Transformation*****

There are so many details. From these words, I can see the true feelings of a person living in peaceful times when faced with such a disaster.

This book is for those who can't stand it and will abandon it immediately. Those who like it will especially enjoy reading it.

The writing is very good and detailed, and the author is very polite. It looks really good. Who are the people who give low scores?

I think it's pretty good, but it's a little bit toxic in the early stages and the plot is a bit confusing. Maybe the author hasn't figured out what kind of story he wants to write yet, but it's much better now. As for CP, I personally don't think it matters. I think it's good to be single or married. If it's a hundred, forget it. In this era and background, it's impossible to make a hundred. From the current point of view, Rudy does look very much like the CP the author wants to write about. After all, the relationship between these two people is too obvious. Even if they watch movies and go shopping, I won't believe you even if you say they are not married. As for the biomorphic demon part, I think it's pretty good, but it would be better if it could be written more carefully. Also, this is a novel, not history. The novel must have some artistic processing elements. If it were written according to real history, the protagonist would have died as early as the first chapter, or turned into a puff, which would be ridiculous. In conclusion, although there are flaws, it is generally good and I give it five stars. I would like to say one more thing, don't blindly change the outline according to the opinions of some readers. They are not the authors, and their brainwaves are definitely not in line with the author. The consequences of random changes will be an explosion of characters, confusing logic, a collapse of the plot, and finally cutting the book with hatred. So, just write according to your own ideas and don't be influenced by other people's opinions. The pen is in your hand.

I really didn't expect to see such a good book here, good luck to the author

It's a rare type. I saw a ghoul and didn't hold back.

It's time to start school! I can't watch it anymore, my palace fans! [Angry] Please add your personal feelings! The book is indeed well written, maybe it is the first time I have written it, and the rhythm is not well controlled (at least I read it intermittently [eating melon]), but it can also be read in a rough way. The author's military literacy and knowledge reserve are quite high (at least higher than me, haha), and I really like the war scenes! (In the later period, it was also fun for the protagonist to kill randomly on the battlefield [I learned it]) And—— Looking forward to the emotional line [currently being drafted]

Clearly identify the audience of the book, and then use the content to filter the audience. (First filter and then capture) If the plot is not interesting, then try to make a fuss about the plot. Once the settings are set, don't change them casually, as it will affect the previous text or fail to meet your audience's expectations. This will become a "screening" at the beginning and a "decision" in the middle, which is easy to die. The latter part is fantasy, and finally there is an example of foreshadowing (a description) in the previous part; Orvis's body was hidden in the bushes, with bite marks on his arms and legs so deep that the bones were visible, as if they were bitten by a crocodile in the manner of a wolf. His chest was hollowed out, dark liquid flowed out, and his ferocious eyeballs protruded. It is difficult to imagine what terrible things he had experienced during his lifetime. … An Ke sells sex, I love watching it, the protagonist is shy, I am excited. I'm a pervert, it's so cute

Main mission: Survive and get rid of the order. Side mission: What to do after completing the main mission? Isn't it true that the author will always be controlled as long as he lives? Will it turn into a collaboration? The kind of getting rid of control~ It's still very interesting. It's the first time I've seen this kind of thing. "Keep writing!" @ Cuttlefish shop

It's very good-looking, but the power is not too strong. I hope that Mustache's empire will not fail, but will negotiate for peace or something. Use the protagonist's genes to build an army, change the situation of the war, and finally negotiate. I mainly came here for Mustache during World War II [smile]

Lifelike, objective and objective, multiple descriptions, clear cars, nice content, I need more rustling passages, but the author has no lust for the book, and the readers are immersed in it, which makes people feel lustful... There is a taste for writing but no lust; very good! The author is a good hentai who has a driver's license and drives safely. For me, who is a BT, I read 2 chapters and wanted to collect the dust... But the more I read, the better and better I couldn't stop. So I planned to read one chapter a week, and I kept in mind the method of updating one hundred thousand words a day. I hope the author will not drive carelessly. If the review fails and the revision of the text is suspended, I advise you, young authors should regard updating one hundred thousand words a day as the novelist's grand and supreme goal. They should also pay attention to their physical and mental health, and don't be addicted to it!

Not bad, very interesting. The most important thing is that it has a good understanding of war and is not a casual account.

I haven't seen such a good book in a long time. Really, I'm not exaggerating. In the past, the books I read were either systems or systems, or there were protagonists like Thanos. Although here you will become a mutant in more than 20 chapters, but you still have weaknesses, and you are afraid of bombardment. This means that even with wonderful personal achievements, you can't change history, and it becomes nonsense. In it, the protagonists of both the Soviet Union and Germany did not loyal to either side, but stayed awake in the world. Later, they were controlled by brain-eating insects and became a little temporarily low-IQ. The writing is also very good, the logic is clear and compact, and it is not uncomfortable to watch. I sincerely recommend it! I read each chapter carefully. The writing is quite good. There may be some typos occasionally, but it is very readable. It's just that it's so short. I read it so slowly on purpose but I finished it very quickly [crying]

It was originally a novel similar to the style of TS Medical Soldier, but I didn't expect that it suddenly started to expand around the 20th chapter... [Laughing and crying]

It's a very good book, but updates are too slow. Another thing I don't like is science fiction. I thought that the protagonist would survive the war and do business or serve as an official in the United States or the Soviet Union, or in post-war Germany. Instead, I was given a scene in which a doctor transformed the protagonist's body. Anyway, I didn't quite accept it. Maybe some people like it.

I'd better give it five stars. At least it brought happy cruelty to many people. After all, if you really go to the battlefield, you may be the first to escape. By the way, regarding the withdrawal of the protagonist, I think this is in line with the image of the Soviet army in the later period.

At the beginning, I thought it was about a German female soldier at the bottom of World War II who struggled to survive until the end of World War II and then made a family history. Later, I found out that it was a fantasy biochemical experiment and thought that Resident Evil was directly related to survival in the apocalypse. Then when I saw Yao Run leaving Germany, I thought it was about the undead heroine escaping from Germany and following the post-war development. Now the undead heroine continues to survive World War II. It is quite unexpected and good. It is worth recommending.

The author writes very well. The only shortcoming is that the writing sucks from the beginning of the transformation. To strengthen the combat power, you can start by learning and growing in various environments or adding some cheats. It doesn't matter if this theme is slower to catch on. Even science fiction with cheats will have more audiences than the magic of transformation. Apart from these parts, the overall ranking is already very high on Tomato. That's right, the part where you started with your own ideas is much better than the part where you cater to others. Finally, I wish the author smooth sailing and being able to find his own style. If you have one sentence, you are not afraid of offending people. You wrote it on Tomato and you still pay attention to what others are doing. You can do whatever you want. Transforming the subsequent parts is really a hearty journey [laughing and crying]

Good, good, good, good. Very good author that fulfills my dark fantasies. In the early stage, flattery was used to survive. Later limb-joining behavior. It's simply the Holy Body of Greg. The mid-term biochemical transformation was brainwashed and trained, which is even more wonderful! There's also a foodie segment…Thai! Thai! Thai! Oh thanks! Wouldn't it be wonderful if you could evaluate different corpses or eat them alive... Anyway, you must work hard and write well! Ah ha ha ha ha uh

In the first four paragraphs of the first chapter, I reviewed and posted the main character picture of the AI ​​​​run. If you are interested, you can take a look. A rare type of tomato, look at it and cherish it

From the group, the German girl who transformed into World War II was also written by the author, right? [Laughing] To be honest, I didn't feel the transformation in the front, mainly because a zombie suddenly appeared in the back... Everyone mainly wants to see World War II and it's not a zombie [face covering]

The ratings are getting better and better ٩(♡㉨♡ )۶ , the author still has to write according to what he wants, and don't worry too much about gains and losses [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart] I went, why was I immediately locked up in a dark room? [Shocked][shocked][shocked]

It looks very good. The heroine is developing towards a violet, but with emotions. I want to ask, is it emotionless or lily in the end?

This is the first time an author can write about not being smart so realistically. It's great in every aspect.

It was all a cruel war, shouldn't we miss that little brat? I don't know how I will cry. After a long time, they forgot each other. No one can be trusted. It is also good for yourself to pay more attention to the little boy. Otherwise, you will lose yourself and become a war machine.

The writing is very realistic and very beautiful.

The writing is very detailed, and the monster world view can be explained by a parallel world (returning to Wolfenstein in one turn [smile]). It's okay for the protagonist to keep running away, but running the map too fast leads to a bit of fragmentation. It feels like you often stay in one place for a moment, then jump to the next place and then jump again quickly, which can also enrich the details.

The latest picture of something from this laboratory leaked? The Allies have come up with something similar. Why doesn't he feel surprised at all? The fish head weighs more than 20 kilograms, so its body must be at least 80 kilograms. But he doesn't seem surprised at all.

Although the author does not have an outline, he writes wherever he thinks of it, but the plot concept is not mentioned, but it may have deviated from the author's original idea. It seems that he can only follow the Marvel type science fiction article all the way to the end. Finally, please update it, it is not enough.

The writing is pretty good, but it's a bit bizarre and has a lot of fun. I don't recommend reading the comments.