[Two male protagonists + game production + interstellar]
Chang An died and traveled through time, but...
NameChang An
[Physique] 2 (Your life is like a candle in the wind)
[Do you want to spend popularity points to increase your physical fitness points?
[The protagonist will recover successfully. The game has a prototype but does not copy it]
Reader comments
It's a very cute book. It's like taking a bite of mashed sweet potato and discovering that there are dried cranberries in it. It's sweet, warm and unexpected.
The game looks very fun, especially the host and forum parts. Part of it is description, part of emotion, and part of it is blank. If I play it, I will immediately choose to start trying it. Ahhh, I don't know how to describe it. I really like the author's writing. Finally, I can see the style that embodies the warmth of daily life. I really love it. Every time I see it, I feel like my soul is being washed.
Orthopedics is also very good, there is a kind of intimacy that tries to break through but is comforted by the small interactions before each other, and is willing to be entangled with each other, which is a sign of sinking. Happy, I feel like I have turned into a seagull, testing back and forth on the edge of the tide [full] The interaction between the Yang family brothers and sisters is also very interesting, a pair of contradictory and unified brothers and sisters hhh. Even from a family perspective alone, it's super satisfying. Only classmate Li Xiaoming worked hard to move forward surrounded by the protagonists
Finally, I hope the author can support me with updates soon.
It's pretty good-looking, and the emotional line is good (I always feel like my brother is a bit yandere hhh), but I feel that when making the game, some details were described in too much detail (for example, the attributes/skills of the cards in the first game were all written out) and it felt unnecessary. This way the progress will be a bit slow, but overall it's still very good-looking, and the writing is also good. I look forward to the author's improvement, come on! [Eat melon]
(Subjective evaluation, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you)
Is there any long comment? This is my first time writing something so long. Hey, I'll try to make up the number of words.
Great, you successfully caught my attention.
Now, I want to ask you to extend a sincere invitation: Yes/No, agree to update one hundred chapters a day.
Huh? Disagree?
What about eighty chapters? Chapter seventy?
What? ! Two chapters? !
No, no, no, that's too little, dear. As your loyal reader, I have to announce a fact to you.
Your novel has too few words! Root! Book! No! Enough! Look!
In Chapter 53, I was gone after just one storm inhalation. The rest of the time I could only cry and wait for updates.
I kept replaying the plot in my mind. Both the game and the protagonist themselves were refreshing. It made me, a person who doesn't usually play games, happy to watch it. The interaction between the protagonists also made me laugh.
Sorry, I don't have many gorgeous words to praise you from top to bottom, but I want to say that I really like this novel.
So, update quickly!
Your readers have sent you an invitation: yes/no. Update one hundred chapters now.
Very nice, take a bite of Orthopedics
It's unexpectedly beautiful. Pseudo-orthopaedics is very annoying. [Note] I just feel that this forum is a bit messy. I don't know why, but it feels quite new. The author will update soon!
Take a bite of the article, chew it... It's delicious٩(♡㉨♡ )۶
Hmm... There is a faint feeling of warmth | ू•ૅ㉨•́)ᵎᵎᵎ was discovered by me!
Take another bite, squeak, squeak... A sweet feeling (*✪㉨✪)
The plot is great! But what attracts me most about this book is the creation of characters. Everyone's personality is very cute. Even Robert, the villain I thought was just a cute robot, everyone's interactions are so cute!
But I'm a novice at gaming, so it still takes me a long time to watch many parts. Although this book is not as exciting as a cool novel and requires a lot of brainpower, I really like this kind of eloquent way of narrating an amazing story, which is very thoughtful and comfortable.
Looks good! It's rare to see a game article with such a sound setting and writing style on Tomato. The game design is so innovative, and most importantly, the pseudo-orthopedic emotional drama is awesome! ! The author will update soon! !
Very nice! ! !
The writing is very comfortable, and the emotional lines are also very smooth. Whether it is a game or daily life, it is lifelike, making people full of desire to play.
Some of the content may be a bit jumpy (maybe it's my own unconsciousness about Crimson King), but the flaws are not hidden, the writing is indeed excellent, the story is also very good, I like it very much!
It looks good, the pseudo-bones are easy to knock off, and the main plot is also very good. I also like to read the forum posts (and there are many jokes in this article ww
It looks good, the subject matter is very novel, and I feel that my interest in reading has been rekindled. Looking forward to the follow-up plot development
It's good-looking, unlike most game articles that don't explain anything, but the protagonist's game suddenly became popular, and the author and teacher are laying the groundwork.
In addition, the love line is very cute, sour and sweet.
Overall, based on what I saw, it is a sweet and sour story that is very cute and suitable for reading while taking a break.
The writing is very good, the description of the game makes people feel very detailed, and the description of StarCraft is very real. It is rare that I feel that it is really StarCraft rather than a reskinned modern game.
It's very interesting, but the writing is a bit scattered, the development is slow, there isn't much excitement, and it tends to be in a bland style; the protagonist could be developed faster and have more excitement, and it's too short.
Five-star praise, (ฅ´ω`ฅ) has read and left a paw
It's very well written, but a little lacking.
Gone? Add one more
There are really a lot of jokes from the author... They are blended just right, and I'm laughing like shit
I found a good article when I was scouring the sand.
It's a slow-burning book, and I really dislike the brotherhood in it. At least so far, I think this book is pretty good.
Why, I just nourished the book briefly, but the book died! ? Sad
The writing is very good. Why is there no paragraph review? There are also very few book reviews. Maybe more people can read it on another platform.
It's a very cute book. It's like taking a bite of mashed sweet potato and discovering that there are dried cranberries in it. It's sweet, warm and unexpected. The game looks very fun, especially the host and forum parts. Part of it is description, part of emotion, and part of it is blank. If I play it, I will immediately choose to start trying it. Ahhh, I don't know how to describe it. I really like the author's writing. Finally, I can see the style that embodies the warmth of daily life. I really love it. Every time I see it, I feel like my soul is being washed. Orthopedics is also very good, there is a kind of intimacy that tries to break through but is comforted by the small interactions before each other, and is willing to be entangled with each other, which is a sign of sinking. Happy, I feel like I have turned into a seagull, testing back and forth on the edge of the tide [full] The interaction between the Yang family brothers and sisters is also very interesting, a pair of contradictory and unified brothers and sisters hhh. Even from a family perspective alone, it's super satisfying. Only classmate Li Xiaoming worked hard to move forward surrounded by the protagonists Finally, I hope the author can support me with updates soon.
It's pretty good-looking, and the emotional line is good (I always feel like my brother is a bit yandere hhh), but I feel that when making the game, some details were described in too much detail (for example, the attributes/skills of the cards in the first game were all written out) and it felt unnecessary. This way the progress will be a bit slow, but overall it's still very good-looking, and the writing is also good. I look forward to the author's improvement, come on! [Eat melon] (Subjective evaluation, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you) Is there any long comment? This is my first time writing something so long. Hey, I'll try to make up the number of words.
Great, you successfully caught my attention. Now, I want to ask you to extend a sincere invitation: Yes/No, agree to update one hundred chapters a day. Huh? Disagree? What about eighty chapters? Chapter seventy? What? ! Two chapters? ! No, no, no, that's too little, dear. As your loyal reader, I have to announce a fact to you. Your novel has too few words! Root! Book! No! Enough! Look! In Chapter 53, I was gone after just one storm inhalation. The rest of the time I could only cry and wait for updates. I kept replaying the plot in my mind. Both the game and the protagonist themselves were refreshing. It made me, a person who doesn't usually play games, happy to watch it. The interaction between the protagonists also made me laugh. Sorry, I don't have many gorgeous words to praise you from top to bottom, but I want to say that I really like this novel. So, update quickly! Your readers have sent you an invitation: yes/no. Update one hundred chapters now.
Very nice, take a bite of Orthopedics
It's unexpectedly beautiful. Pseudo-orthopaedics is very annoying. [Note] I just feel that this forum is a bit messy. I don't know why, but it feels quite new. The author will update soon!
Take a bite of the article, chew it... It's delicious٩(♡㉨♡ )۶ Hmm... There is a faint feeling of warmth | ू•ૅ㉨•́)ᵎᵎᵎ was discovered by me! Take another bite, squeak, squeak... A sweet feeling (*✪㉨✪)
The plot is great! But what attracts me most about this book is the creation of characters. Everyone's personality is very cute. Even Robert, the villain I thought was just a cute robot, everyone's interactions are so cute! But I'm a novice at gaming, so it still takes me a long time to watch many parts. Although this book is not as exciting as a cool novel and requires a lot of brainpower, I really like this kind of eloquent way of narrating an amazing story, which is very thoughtful and comfortable.
Looks good! It's rare to see a game article with such a sound setting and writing style on Tomato. The game design is so innovative, and most importantly, the pseudo-orthopedic emotional drama is awesome! ! The author will update soon! !
Very nice! ! ! The writing is very comfortable, and the emotional lines are also very smooth. Whether it is a game or daily life, it is lifelike, making people full of desire to play. Some of the content may be a bit jumpy (maybe it's my own unconsciousness about Crimson King), but the flaws are not hidden, the writing is indeed excellent, the story is also very good, I like it very much!
It looks good, the pseudo-bones are easy to knock off, and the main plot is also very good. I also like to read the forum posts (and there are many jokes in this article ww
It looks good, the subject matter is very novel, and I feel that my interest in reading has been rekindled. Looking forward to the follow-up plot development
It's good-looking, unlike most game articles that don't explain anything, but the protagonist's game suddenly became popular, and the author and teacher are laying the groundwork. In addition, the love line is very cute, sour and sweet. Overall, based on what I saw, it is a sweet and sour story that is very cute and suitable for reading while taking a break.
The writing is very good, the description of the game makes people feel very detailed, and the description of StarCraft is very real. It is rare that I feel that it is really StarCraft rather than a reskinned modern game.
It's very interesting, but the writing is a bit scattered, the development is slow, there isn't much excitement, and it tends to be in a bland style; the protagonist could be developed faster and have more excitement, and it's too short.
Five-star praise, (ฅ´ω`ฅ) has read and left a paw
It's very well written, but a little lacking.
Gone? Add one more
There are really a lot of jokes from the author... They are blended just right, and I'm laughing like shit
I found a good article when I was scouring the sand.
It's a slow-burning book, and I really dislike the brotherhood in it. At least so far, I think this book is pretty good.
Why, I just nourished the book briefly, but the book died! ? Sad
The writing is very good. Why is there no paragraph review? There are also very few book reviews. Maybe more people can read it on another platform.
I like it, hope there is still qaq