Comprehensive Martial Arts************

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The emotional description is delicate and the setting is good, but I am very doubtful, is the chat on the couch really a chat? I suspect not, but I can't find any evidence [laughter]

In fact, mixed martial arts is not easy to write, but the author's writing style is good. For the structure, you can refer to "Eagle Dogs of the Imperial Court". At least it is not that messy to read. Also, the brakes are too fast [Thinking][Thinking]

Not bad, especially after more than 30 chapters, the writing becomes more and more exciting [Like]

The illustrations are really beautiful, and they are just right for teasing [laughing]

The car is very stable, everyone can get on with confidence.

The writing is good, especially when it starts to get better in chapter 35, the characters are vividly drawn, and the driving becomes bolder. It's worth a read! !

It's nice, but the author is a bit short.

Not bad, not bad. I like the characters of the heroines, but Huang Rong is a bit difficult [laughter]

It's good-looking, not bad, not bad

Generally speaking, Se Se's description is good, but there are also some subtle points. Of course, whether it is a subtle point or not depends on your hobby. Other than that, it's quite good-looking. There's nothing wrong with the writing. It's not just astringency, but also character descriptions and plot development, and the background settings are also quite interesting. Most mixed martial arts novels are astringent and have multiple female protagonists, but many of them are poorly written, inconsistent, stiff in connection, and even a little depressing. Your book is relatively good. I give you a thumbs up. Come on, I wish you good luck every day, great improvement in your writing skills, and a surge of literary thoughts. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑ Then I said that the point where I felt the thunder was in Chapter 38, probably after the 20th paragraph. My comments are in paragraph 31, and the following is my personal opinion, slightly improved. ↓↓↓ Okay, the taste does not match, it is too obvious. Some small places can be justified. The intention here is so abrupt and obvious, tsk tsk, I will take it easy. Except for this, the whole thing is still readable, if the author has the intention to change it (/_＼). There is no problem in accepting married women like Ning Zhongze and Huang Rong. For some reasons, neither Yue Buqun nor Guo Jing is the kind of person who is obsessed with sexual desire. The number of times they have sex is probably very few. And because of their own personality charm, she Apart from the fact that this is not the first time, we can be regarded as clean and chaste, but since they are my women, no one can touch them again. Even if they are her original partners, the most they can do is touch them with their hands, and maintain a caring and caring attitude. So here you are giving away a girl, and if you don't plan to accept her, of course I have nothing to say. After all, Yue Lingshan, with her charisma, I wouldn't be too sorry if I didn't accept her. But if I were to accept it, I would be a bit uncomfortable with the protagonist's behavior and attitude. At least it's not in line with my hobbies and it's really hard to accept. It's just that I may be possessive, and evil people would be happy if I were alone, and I cannot accept the situation of anyone touching something that may be mine. Hmm... It's like helping my brothers who may have the same views to avoid lightning.･ﾟﾟ･(／ω＼)･ﾟﾟ･. Can't you add a picture? This thing (tomato) is so inconvenient, hum ╯^╰. Some brothers may be too lazy to go back and read the original text. After hearing the thunder, they left directly to avoid being slandered. What I want to say is that everyone has different tastes and preferences. I am the only one who speaks and I am slightly biased. Please forgive me for my slight bias. If you want, you can read what I said or analyze it in the article. Finally, you can discuss it and don't directly curse.･ﾟﾟ･(／ω＼)･ﾟﾟ･. ↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓ The author has revised the text, and now there is no big problem. There are some small things that I feel I should be unhappy about, but in fact they haven't happened yet. I can explain it O(≧▽≦)O. It doesn't feel very entangled or regretful, so I don't think those things affect the perception very much. Don't feel bad about yourself, at least don't affect your mood. If you don't get angry, there will be no one to replace your body if you are so angry (/≧▽≦)/~┴┴. Hehe, but I will not delete the large paragraph of text I typed before. This is my dialectical process. Keeping it here can prove more truly and reliably that this book does have its merits, and it is definitely worthy of reading by suitable people. Overall, you can still have fun with it.

I have read too many articles about mixed martial arts, and few of them can write about the whole thing. They are all half-measures.

Short and weak, come on [thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking]

[Laughing evilly] So evil, I am so pure. How can you show me this?

As a pure man, I like this kind of satisfying and sexy novels, but unfortunately most of them have been harmonized. A tribute to those lost youth...!

Updates are so slow. Authors who write one chapter every few days have to be cautious. Look at other authors who have at least two or even four chapters a day. Don't be lazy, okay? Write a book with over a million words [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it] Since you are writing about that kind of degenerate, you should write about it with desolation, sadness and unknown fear. For example, people in a town are dead but they are still alive and don't know that they are dead. There are many things that rely on the author's imagination. Later, you can mix in weird or strange elements and immortality. As the protagonist is revealed step by step, the spiritual energy will slowly revive.

Not bad, very pretty

Invincible, really invincible

The writing is great, I love reading it [laughs evilly]

Come on, come on, hurry up.

Hahahahahaha

The plot is good, come on, come on

Very nice, the author is also nice [Blow Kiss]

Our main focus is to read good-looking authors [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's beautiful, you can come in and have a look😊