tell me what you think. The early stage was good, but in the middle stage, it suppressed the protagonist a bit, and it was too hasty to open up the land. It was too much to let the protagonist's strength and influence grow.

Lyrical style of writing talks about cultivating immortality

Highly recommended, worth a look

Awesome, I can't think of anything else but this word

A very good traditional fairy tale, and each family character has its own personality traits The content, plot, and family atmosphere are all very good. The only drawback is that the description of the characters' emotions is too stiff. For example, when the protagonist is scolded, there is no description of the protagonist's mood and emotional fluctuations, only actions.

It's very beautiful, the rhythm is well controlled, the battle description is okay, and the thinking is also good. However, I feel that there are too few spells and the protagonist's personal combat ability is not reflected, although this is a family story.

It is deeply rooted in people's hearts. The book has been in short supply for too long, which makes people look forward to it.

Big cheers for the author

The author should write quickly. It's very nice.

I give 5 stars to every book I finish reading [laughs]