To My High School Love

This book is really the best among urban campus novels that I have read. I really didn't expect that the author could write it so delicately. It feels like a very new way of thinking, which attracted me to read it. The biggest difference of this book is the ups and downs. The real ups and downs satisfy the fantasies of ordinary people and school belles. Moreover, the male protagonist's step-by-step changes are described in detail, and they are not done overnight. The timeline is also drawn out for a long time, the plot is very clear, and there are foreshadowings in a future. The male protagonist shoulders future expectations. The author's writing can also allow readers to better understand the series of changes in the male protagonist, so as not to be confused. The further it develops, the more developmental it becomes. I hope the author can be less censorious. This real feeling is just right. The line surrounding the love between the male and female protagonists is slow and rhythmic. I implore the author to add two more chapters.

Marvelous!! Real and delicate emotions. Some people say that the male protagonist is a loser, but really when you are in the deep quagmire of life, full of powerlessness, and at this time you meet the love of your life, you have low self-esteem and escape, this is the real person. Maybe the plot of a rich girl falling in love with a poor boy is unlikely to happen in life, but it is like watching a TV series. On the premise that the overall plot is interesting enough, it is good to make the details more realistic.

I read this novel without a harem. Isn't this a sign of humiliation? The writing is quite sweet, and the author saw that the harem could be rewritten a little bit and it would be really nice. Why do I say that? Because the heroines you wrote are all very well written. They look pretty sweet anyway. You really believe me.

I have been reading Tomato for so long. To be honest, I can count the number of books I like on five fingers. The rest are just for reading. Everyone in this novel is flesh-and-blood and the content resonates with me. In this fast era, many people are confused about love, including me, but reading this book made me understand what love is and what friendship is. The author describes these parts very well. Love is inclusive rather than restrictive. This is what I realized after reading this article. This subject matter may not be outstanding in Tomato, but it can stand out from the mire. Rarely do I type so many words in support of a novel but in advance whether the novel lives up to my ideal premise. I will keep this work on my bookshelf forever because it is more than just a work, and I will follow it until the end.

To be honest, this book is very poisonous in the early stage, but it is very true. Facing the pursuit of a goddess-like wealthy daughter, a rural boy keeps swaying and encouraging himself through self-suggestion. Many book friends were fed up with it and mocked the male protagonist as a "struggle boy". When the male protagonist is wavering and thinks that he is not strong enough to give up on the female protagonist, he is actually letting the female protagonist go. Many people say that the male protagonist is cowardly, but I don't understand. This male protagonist has low self-esteem and has no ability to take responsibility for the female protagonist. He can't hold on and is ready to return and make a mess. Leaving is the best way for the female protagonist. Later, the male protagonist made a decision and persisted in it. Through the continuous self-suggestion in the previous part, the male protagonist grew into a confident leader. Then in the process of fighting for the heroine, the hero was very painful, but this was his performance of being responsible for the heroine. He insisted on making the choice to the end, and he was very responsible for the heroine. In contrast, the heroine is originally a wealthy daughter, and she has contributed very little, but she has a good family, and her family is very good to her and him. The heroine is not perfect, but she chooses to believe in the hero. Her family represents her and fulfills her imperfections. Very good.

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Reminds me of my past. I was the top student in town and went to the best school in the city. I became a phoenix and stayed in the intensive class to save face. I had a crush in high school for three years but I didn't dare to talk about it. 😢. I didn't have strong self-control. After every exam, I vowed to study hard but ended up letting it go. Looking back now, I find that I am actually quite nostalgic. It's the regret of youth. I remembered the confusion of taking the subway for the first time, the excitement of flying for the first time, and the nervousness of going abroad for the first time. I also walked out of that small town, and my horizons expanded 🤦. I hope the author can give more love to the male and female protagonists😭, I don't want to see any more regretful novels based on reality😭

I think the part where the heroine has to ask the boys to order is too cruel for boys. It's already very awkward. I originally wanted to ask the author about that paragraph, but I can't seem to post a comment. However, the character portrayal is very delicate, and with the background of the male protagonist, the teacher knows his shame and then becomes brave. Although it is very science fiction, rich The love stories between a house girl and a poor boy all originate from childhood. But when you grow up, you will find that it is not that good. It is also a characteristic of novels. Novels can be science fiction, and everyone has thought about the beauty of fantasy. When two people are together, they need to accommodate and fulfill each other. There is also trust. Ideal love rarely exists and reality But we might as well all be dream chasers. There must be something to pursue in life, whether it is food and clothing, starting a business, or someone. I hope you and I can set out towards our dreams.

I hope the author can try his best to make more episodes. It has a youthful atmosphere and is very interesting.

The relationship between the male and female protagonists is described very delicately, and the male protagonist's decadence in the early stage is also very real. Although the plot is a bit flawed later, this is one of the few novels that I can follow. However, there are many similar plots later on. The female protagonist's family persuades them to break up, the male protagonist feels inferior and gives in, and then the female protagonist's family gets better and they get back together. , And then something happened to the heroine's family, and the hero has low self-esteem... I know the author wants to make the plot more ups and downs, but this makes the hero's character very unpleasant, and it will become boring if it happens too often. I hope the hero can find confidence in college. Come on, the author gives five stars [please update]