To Her in High School

This book is really the best among urban campus novels that I have read. I really didn't expect that the author could write it so delicately. It feels like a very new way of thinking, which attracted me to read it. The biggest difference of this book is the ups and downs. The real ups and downs satisfy the fantasies of ordinary people and school belles. Moreover, the male protagonist's step-by-step changes are described in detail, and they are not done overnight. The timeline is also drawn out for a long time, the plot is very clear, and there are foreshadowings in a future. The male protagonist shoulders future expectations. The author's writing can also allow readers to better understand the series of changes in the male protagonist, so as not to be confused. The further it develops, the more developmental it becomes. I hope the author can be less censorious. This real feeling is just right. The line surrounding the love between the male and female protagonists is slow and rhythmic. I implore the author to add two more chapters.

Marvelous! ! Real and delicate emotions. Some people say that the male protagonist is a loser, but really when you are in the deep quagmire of life, full of powerlessness, and at this time you meet the love of your life, you have low self-esteem and escape, this is the real person. Maybe the plot of a rich girl falling in love with a poor boy is unlikely to happen in life, but it is like watching a TV series. On the premise that the overall plot is interesting enough, it is good to make the details more realistic.

I read this novel without a harem. Isn't this a sign of humiliation? The writing is quite sweet, and the author saw that the harem could be rewritten a little bit and it would be really nice. Why do I say that? Because the heroines you wrote are all very well written. They look pretty sweet anyway. You really believe me.

I have been reading Tomato for so long. To be honest, I can count the number of books I like on five fingers. The rest are just for reading. Everyone in this novel is flesh-and-blood and the content resonates with me. In this fast era, many people are confused about love, including me, but reading this book made me understand what love is and what friendship is. The author describes these parts very well. Love is inclusive rather than restrictive. This is what I realized after reading this article. This subject matter may not be outstanding in Tomato, but it can stand out from the mire. Rarely do I type so many words in support of a novel but in advance whether the novel lives up to my ideal premise. I will keep this work on my bookshelf forever because it is more than just a work, and I will follow it until the end.

To be honest, this book is very poisonous in the early stage, but it is very true. Facing the pursuit of a goddess-like wealthy daughter, a rural boy keeps swaying and encouraging himself through self-suggestion. Many book friends were fed up with it and mocked the male protagonist as a "struggle boy". When the male protagonist is wavering and thinks that he is not strong enough to give up on the female protagonist, he is actually letting the female protagonist go. Many people say that the male protagonist is cowardly, but I don't understand. This male protagonist has low self-esteem and has no ability to take responsibility for the female protagonist. He can't hold on and is ready to return and make a mess. Leaving is the best way for the female protagonist. Later, the male protagonist made a decision and persisted in it. Through the continuous self-suggestion in the previous part, the male protagonist grew into a confident leader. Then in the process of fighting for the heroine, the hero was very painful, but this was his performance of being responsible for the heroine. He insisted on making the choice to the end, and he was very responsible for the heroine. In contrast, the heroine is originally a wealthy daughter, and she has contributed very little, but she has a good family, and her family is very good to her and him. The heroine is not perfect, but she chooses to believe in the hero. Her family represents her and fulfills her imperfections. Very good.

Reminds me of my past. I was the top student in town and went to the best school in the city. I became a phoenix and stayed in the intensive class to save face. I had a crush in high school for three years but I didn't dare to talk about it. [Crying]. I didn't have strong self-control. After every exam, I vowed to study hard but ended up letting it go. Looking back now, I find that I am actually quite nostalgic. It's the regret of youth. I remembered the confusion of taking the subway for the first time, the excitement of flying for the first time, and the nervousness of going abroad for the first time. I also walked out of that small town, and my horizons expanded [face covering]. I hope the author can give more love to the male and female protagonists😭, I don't want to see any more regretful novels based on reality😭

1. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and the description of the environment cleverly sets off the mood of the characters, which is very artistically appealing. The beginning is concise and to the point, with an extraordinary approach, which can quickly attract readers and make a deep impression on the characters. 2. Describe the story with full passion, highlighting the key points, appropriate details, and specific content. The metaphors are appropriate, the words are vivid, the language is easy to understand, and it is close to the reality of life, making it feel more intimate to read. 3. The narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent. For the description of scenery, the language is concise and accurate, the associations are rich, and the scenes are naturally integrated. 4. By enriching the character's language and actions, the character's ideological quality is successfully brought out. The article is both narrative and lyrical, making full use of a combination of dynamic and static writing, supplemented by appropriate metaphors, personification and other techniques. 5. The young author observes carefully, narrates in an orderly manner, and uses some exquisite words to add a lot of interest to the article. 6. The article is elegant, smooth and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous. The imagination is reasonable and can make readers feel like they are in a dream. 7. The article has clear clues, prominent themes, and closely focuses on the core content. The details are described with great ingenuity, and the characters' language, expressions, movements, etc. Are carefully and delicately described to highlight their characteristics. 8. The description is delicate, the flavor of life is strong, the words and sentences are accurate and expressive, the language is accurate, clear and vivid, and the content is rich and specific. 9. The case descriptions are vivid and specific, and the characters' words and deeds are consistent with their identity characteristics. The article comes from life. Although the language is not gorgeous, it is real and interesting, and the writing is emotional and reasonable. 10. The article writes the key contents in detail, the language is lively, lively, and full of interest, and a large number of spoken words in daily life are used to make the article more natural and friendly. In addition, to evaluate whether a novel is well written, we can also consider aspects such as storyline, character creation, and smooth writing. The plot of a good novel should be full of tension and ups and downs, have an appropriate amount of suspense elements, have a clear goal and a clear main line, with natural and smooth chapter transitions, and a reasonable climax arrangement; the characters should have distinctive personalities, consistent behavior and dialogue, and can arouse readers' emotional fluctuations; the writing should be concise, clear, smooth and easy to read, match the story style, have vivid emotions and delicate scene descriptions, accurate and rich vocabulary, and accurate grammar.

I hope the author can try his best to make more episodes. It has a youthful atmosphere and is very interesting.

I think the part where the heroine has to ask the boys to order is too cruel for boys. It's already very awkward. I originally wanted to ask the author about that paragraph, but I can't seem to post a comment. However, the character portrayal is very delicate, and with the background of the male protagonist, the teacher knows his shame and then becomes brave. Although it is very science fiction, rich The love stories between a house girl and a poor boy all originate from childhood. But when you grow up, you will find that it is not that good. It is also a characteristic of novels. Novels can be science fiction, and everyone has thought about the beauty of fantasy. When two people are together, they need to accommodate and fulfill each other. There is also trust. Ideal love rarely exists and reality But we might as well all be dream chasers. There must be something to pursue in life, whether it is food and clothing, starting a business, or someone. I hope you and I can set out towards our dreams.

The relationship between the male and female protagonists is described very delicately, and the male protagonist's decadence in the early stage is also very real. Although the plot is a bit flawed later, this is one of the few novels that I can follow. However, there are many similar plots later on. The female protagonist's family persuades them to break up, the male protagonist feels inferior and gives in, and then the female protagonist's family gets better and they get back together. , And then something happened to the heroine's family, and the hero has low self-esteem... I know the author wants to make the plot more ups and downs, but this makes the hero's character very unpleasant, and it will become boring if it happens too often. I hope the hero can find confidence in college. Come on, the author gives five stars [please update]

Not bad, a very refreshing article. I rarely see this kind of article. No rebirth, no system, no cheats. The female protagonist is very full. The only drawback is that the male protagonist is too pessimistic. I hope there will be a node in the later stage that can make the male protagonist stand up.

Let me evaluate it objectively. It is really well written. Do you know what it feels like to find a book in a pile of history when there is no book? I just felt that the writing was a bit contradictory at the beginning, and many people might not be able to stand it. For example, there was still a teacher who was optimistic about the male protagonist, and the male protagonist also made up his mind, but it was still the same as before, but it became much better in the future. I don't know how many words the author planned to write. I listened for 6 hours before I heard Chapter 4.50 [Face covering]

It's all gone to this point. I won't do it if I don't write multiple female protagonists. It's too brutal. These three female characters are so well written. They are simply perfect goddesses.

Hello, author, this is my first book review. I express my personal opinion. I really like the author's writing. Each character you describe has its own personality charm. It is very delicate and the storyline is coherent. In my personal mind, it surpasses "My 26-year-old Female Tenant". Maybe it is because of different experiences. I prefer your description of the plot outline. The Tenant: Realistic Castle in the Sky and this book: Idealistic Castle in the Sky. I have been reading this book for a long time. I just discovered this book and thought it was a good read when I saw the title. It is a good way to pass the time in the lonely night. The beginning is really in contrast to your title. The plot is getting more and more exciting and I am deeply fascinated. I read Chapter 157 of the second volume in 3 days. Some people may think that I read slowly, but I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. This book is worth reading carefully. I really couldn't help but read a part of it, searching for the answer in my heart. Unfortunately, the author didn't write it until this point, so I felt helpless to search for it in the book reviews. Some people defined this book as a harem novel. Everyone in this novel has a unique personality and distinct charm. They deserve it. If you like reading harem novels, go to this small website to see for yourself what a harem novel is! I can't even understand the book! The storyline has been written here, every heroine is worth it! Dare to love, dare to hate, and be stronger than all of us. This is a book, not a reflection of reality! I hope you will not trap Lin Yan and Chen Xi on that lonely island, watching the train of fate whistle away. The novels I have read include but are not limited to: The Nine Heavens, The Eternal God Emperor, The Covering the Sky Trilogy, My 26-Year-Old Female Tenant, I Killed Gods in a Mental Hospital, The School Beauty's Personal Bodyguard, Stall Daliwan (I can't remember the title of the book), The Undertaker, Tianyuan, Please Call Me the Fist of the Human Race. Who dares to say that his useless dictatorship will last forever. Senior Sister Su Baizhu, wait for the rain to stop in Lei Chu Ting. @Qingfengyinliunian

In three days, I read more than 400 chapters from scratch. I found that the storyline is very good and the characters are well described. Although the values ​​​​are a little unequal, those are small things. The main emotions and the psychological changes of the characters are very prominent. The early high school period is fully described. The protagonist is very hard-working, and the heroine and the hero are also very sweet together! But there happened to be Lin Yan, which reminded me (Onodera in Pseudo Love: I don't want to end up marrying a passerby). Either make a side story, or just ignore it slowly. Don't let us feel chilled. The second female protagonist and the heroine both like the male protagonist very much. I think this book also has multiple female protagonists, so can you not let her down (based on the characters of the male and female protagonists written by the author, it is very rare, but still I hope that my dream can come true) In the end, I also liked the role of Chen Xi very much. It helped the male protagonist a lot. In the early stage, he was depressed and did not dare to like anyone. He helped the female protagonist and the male protagonist realize their beautiful dreams together, but it failed. In the later period, because of my grandfather's guarantee, I liberated my heart and pursued my "real thing" during the love period of the male and female protagonists (I hope you can meet your "great teacher")! I hope the author writes more about Lin Yan! You shouldn't lose, be careful about sending the blade🔪~…

A very good book that perfectly conforms to the concept of love between men and women in modern society. The characters are vividly and delicately portrayed. The author has also put a lot of effort into the storyline. I hope that the author can write better and better in the future and the storyline will be richer. No matter what the final ending is, at least this book will not be unfinished.

The writing is very good, and I have the desire to read it. I want to know what happened next and whether we are together or not. It's very imaginative, how can a rich girl be with an ordinary person? Sometimes when I think about it, I feel really reluctant to do so, but there is nothing I can do about it. Maybe my life has been arranged for a long time. I hope there will be more updates, come on✊!

To be honest, this book is the best one I have ever read. It is so special. I hope the author will continue to work hard. (Can you please stop writing so harshly? I'm almost in tears after reading almost 5 chapters😭😭) Thanks again to the author for this novel, which makes me feel like I'm back to the beginning. Finally, I hope that the two of them can make it to the end (I hope the author can reply)

The author's writing is really good. The emotions and character descriptions are quite detailed. Please keep reading. Unlike other novels, they are all sweet and old-fashioned system cool articles that make you fall asleep just reading them. This kind of emotional description is the most attractive to readers. It feels a bit like a female tenant. I hope there will be more Tong in the future. It would be best to go in both directions. I feel that there is almost no role in the later part.

Come on author, this book is already a masterpiece for me, much better than those crappy cool articles. I am worried if this book is not popular. The more I read, the more I want to read it. I can't stop and save a chapter every day to read it. Every time I update, I have to read the chapter name. I can't help it when I saw the name of the new chapter. I hope the author can work hard and update it. It's so good that I can't get enough [laughing]

A light and shadow poem of love and growth! A young man enters the neon lights of the city from the countryside, gets lost in the maze of the new class, suffers from poor grades and wandering eyes. He rescued a young man in an alley, but was driven into the shadows. The girl repays her kindness with her warm clothes, accompanied by flowers and trees, and the love is planted quietly. Destiny changes, the young man goes to a foreign country, parting, his eyes are entangled, and he misses him for a long time. After years, when we meet again, time condenses. Reflected in each other's eyes, love surges like a tide, breaking through the embankment of time, continuing the love song, and drawing a long scroll of career and love.

This book is really well written. Some people say that the protagonist is always hesitant and then keeps pushing away the heroine. It is very poisonous. They say that the protagonist has problems with his values. I feel the same way because I was in the same situation in high school. The inferiority complex during that time always comes to my mind. When I see someone who is better than me, I will really push it to others, but I am always firm and pull repeatedly. I bring myself into it, especially when the protagonist's mother is sick. In that paragraph, I think I had the same idea as him. Even though others care about me, I still won't tell my friends and brothers. Why? Because the better they are, the less trouble I want to have. Everyone has different ideas when encountering something, but I still want to say that I hope readers can live like what Rabindranath Tagore said: life is as gorgeous as summer flowers, death is as quiet and beautiful as autumn leaves, and parents are free from illness and disaster! I also covered myself [smirking] [smirking] After reading it for so long, I finally caught up with the author's progress. It's beautiful, the emotions are real and delicate, and the characters in the book are very attractive. The only thing that makes me a little angry is that I saw a comment saying that the author gave one star and a negative review if he didn't follow his ideas. It was too natural. I think there is nothing wrong with the development of the plot. Every reader has every idea, and who can control it? We just have to watch it. If we are not satisfied, we can just follow our own heart. No one is forcing us to watch it.

Okay, to be honest, the writing style is not that top-notch, but it just touched my heart. The protagonist's experience in high school was very similar to what I experienced in junior high school. I was nearsighted at that time, and I didn't dare to tell my family. Because my family put a lot of pressure on me when I was a child, I couldn't see clearly and study for a period of time in junior high school. Later, when I couldn't learn, I was willing to carry a mobile phone. But in reality, I couldn't meet a good girl like Wang. Fortunately, I met a math teacher who changed my study in the third grade of junior high school. I have always hated math teachers. When I first started in the first grade of junior high school, I was slapped several times in public by the math teacher because I didn't do two after-school questions. From then on, I didn't like studying very much, and I became withdrawn. My class teacher also hated a poor student like me. In the first two years of junior high school, I lived a very depressed and painful life. After bringing a mobile phone, I felt relieved. With the mobile phone, I would read novels under the quilt every night, and then my eyesight became worse and worse. But in the third grade of junior high school, I met a new math teacher. My grades were always at the bottom. Fortunately, the teacher noticed me. The teacher called me when I was doing a problem and had a heart-to-heart talk with me. She told me that I should study for myself. If I can't learn something difficult, just learn from the basics. I was so moved that I cried during class. I started to study slowly, and my math became better and better. My grades in other classes also improved, and then I was admitted to high school. Even now that I am in college, I still remember how kind my teacher was to me. Even if I forget her name, I always remember to be more patient with others. Everyone lives for themselves, and you cannot let yourself down because of a bad word. Here I am still very grateful to my third grade math teacher, thank you [almost crying] I've read Chapter 151, and I can tell that the author is a novice. Although some of the plots are too deliberate, it doesn't affect the viewing (if you are an old bookworm). The biggest problem of the author is that he has been emphasizing suffering (and the male protagonist has too low self-esteem, but after thinking about it, it is normal to have low self-esteem if you really encounter such a girl). In fact, once or twice is enough, and more will affect the viewing. After Chapter 70, it has almost changed. There is one point that the author probably did not patch, which is the first time the male protagonist made money. I saw many people saying that the male protagonist would not give it to his parents if he had money, but if combined with the male protagonist's character, it is impossible not to give it, so this is the author's fault (Lin Yan likes that the male protagonist is not well described, very abrupt, and has no process) (This point has been patched later, so please ask for leave after reading it, and don't rant) Okay, after talking about the shortcomings, it's time to talk about the advantages. The biggest advantage is that the emotional description is relatively realistic. You can turn off the comments when reading the novel. Some comments still affect the mood of watching. This is my suggestion. Let's talk about my feelings about the content I've seen so far. I think the key chapter for the male protagonist's growth is when he makes money for the first time. It can be said that it has the beginning of winning people's hearts, but it's not very obvious and maybe the male protagonist himself doesn't realize it. Naturally, the beginning of growth is when the old man takes the male protagonist as his student in disguise. In short, the growth of the male protagonist in the current chapter is satisfactory in the eyes of a reader like me. After all, it is the author's debut novel. I can give him more encouragement. What's so bad about free novels? Besides, the author has been making corrections. Finally, what I want to say is that my favorite heroine is Wang Yutong. She is so perfect. I would like to call it the ultimate goblin fantasy. Of course, I am that goblin [making faces] Chapter 157 could use a major overhaul, the writing is really jarring, the heroine puts everything on you, the old man thinks highly of you, and you are escaping by yourself. I don't understand what the author means by writing this? This makes your growth ahead look clownish, you know? No matter how good a novel is, if it keeps making readers wear down their patience, no one will want to continue reading it.

It is the best novel I have ever read in Tomato. You can say it is awesome, but you cannot deny that it does cause your emotions to fluctuate. This is the criterion for whether a novel is good or not. The fact that I read it for 8 hours is proof. I think this is the best urban novel I have ever read. There is no needless moaning from the tenants. The male protagonist is very dedicated in dealing with feelings. He has the courage to chase after knowing the gap. Unlike the tenants, the male protagonist is so coquettish that I feel uncomfortable to death. He is not like a man. Grab him what you want instead of complaining about your fate. I'm not procrastinating, I feel from the bottom of my heart that it is indeed well written. , Finally, the author lets them be together, I will be so fucking sick when the Lin family gets engaged ಠ╭╮ಠ. Please update soon, I really want to see you finish writing, your writing is so good, don't stop updating. Really good-looking

It took about three days to read the latest chapter. The first volume of Real Knife. The author portrayed the character of the mission very well. Mainly I hope that the male and female protagonists can be together in the end [Please update] [Love] [Love]

Very well written, the most beautiful novel [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

At first, I thought it was unremarkable, but after reading it for a while, I felt that the author's writing was getting better and better, and I was deeply touched - it hurt, it really hurt, especially when I saw them misunderstanding each other in the middle, it was really uncomfortable. Hey, I hope the author can give a good ending [laughing and crying]

I give it five points, it is well written, and I give thumbs up to the author. This book is very suitable for empathy. Especially when people who have experienced it read it, they will think that when they read it themselves, there are also a series of things that they did not read the book well. . It made me tear up, but I highly recommend watching it! Come on, author

Very good, the class gap and inferiority complex are vividly displayed on the paper ("ಡωಡ"). Perhaps only rural children can understand that feeling best. They fantasize countless times and are disappointed, silently paying for it and finally bowing to reality.

There is no doubt that this is a very good book. Every character and story line is very well drawn. The plot often brings emotions. I hope everyone has a happy ending. Thank you to the author.