The Street Girl and the Young Master

I personally think the story is pretty good. If you have any questions, you can ask them and we can discuss them together.

Author, your article is very interesting. The characters are not stereotyped and each has their own distinct characteristics. It's a pity that Mumu didn't try it with the male co-star. Although I know that Mumu is not in the mood for love because of the marriage of the previous generation, but since everything is related to the male protagonist, it would be nice to write more emotional scenes [crazy]. I saw that you talked about some characters' personalities and experiences as well as the reasons for some things at the end of the chapter. In fact, it would be better to directly expand it into the main text. [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] This article also shows the author's many thoughts and some of his mental journeys in life, which are really good. The author should work hard to create!

I personally think it's very beautiful Each character is very rich and three-dimensional. They have their own pros and cons, pros and cons. Love and friendship have stages. Not forever, people change. Also, there is nothing like empathy, unless she has actually experienced it in order to be able to empathize. The detailed descriptions and psychological changes in the novel are very gradual. There is a gradual change, instead of suddenly falling in love at first sight or something, it is all well-founded. There are causes and consequences. Moreover, this novel did not write that the heroine must forgive her parents. You must get along well with the stepmother's two children, because the two younger brothers have always liked the heroine, and wanted to call her sister, and wanted to meet her, but she refused. It is not like other novels where the heroine will force herself to get along with them, so she thinks they are very good and changes her mind about them... (Anyway, this is a better direction) But in this novel, the heroine only understands her parents when she grows up, but she does not forgive them. From the beginning to the end, the heroine never forgave, and she always maintained a very firm idea, that is, she refused. There is also a story between the heroine and the hero. I personally feel that it is very consistent with the character of the heroine, so I think this ending is very consistent. Moreover, the heroine's final direction is actually to reconcile with herself and live the life she wants, freely. So after reading this novel, I really feel that if you love someone, you must love yourself first. Only by loving yourself first can you love others better or love the world better. Then I am more curious about the parallel events in the extra episode, the finale, it is an open ending, which makes people think about it. I wonder what kind of follow-up it will be, or will it end here, or will their story continue to be written? And a very splendid life? In short, I hope they can get better and better.

The author really wants to see more interactions between Mumu and Xie An, or maybe a boy who is full of Mumu will appear to heal Mumu (currently, I haven't found out how much Xie An likes Mumu). Is this book feminist? Will he abuse the male protagonist later? Hey, look forward to it. In addition, these wanton youths written in big letters are also very vivid. It is really your youth. What are you afraid of? Just run forward. Ah ah ah, swaying, big brother, where is the brother who sets off the fireworks? Is it possible for him and Mumu to be together? Please arrange for them to meet again soon ~ I feel that the brother is also a very warm person. In addition, I feel that part of the content is written around the second female lead and the third female lead. Of course, there is also a female protagonist, but I still want to see the female protagonist.

Nice! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Zhao Yuting's story is so short. I want to continue to watch the relationship between him and the heroine. The two heal each other, warm each other, and understand each other's faults.

Sobriety and independence are the words the author said at the beginning and are used throughout the text. There is too much to say at the end, so I won't say more here. It's one of my favorite settings, it's a feeling. You can read and experience it yourself. Some people must also have this "feeling".

The front part is very interesting, each character is not perfect, it is novel and breaks away from traditional writing, the heroine is very free and uninhibited, she is tired of everything because she is too sober and she is completely herself! She is also lucky to meet an arrogant male protagonist who bows his head for her and tolerates all her bad moods! The only drawback is that the ending is a little lacking. It feels like the relationship between the male and female protagonists is over just after it started.

This book is really beautiful. Every character is written very vividly and realistically. The heroine really lives a free and unrestrained life. She really loves her. But I didn't read enough. I really want to know what happens to them later. There's not even an extra chapter [face covering]. I really want to read more.

Very very beautiful