After Transmigrating Into a Book, the Pretty Young Master Became Everyone's Dream Boy

To summarize, don't look at the heartthrob tag in the title of the book. I came here for this, but it has nothing to do with heartthrob. The two male protagonists have very long emotional lines, so they should be considered as having no secondary characters. Except for the protagonist's emotional line, there is only daily life, and there is not much space to write about the villain. (Spoilers below, please avoid lightning) The relationship between the two male protagonists is very slow. They only confessed their love in Chapter 168. Except for an accident, they are still in the stage of kissing and hugging in Chapter 186. They have to avoid being attacked by others for several days. It will get better gradually after a while. The characters of the two male protagonists are relatively imperfect. To put it mildly, they are too realistic. Unlike the perfect male protagonists in other novels, they have many shortcomings. They are submissive and hesitant about love, longing for love but not expecting it, and both parties are worried about each other, which makes the progress of the love line really slow. Moreover, Xiaoyi's shortcoming is that it is too obvious. She has been hiding in her own protective shell, and she didn't wake up until the other person was about to die. I really want to tie them together, it makes me so angry! In addition, there is a very funny and big event in the love line of the two male protagonists: "Amnesia Scene + Running Suffering" Qin Chen×Cheng Yi Forever united

The writing is okay, I quite like it. The only person I don't like is Gu Wu, which feels weird to me. Also, the male protagonist's affection for Gu Wu is inexplicable. Just because Gu Wu looks cute, the male protagonist likes to tease him. Well, if there hadn't been the previous dormitory scene, the failure to repay the money owed, and the original plot saying that Gu Wu used the original male protagonist to make trouble, I wouldn't dislike Gu Wu.

The writing is very good and the logic lines are well connected. I like the system [blowing kiss]

Gu Wu, I think he is multi-faceted, as can be seen in the book, and I can't say that he is bad, but I think if he is an ordinary person, such as his roommate, he will look different, and his relationship with the protagonist feels inexplicable. But the others are well portrayed, and the overall writing style is also good, very humorous and relaxed.

It looks good, the writing is very smooth, Xiao Yi and Xiao Yi are so cute, I really like this character, please come on, author💪💪💪💪

It's okay. I read the current update in one go. The emotional line is a bit tough and the description is still lacking. I look forward to the follow-up. I feel a little uncomfortable with the character design. I don't quite understand his behavior of liking someone else and thinking about letting the other person confess first. Even if they like each other, it seems too strange. They like each other but don't confess. I don't understand it. (Diaijia: purely personal opinion, overall it is good, recommended)

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good! ! Keep updating! ! Come on! ! ! ! So pretty! ! ! ! ! ! !

No matter what, I don't care, I just like it, I don't care, I just like it. [Flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][love][love][love][love][love]

Nice! ! ! ! ! I just hope that the author can make the plot faster. I want to see Big Brother and Xiao Yi together [crying][crying][crying][crazy]

Nice looking, I like it very much