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Family members, it's okay to give yourself five stars, right? He was full of enthusiasm and thought he could do anything. He thought that as long as the sword was sharp enough, the problem would be solved. Until he was plagued by hardships and fate took hold of the young man's throat. The sword in his hand is no longer sharp, and the youth he once was has disappeared into thin air. It was he who was left behind, and he who was left alone walked the path of suffering.

There are currently two female protagonists, none of whom are better than Frances (original) and Alice Protagonist issue (Jiang Feng may be a supporting character, but the first two and a half chapters are all written with him as the protagonist) ("Jiang Feng" is a supporting character with only a short introduction) (Pamela is the protagonist, and the rest is his story): Original owner Jiang Feng (body died, soul existed, and later the soul was crushed by the consciousness of a suspected strange world) (predecessor) (ordinary world) Soul Penetration "Jiang Feng" (both body and soul died) (predecessor, the body was occupied by the previous Jiang Feng) (weird world) Fetal wear? Aboriginal? Pamela (physically normal, the article says that Jiang Feng's soul is broken and he has lost most of his memory, which is equivalent to death, and now he has a new consciousness) (present) (jobless world) Unless the author makes magical changes or patches, there will be a bunch of original works Alice's mother and Rudeus' mother, Rudeus's maid, Kyrennu, Rudeus's father's harem, Sylphy, Rocky... (The harem of the divine eagle, the prostitute, the supporting harem) Not to mention that the original work was disappointing, the author himself was also disappointed. Describes the servants in the house being overtaken by the housekeeper (almost all of them are girls with animal ears) Some butlers want to surpass Francis. The protagonist only kills the last one. The previous ones are just beaten and thrown out. Rudeus stared at Francis's chest and buttocks (both were clothed), but nothing happened to him. Rudeus knows the world of Sword Art Online, and knows Honzina's nickname, and asks the protagonist to defeat her (the strategy is for heavy sluts, greens, and fake WRQs, and does not target leaky girls. The same goes for other characters in Sword Art Online. After all, Asuna is not the only one who has a compendium) (This can only be modified from the original text) I tried to write as accurately as possible (although it doesn't matter whether they accept it or not, after all, the author wrote about appearance in detail), leaving out Julie (Archer) (not good-looking, with freckles on her face, ordinary), Maeve (the receptionist when registering as an adventurer) (not exquisite, but pretty) That's about it? I only remember these few now The plot is not bad, and it should still be very enjoyable. Overall, it will be good if these changes are made. I hope to collect them all as much as possible, and hope that Jiang Feng's memory will not be restored, otherwise it will be another poisonous point.

I haven't read many jobless reincarnation novels, but I think this one must be a top-notch one. Whether it's the emotions or the plot, the author has a very delicate touch. It's not like those popular novels. It can be seen that the author, a newcomer, has written it very carefully. I personally like this book very much. If this book can maintain such quality and complete it successfully, I think this book will be regarded as the top of the pyramid of jobless novels in recent years. The plot is on the slow side, the harem is oriented, and the character descriptions are not broken so far. The original characters are all well grasped. The protagonist is not perfect and invincible at the beginning, but is slowly growing up. The author has also laid the foundation for these things. I will give it a five-star rating @ 13 Come on! ! ! [Eat melon]

I've never read Jobless Tensei, and this is my first time reading a fanfic. The senses are good and the descriptions are smooth and delicate, especially the scenes. The plot is interlocking and interesting, and the suspense is left just right. It's a bit funny that the protagonist is dying again and again at the beginning. Squat here and see if it will explode.

Let me explain. I ended up deleting the book review and reposting it. In fact, as a friend, I read the author's book from the beginning But my evaluation at the time was that it was too bland and bitter. The author contacted several friends, and they all got the same answer. Then he didn't know why he went crazy, and thought of a combination of weirdness and animation. In fact, in my opinion, it would be better to slightly change the previous title. Let's talk about the reason for giving it five stars. His writing is very good. But good writing is one thing, but plot is another. This may be easier to accept for some people who have seen Jobless Reincarnation, but it is actually not very friendly to people who have not seen Jobless Reincarnation. Because he has written the jobless reincarnation into the main world, and the pace is a bit slow. Even if you have a good grasp of emotional scenes, what's the use? Do you write everyday fiction? It can only be said that this is a mistake that the author, as a newcomer, made as a newcomer. This is the disadvantage. Let's talk about the advantages. In fact, if you like slow-paced and daily light novels, you can read it. The author's shaping of the characters is actually pretty good. At first, the author just wanted to write about two characters, Francis and Alice, but he finally decided to open the Crystal Palace, so I can only say good luck. The author might consider a daily light novel for his next book, huh? This might be better, right? (According to the author, the heroines include Alice, Francis, Asuna, and Rocky [wandering around] Eriyi Also, Gouha plans to write the weirdness into the real world of Sword Art Online TM and add a yandere to make that world completely crazy) The book is still very good, I hope the author can continue to work hard. Also, I want to be a long commentator. Finally, when will the author treat me to dinner? Don't refuse, I've paid so much for you [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] @

The writing is delicate, the character descriptions are just right, and the beginning is very good. I just wish the pace could be faster.

I like anime because I can see things in it that I have never had before, and I can also see the joys and sorrows of life in it, but... Not every anime has a happy ending, so I like reading second-generation novels because it allows me to see different endings, interactions, different characters, and personalities. I like the anime Jobless Reincarnation very much, and I also like Alice. Thank you to the author for this My love for the second dimension allows me to see such a work in my life. Although it may not be as good as the original work, it has a gradual process in terms of growth, a sweet love in terms of emotions, and a feeling of brothers like brothers in terms of friendship. I am willing to give this work the title of the best among the fanfics I have read. Thank you again, and I hope not to be a eunuch.

What's going on? It's been blocked.

It's a good source of food. I've been looking for a jobless book for a long time, and I finally found one that I like. It's a variety comic (even the copies are all copies I haven't read...). The writing style of this book has a slightly youthful and youthful feel. Overall, it's very good. I just ask the author to give more love to Alice. Alice is so cute, Elmen🙏🙏🙏

A bit: pretty good-looking Cons: New book, very few Summary: Raise more meat

It's good to watch. It doesn't have any bad points so far. It's very enjoyable. I hope it will be updated more often so that the plot can be pushed quickly. According to the author's writing, the plot should be based on the anime. The anime is only in its second season, but there are still a lot of plots. So the author doesn't have to be afraid. Improve the progress of the plot. If you really want to write it, make a transition to other worlds. Come on

It is rare to see articles related to jobless reincarnation. It is very interesting. The writing style is delicate and smooth, the rhythm is compact, and very interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard and have a bright future.

It looks good, but there are too few. It seems that no poisonous spots have been found, and it is most likely to be in the harem [laughter]

How should I put it, the plot's conception, development, and delicate language are all very good. I personally don't like reading [Harem] very much, but I can accept this one. But the most unacceptable thing is that in the original work, Rudy's official wife Alice was taken away, which is very sad☹️(I want to see Rudy and Alice's sweets)

The writing is good, keep up the good work

The content seems okay, but does the protagonist have amnesia now? Will you get your memory back later?

Awesome, Oh God! Why is there such a great work but the author can't update it 10 times a day! It's so "lazy"! What kind of "laziness" is this! The brain is shaking~

What happened? Why is it gone?

Nothing poisonous As long as it doesn't explode That is the best grass

There are a lot of pits dug at the beginning, and it's a bit confusing when watching it, but the jobless world currently doesn't have any poisonous points. The heroine doesn't accept them all without brains, and she doesn't unreasonably oppose the male protagonist. And the time-traveling part of the world currently seems to be soul traveling (maybe other worlds don't accept female protagonists), and there are no poisonous points.

The so-called love is friendship, passion, and commitment. It means that the feelings between each other have deepened under the common hardships in the external environment. Rudy and Alice, who have fulfilled their friendship, passion and commitment, are about to enter a period of shared adversity. Do you also think of the taste of love when you were a student?

I wasn't scared at first. I hid in bed and shivered. I'm giving this strong benefit to everyone! ! ! ! The author's writing style is delicate and the characters are described in great detail. Squat in the front row! ! ! Such a good book deserves more people to read it! ! ! Strong Amway to everyone! ! ! !

It's very, very, very beautiful, the plot is very attractive, it's simply a masterpiece! ! ! I hope there will be more updates! ! ! ! ! [Blows a kiss] Highly recommended! ! [Sending Hearts]

The plot is non-toxic, and the relationship with the two female protagonists is also good. I hope you can watch them all [Love]

The fighting scenes are very smooth and detailed, I love them. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good, and the descriptions are very artistic. I look forward to the development of the plot later.

Great, jobless fan. Wuhu takes off.

Very good, it feels like an invincible flow

Oh, fresh and delicious. I like it very much.

Not bad, five-star praise

Very good, nothing toxic.